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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
hi friends here the next part,any mistakes excuse me

part-18:

after 3 days

arrangements are going in a swing in both the house,ishu is trying her level best to talk with her appa,but everything went in vain
in delhi
raman(st):why they are making alot of arrangements from 3days is their any festival on the way
by thinking he goes to daadi,"daadi kuch festival ane vala hi kya?bahuth arrangements kar rahi hu aap sab log,u decorated the house very well😊
daadi:ha raman a very big function😛
raman:function?u didnt informed me❓
what function
daadi:ur marriage😃
raman:was in hell shock,what? he shouts😲
daadi:rubbing her ears why r u shouting is their any hearing problem for u,u r repeating the same question,iam saying tomorrow is ur marriage😆
raman:but u didnt informed me?😡
daadi:u said me know that whomever i will show u will marry that girl,still 3days left for amonth,(our deal),she smiles😆
raman:he was trapped in his own plan,he leaves from their as nothing was left to speak😃
in his room talking to himself,daadi u made a clever planning but i wont give up
he tries a lot for getting ishu's number,finally he gets the number from toshiji in the evening
he calls her
ishu:lifts the call saying hello
raman:unintentionally remains silent for a min,listening to her voice by listening hello from her again,he says iam raman kumar bhalla
ishu:so what i have to do,to say ur name u called me?😡
raman:(st):how proud she is,she doesnt know how to talk
r ishitha iyer?😡
ishu:yes
raman:iam the person with whom ur appa fixed ur marriage
ishu:was silent now,
raman:i called u to say iam not interested to marry u,so u please cancel this marriage,we are not made for each by saying he cuts the call
ishu:feels happy,now i will tell to appa that person is not interested to marry me,then i wont go anywhere away from my appa,she is about to enter his room
appa:madhu if this time the marriage fails by ishu or someone my heart was not stong to bear.
amma:vishwa u dont talk like this everything will go well
ishu:listening to their talk leaves to her room,(st) appa how can i marry a person who doesnt want to get married with me,but if anything happens to u i cant live,i will marry him whatever may be my future
next day:
raman:was waiting for the news of breaking the marriage,but their is no news
raman:after telling her that iam not interested to marry her ,still how can she is ready for marriage,she is also money minded its clearly understanding,i will tell to daadi that i wont marry her
daadi:was working without wasting a min,she was fully involved in marriage arrangements,she was very happy as she is getting the girl whom she liked,she was very happy that atlast her sweet raman was going to marry,she suddenly faints,seeing her raman rushes to her screaming daadi
doctor checks her
everyone are surrounded at her bed with tension in their eyes,raman was sitting beside her
doctor:she is fine,because of working continuously in this age she fainted with weakness,but be careful she should not get excited at any cost in any matter,by saying he leaves with romi
bhalla:ma,we all here to do arrangements,then why r u working
daadi:shut up prakash,its my potha marriage,if i wont work who will work,iam happy my raman listened to me and getting married,i can die now happily
raman:puts his finger on daadi's lips and says,no daadi u dont talk in this manner,i cant live without u,
daadi:okok now its not time to get emotional,we have to go brde's place
they all leaves to mumbai as marriage is in night
in car:
mihir:daadi did u shown bhabi's photo to bhai,by saying he smiles at raman
daadi:oh,mihir i forgot about it,by saying she takes the photo from her bag
raman:gets irked about the topic and he glares at mihir
daadi:raman look at this photo,she is very beautiful
raman:ok then keep it with u or else u marry her
daadi:laughs at his anger and says badmash ek bar dekho thumhara bibi ka chahra,abi se sharam athe tho badh me kya hojayenga thumko
raman:glares at daadi for her comment,while others laughs at him
daadi:ok now u see the photo by saying she turns his heard towards the photo
raman:was in hell shock seeing ishu's photo (st) i saw this girl 2times before,what is this iam going to marry this girl?
romi:bhai,u said no,no to see bhabi's photo but now u r staring at her photo for a long time,what will u do if u really see her

in mumbai
vandu:bala why r u silent,u r looking sad,what happened is anything wrong in hospital?
bala:how can u people forget ishu's birthday,today is her bd but u all are silent,every year u used to celebrate her bd in a very grand manner even it is with in the family,but today u atleast not wishing her,
vandu:was silent
bala:ok u do whatever u want but i wont keep quiet,i will celebrate her bd ,by saying he walks towards ishu's room
vandu:holds bala's hand which makes him to look at her,bala what r u thinking about me?how can we forget ishu's bd,we know today is her bd
bala:then why r u silent atleast we two will celebrate her bd
vandu:it will only increase her pain bala,u know about her only from 2years but i know about her from her childhood,we are nothing to her,our wishes doesnt bring penny of smile on her face,our love is nothing to her infront of appa and his love,others cant understand their bonding,my appa is a busy person with his businesses,conferences,meetings,but he never left house for atleast oneday,he used to return the same day because they cant live without seeing or sharing each others day even for a day,she shares her happiness,sadness only with appa,if we wish her ,then she recollects all her past days with appa,it only gives more grief to my ishu,please bala u dont do anything which hurts more,i cant see my sister in more pain,iam crying silently bala,by saying she hugs him and cries
bala:sorry vandu,unnecessarily i made u to cry,he wipes her tears
in ishu's room
ishu:holding appa's photo,appa how can u forget ur daughter's bd,ur ishu's bd,i broken ur heart know appa?,i dont know how i can live without u,she cries reminscing her pastdays with appa

shall i continue reply must

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
wow... dat ws awesome... wat kind of ques is that... do continue yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
nice update 👏
please do continue
will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
pls contnue yar...
is the tym to stop updte...
pls updte soon...

