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JayashreeR thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
nice update 👏
will be waiting for next part 👍🏼
please do continue

one request please update index
Edited by jayashreeraju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
wow... dis story is awesome.. am completely in love with this... no probs for me but do continue soon... as soon as possible..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Very nice story..please update it soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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index

introduction of iyers ...page1
introduction of bhallas...page1
part1...page1
part2...page1
part3...page2
part4...page2
part5...page3
part6...page3
part7...page4
part8...page4
part9...page5
part10...page5
part11...page6
part12...page6
part13 ramans flashback ...page7
part14 raman agreeing to get married...page8
part15...page8
part16...page9
part17...page9
part18...page9
part19...page10
part20..page11
part21(a)...page12
part21(b)...page12
Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Terrific update, wonderful job!👍🏼

Ready for the emotional part since ISHRA moments will be worth it.

Can't wait for your next update!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
part -13 ramans flashback

part-13
after 2 days
vandu:comes to appa's house saying appa,ishu results were outed😃
ishu:jumps from sofa and says what?when?😲
vandu:before an hr,ur friend informed me😉
ishu:ok how many subjects?😲
vandu:what how many?😕
ishu:how many subjects i passed😉
vandu:she laughs and says mam u passed ur degree😆
ishu:what? i passed ,wow ishu u improved alot keep it up,by saying she pats her shoulder😉
vandu:shut up ur mouth,ur total percentage in degree is 50%😡
ishu:for u it may be less but for me its more than enough😃
vandu:its waste to make efforts to change u😡,listen tomorrow is ur graduation day
ishu:who asked u to change me,now u understand know keep quiet😉
appa:ishu atleast for this,i will attend this fn of ur college😊
ishu:appa iam sorry,i know u always feels bad for not attending any fns of mine in school or college,because of me akka also supressed her feelings and she never asked u to attend atleast for her fns,but u try to understand appa i need privacy,u r very famous business man in mumbai😔
appa:if ur husband is also a very well known person to this world,then u will ask him not to reveal ur identity😒
ishu:sure appa,u only said know i will get an understanding,loving,caring husband,😛
appa:yes ishu u will get a husband like lord ram,ok iam going its late for me😊
ishu:byee appa
appa(st):ur husband will be very lucky to get u,my sihu is unique in this world,many girls wants to show up,they rushes in all ways to get fame,but u r different,iam sure he loves u more than me😊


in delhi:
daadi:in hall,raman i want to talk to u
raman:bolo na daadi,why r u asking permission
daadi:from a broker i gor few marriage proposals,u select some photos from it
raman:what?i cant understand what u r saying😲
daadi:iam asking u to marry,all men in our family with ur age are married,but u still alone😔
raman:screams,as iam obeying all ur orders,u dont think i will be ready to this also,i wont marry,do whatever u wamt,its my final decision,if u once again force me about marriage i wont stay here,he leaves throwing files which was in his hands😡
in ramans room:
raman standing near window angrily lost in thoughts
flashback starts moving in front of his eyes