frnkly i dnt lik emotnal parts bt in dis updte im lovng thm...

contnue nd comp emotnal drama...nd want to see ishra mariage...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
OF COURSE you should continue!😊

This is going so well... and i love that you do such long updates!

So Raman knows now, but neither are happy... can't wait for ISHRA to start falling in love...😉

If you do PMs, do PM me when you update, that would be terrific!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
You story is new one, loved it, good writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
here is the next part

part-19
in the marriage hall
bhalla family arrives
daadi:introduces everyone of her family to iyers,raman was in shock by learning that vishwa was his FIL,she goes to ishu's room
ishu was drapped in yellow and marron color kanchivaram saree with heavy jewellery looking gorgeous but her eyes are filled with sadness which are clearly witnessing by daadi
ishu:seeing daadi,hugs her and cries
daadi:wipes her tears
ishu:how r u here daadi?
daadi:u r going to marry my grandson,vishwa didnt said to u,ok u dont worry,i will take care of u,he is very good and sweet,u will be happy with him,u people are made for each other
ishu:recollects the words which raman said was entirely contradictory to daadi's words
daadi:introduces every member of her family to ishu
everyone comes to mandap and all rituals are started
ishu:doesnt looks at anyone ,even if she looks,her eyes cant see anyone as they are completely filled with tears,by past few days only those tears are accompanying her,everytime they are coming out to reduce her pain atleast to some extent,raman comes and sits at her opposite,it was the ishu's first sight of seeing raman,on the other side raman was raging as she didnt listend his words,but for his daadi's hapiness he is marrying her
appa:cleans ramans feet and places ishu's hand in his hand and pandit pours water in their hands,pandit announces that kanyadanam was completed,raman ties mangalsutra and applies sindoor in ishu's maang and he completes all other rituals with ishu
soon all other rituals are also completed,everyone are getting ready for bidai
in bidai
amma,vandu and bala are silent,appa is talking with bhalla far away from ishu,ishu is not caring for anyone,she has still a hope that atleast in her bidai,her appa may forgive her but this too went in vain
suddenly ishu rushes to her room without caring anyone around her,she takes appa's photo and hugs it,she cries saying, appa i cant hug u,but u cant stop me hugging ur photo,i will also wait how long u will be far from me,while appa standing outside the room,listening to her words,she continues saying with her teary voice,appa u take care of urself,bye appa,now ur outsider leaving u and ur house,now u stay happily appa,at outside her appa was unable to contol his grief and tears leaves from their,daadi,toshi,vandu comes to her room,listening to their footsteps she keeps the photo aside and wipes her tears fastly
everyone wishes each other at final and bhallas leave taking ishitha with them
vandu:hugs bala and cries,bala ishu is leaving us,she is not at all happy bala,i dont know how she can stay away from us especially appa
amma:rushes to her room with tears in her eyes