in raman's college days
ashok is his best friend,he always helped him in everyway
one day raman going to his college in his bike sees shagun,she is asking lift to someone as she is getting late to college,raman gives lift to her with first look he started liking her,he drops her at her college which was beside their college,ashok notices raman dropping shagun,from that day he used to meet shagun he started loving her,he shares same with ashok,
ashok also encourages him to tell shagun about his love
atlast raman proposes her and she to accepts.after completing his graduation he informs about his love to his family,everyone agrees for it but daadi asks raman to bring shagun to their house for once before saying yes to their marriage,raman agrees and brings shagun to their house,her greedy eyes at first falls on their mansion,she greets everyone but her eyes are roaming entire house
daadi:notices her cunning nature,she tells the same about to bhalla,"bhalla she is not good for raman ,she cant be a good life partner to my raman,my raman life will be in hell if he marries her😔
bhalla:thinks for a while,ma says everything correctly,she can easily identify good and bad,i have lots of trust on my ma i cant agree this marriage to keep my raman's life in stake
ma ok i will say no to raman😔
bhalla with raman:raman that girl is not good for u, we wont agree u to marry her,raman argues with him,but bhalla sticks to his words😡,
raman comes out from his house as they r not agreeing to marry her,bhalla gets angry on raman and stops talking to him
raman starts living in mihir house,
mihir used to update all details about raman to daadi
one day:
daadi gets to know that raman was going to marry shagun the next day by mihir
daadi:mihir, u know till now i selected best for my raman,but she is not good person i sensed it clearly from her behavior,but see my raman left us for that dirty woman,if she was really good then when raman left us she would have asked raman to get back to his family but she didnt do a good woman never tries to separate a person from his family😔
mihir:i know daadi,but raman is not believing us know?what can we do?😭
daadi:we have to show shaguns true colors to raman,by saying they starts spying about shagun inn their college,in their area,they learned by her friend she was already engaged to ashok,daadi knows about ashok as he is ramans best friend,she rages by learning that ashok was deceiving her raman,she leaves with mihir to confront ashok about the same,at the entrance of ashok house they are in hell shock seeing ashok kissing shagun and hugging her,they both hides near the door,
daadi:mihir u record everything in ur phone
ashok and shagun's conversation:
mihir starts recording:
shagun:hugging ashok says,"ashok u asked me to marry raman so that we can get his property but he left his family for marrying me,he is taking shelter in mihir's house,then why to marry him?
ashok:i know very well about his family darling,they love him very much especially his daadi,she cant live without him at any cost,according to my guess their might be hot discussions to bring raman back,and raman will go back only with u,at any moment they can ask him to return back,already i provoked him to marry u fast,so tomorrow he is marrying u,poor raman he doesnt know our real intentions,from next day he will be ur petdog,whatever u say he will listen,but we should get his property asap,i cant live without u for more days darling
shagun:kissing him says i too darling
daadi and mihir leaves without falling in their eyes
in their home:
daadi:she is fuming with anger remembering their discussion😡
mihir:daadi u have to be cool,ur bp will increase😭
daadi:how can i be cool mihir,u listened everything what that bitch said about my raman,she cries saying but my raman left for that bloody woman,i dont what will happen to him if he marries her,they are ditching him,and that bloody bugger ashok he is cheating his friend my raman always helped him😡
mihir:consoling daadi,daadi whatever happened today is for our good,now raman will realise his mistake he can judge good and bad easily,tomorrow we will break his marriage u dont worry ur old raman will be back
next day:
raman:in temple he is organising all preparations by himself as shagun was getting ready in her house
raman sees daadi and turns his face because his daadi whom he loved most didnt supported for his love😡
daadi:turning him towards her says,raman u please listen to me u dont marry that bitch😡
raman:screams saying daadi she is going to be my wife u dont use vulgar language on her,if it would be someone in ur place,i dont know what i would have done😡
mihir:shouts at raman as he is yelling at daadi,he says,stop it raman what daadi said is 100% correct,ur eyes are closed with love,but she is cheating u ,she is not loving u as u r doing,its all ashok and her drama😡
raman:why r u bringing ashok in middle,what happened to all u people,why r u opposing her,u please leave now, iam going to get married😡
mihir:ayyo raman u r foolish, u see this video then u will understand why we are refraining u😡
raman:pulls the phone from him and says,what was their in this video,he looks into the video,he was in hell shocked seeing the photos of their engagement and video what they talked and how intimate they are,tears starts flowing from his eyes,at that moment he felt that his heart was broken into pieces😭,he was in rage for their deception😡
meanwhile shagun and ashok reaches temple they are surprised to see both daadi and mihir in temple
shagun:comes near to raman with innocent face and keeps her hand on his shoulder saying with her sweet coated words,see raman i said know soon ur family wll agree me😃
raman:fuming with anger,he screams saying nikaal thumhara hath mera kande se,he turns to other side and says dont dare to touch me😡
shagun:confusingly holds his chin and asks,what happened raman u r sounding different😲
raman:pushes her and shows her the video😡
shagun:was in hell shock she tries to deceive him again saying,no raman this is fake,ur daadi did it intentionally it was created one ,she is not liking me from the starting,u dont believe her she is bad woman😭
raman:losses his temper and slaps her hardly saying dont dare u again to accuse my daadi😡
ashok:comes in b/w to save shagun
raman:i treated u as my best friend but u ditched me behind ,ur the blackspt for friendship u used this lady for money sake,if u asked me i would have thrown u as much money as u asked,he starts hitting ashok hardly,finally mihir rushes to stop him or else raman may kill both in anger😡
mr.bhalla:brings police and gets them arrested
later👏
raman:was repenting very much about his bad behavior towards his family😭
daadi:thought that raman starts thinking wisely about the world,but different thing happened away from her guess
he started hating all woman thinking they only love money fame nt relations his hatred resulted in keeping himself away from his sister thinking that she is also a woman,he stopped doing much friendship with anyone,but mihir was always his friend and bhai
he never tried to think again about his assumption about woman and never tried to combine his broken heart pieces😔
later shagun and ashok to tried to ditch him but raman always gave them perfect punches
daadi thinks to raman to get married but suddenly raman announces that he wants to pursue MBA,
mr.bhalla:agrees to raman so that he can get time to forget his bitter memories
raman:pursues double MBA in londan and returns India,now he was a great business man in India,in business he always takes perfect decision
daadi:observes change in attitude of raman,he always talks about business ,he now know only about business,she observes his hatred towards woman even his sister,when mr bhalla asked raman to marry he escapes by saying his desire to start his business in america,before leaving to US he arranges a drinking party for him and mihir,in inebriate state he blurts out his hatred towards woman,he declares that he wont marry any girl,next early morning he lefted to US,later mihir informs to his family about what raman said to him
in three years daadi,bhalla and toshiji tried to make him understand about his miss assumptions but he never gave them a chance he used to cut the calls,