in delhi:
ishu:enters into bhallas house and completes all the rituals,before leaving to her room,
daadi:stops holding ishus hand and says ishu iam ur daadi,u dont forget that,its ur house,u can live here as u like,u wont have any restrictions from anyone in this house,if anyone hurts u ,u inform me i will see their end
raman:gets irked as daadi is giving much importance to ishu than to him
in ishra room(finally)
ishu enters the room,raman drags her,holding her neck tightly he pins her to the wall with rage ,and continuous,how u can dare to marry me,i clearly informed u that iam not interested to marry u,then why u didnt stoppedd the marriage
ishu:she was already in pain,she looses her temper with his behavior and she pulls his hand away from her and shouts iam also not interested to marry u,why cant u inform the same to ur family to break the marriage,why u married me
raman:because i cant hurt my daadi&my family
ishu:i too married u because i cant hurt my appa and i too had a family like u
raman:drags her to the drawing room which was a partition of his room and throws her on the sofa,u will pay for ur mistake i will show u the hell in this room,by saying he shuts that door
ishu:sits on the sofa and cries saying ,appa see what u did,u always said that u will get the best for me,but today u r wrong,he is not a good person,for a small mistake u gave me a life long punishment,she cries the entire night and falls asleep without knowing herslef
in the morning
ishu is still sleeping
raman:wakes up and goes to freshup,meanwhile ishu wakes up,she comes to bedroom and takes her suitcase out and she spreads all dresses entire the bed thinking the past moments with her appa
fb:
ishu:appa,appa...please come fast na?
appa:coming to her room kya hogaya ishu?isa kyo shoor rahi hu,by saying he looks at her while she was sitting beside the bed and she covered her entire bed with many dresses
vandu,amma,bala also follows appa listening to ishu's raised voice
appa:ishu yeh sab kya hi?
its very late we have to reach the farmhouse very soon
amma:ishu what u did,u always gives me more work
ishu:appa this is all because of u,u brought entire shop for my birthday,which dress i have to wear,all dresses are looking pretty,i cant wear all dresses at a time
appa:laughs at her confusion and says ok i will select the best from these,he picks a blue dress for her and hands it to her
ishu:wow u r perfect,u always selects best for me,by saying she kisses her appa
vandu:keeping a puppy face,appa for my bd u will get only one dress but for her u brought entire shopping mall
ishu:oh murga dekho eh akka firse shuru kiya uska drama,hello mam u go and check once ur room
vandu:what?why?
ishu:drags her to her room,they enters the room
vandu:looks at her bed and she holds her head and says ishu get me some water orelse i will be fainted
ishu:ha stop ur another drama
vandu:these many sarees for me on ur bd?
ishu:today is my bd?so,their should not be anyones bad eye on me,so appa brought all this for u
vandu:keeps an angry face and says u r saying my eyes are bad,i wont leave u today,they starts their tom and jerry race
appa:holds vandu and says,vandu ishu asked me to get all these for u,she said to me,whatever i gets for her the same should be brought for u,and u take these papers,
vandu:with teary eyes what is this appa
appa:i buyed two villas on both ur names
vandu:but today is ishu's bd not mine,u already gave me gift on ur bd
appa:its ur sister order,u ask her
vandu:hugs ishu with tears,why ishu
ishu:akka whatever may be u have to get first all the things from appa before my turn,she moves apart from her and says if u end the drama we will reach the venue or else i have to celebrate my bd in next year
vandu:pulls her holding ishu's ear and says happy bd ishu they all hugs happily shouting happy bd to our pretty ishu
...
ishu coming out from flashback takes the dress which her appa selected for her
raman:comes to the room and gets irked looking at the bed,yeh pagal thumkya kar rahi hu?
yeh mera bed nikaal thumhara cheeze yaha se
ishu:meri naam pagal nahi hi,"ishitha"and mind ur language,show some deceny if u have
raman:gets angry with her words,he comes to near the bed and throws all her dresses on the floor
ishu:gets tears by seeing that,she silently starts picking them,meanwhile daadi comes calling her
daadi:ishitha!why all ur clothes are on the floor
raman:looks at ishu
ishu:she knows that daadi loves raman very much,so not to lower him infront of daadi,says nothing daadi while picking the suitcase all clothes are fallen
daadi:u keep ur clothes in ur wardrobe,everything in this house is urs,u r DIL of this house
raman:seriously looks at ishu ,signaling not to keep her clothes in his wardrobe,he gets a call and leaves to the office
daadi:can understand what happened in the room,because she know they both married reluctantly,but she feels happy when ishitha covered ramans mistake,because of this nature only she selected ishu for raman,coming out from her thoughts,ishitha u get ready fast u have to do puja as it is ur fast day in ur sasural house,by saying she leaves
after half-n-hr
ishu:wearing a pink color chudidhar with one side chunni comes to hall
toshiji:puttar why r u wearing dress,u have to wear saree,u r married
daadi:oh toshi,stop ur advice,what r u wearing then,u married and u gave birth to 3children,dont act over samrt
toshiji:u r not understanding what iam saying mummiji,they are madrasi log hi na,after marriage they will wear only sarees,her mother only said to me
daadi:let it be u keep quiet
toshiji:(st):she always shuts my mouth,everything should be in her control,yeh bhallaji,never supports me,what can i do if mother and soon are same,
ishu:mmummiji,actually till now i didnt buyed sarees,i used to wear only dresses
daadi:cuts ishita's words and says,ishitha i said to u no need to change in any matter because of others,u can stay like before,she gives an angrily look at toshi and continues so u know cooking?or else i will make u to learn
ishu:i learnt cooking for my appa's happiness,he used to go various states for business meetings,and he used to tell about the various dishes he tasted in those states,he used to plead amma to cook those dishes,but amma used to prepare only chennai dishes,to make my appa happy i used to cook those dishes untill the taste of the dish is good,daadi looks tears in her eyes while ishu narrating the story how she learnt cooking
daadi:ok u prepare some punjabi dishes which u know
ishu:saying ok starts walking towards kitchen
toshi:but mummiji raman
daadi:cuts her words and says toshi i want some peace
toshi:with angry voice ok mummiji iam going ,by saying she leaves
daadI:hmm now its very peaceful
ishu:smiles looking at daadi,she understands what her mummiji wants to say

you dont blash me,iam not trying to show raman as villan,he will soon turn soft towards ishu ,after 2parts this track will be ended

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
only 1 part for the day.. :( plz post other part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
u made me eid dis part...
i really felt bad fr ishu...

i knw raman's angr...it reaches peaks...

pls yar updte 2 parts until emntnal trck...aftr tht its up2 u...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
nice update
feeling bad for ishu 😭
update the next part soon will be waiting

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