i doesnt want to involve these bloody shagun,ashok,param,suraj in my story,so i used this shagun and ashok characters only in fb,and in my future parts these characters are never involved





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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update 👍🏼
will be waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Suprb...
Dnt involve those idiots...
Cant tak thm...
Nice part..
Im alwys faling in lov wid dis stry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hai friends here is the next part

part 14 -raman agreeing to marry

raman:comes out from his flashback listening to some shoutings from hall and goes to see
romi:daadi where r u going,what r u doing please listen to me,u cant go living me alone😭
daadi:when their is no respect to me or to my words in this house i cant stay here,today i understood only upbringing children and grand children is our duty in return they cant do even small things in return to make their elders happy😡
bhalla:if he wont listen to u,whats our mistake why r u punishing us,please ma listen to me where will u go in this age?😭
toshiji:mummiji u too dont take wrong decisions in anger,u r our guide,without u i cant maintain this house,without ur taunts i cant do my work properly😛
daadi:there are many oldage homes for people like me who has no love towards them,i will live my rest of life there only,in future also no one should not come to see me,i did whatever he asked me,i supported him,i hided all his mistakes,i pampared him alot than my children,today😡
he forgot everything iam leaving,as he decided he wont marry😡,she is about to keep her foot out,a voice stops her
raman:daadi listen to me their is no need to go anywhere
daadi:when u are not listening to me who could u think that i will listen to u😡
raman:ha daadi,iam ready to marry😭
daadi:turns to look him,while the others are also hell shock
throwing her bag she runs to raman ans asks r u saying true?
can i trust u?😆
raman:ha iam saying iam ready to marry but on one condition😉
daadi:what is ur condition?😡
raman:i will come wherever u ask me to come,i will do whatever u say,i will marry whomever the girl u show,but it has to be done in this month only,if u fail to get me married in this month u should never bring the topic again😉
everyone are in hell shock for his counter prank😲
daadi:thinks for a while and says ok,but u promise me that u will keep ur words which u said now
raman:smiles sarcastically and promises her,they both hugs😉😉
daadi:iam happy raman😃
raman(st)i know ur blackmailing very well,because of this only i kept this condition,u forgot one thing iam raman kumar bhalla,i wont let any proposal to be happened
he smirks😉
daadi(st):i know about u very well raman,iam the one who upbrought u,my name is not kowsalya if i wont get u married in this month😉
raman:breaking their hug says,daadi now u go and take rest u and everyone did lots of drama😊,now u wonned and iam getting late to office bye
he leaves
everyone laughs😃😃
mr.bhalla:maa will it can be done in this month😕
daadi:u leave everything to me and start searching for good proposals😊
in mumbai:
ishu:was with mihika and karthik in their meeting spot chatting about how convocation ended
mihika:akka whats ur next plan u completed degree
karthik:completing degree is only a big deal for her,damn sure she wont prefer to study further😆
ishu:u r talking as if u were good in studies,first look at urself and then comment on me and u people have no other topics to talk😡
mihika:looks suddenly at ishu's wrist when she was talking pointing her finger to karthik,she screams saying akka where is ur bracelet
ishu:listening to the bracelet looks at her wrist without wasting a time,she along with mihika and karthik searches the entire area
karthik:akka u dont worry it will be somewhere i know its very precious for u,u once go and search in home
ishu:rushes to the car and drives to her home with tears in her eyes😭
madhu:ishu what happened u rlooking dull
ishu:doesnt answer to her amma and rushes to her room she searches each and every corner,she messes the entire room
everyone goes to her room
madhu:screams saying ishu,what r u doing u messed the entire room😡
ishu:sadly falls in the sofa and starts crying vigorously as she lost her bracelet which was very imp to her😭
appa:concernly goes to her and sits beside her,ishu lays her head on her appa's shoulder and starts crying,
appa:ishu please first stop crying what happened i cant see u in tears
ishu:hugs him and says while crying,appa i lost my bracelet somewhere😭
appa:wiping her tears by cupping her face,ishu u r crying for such a small thing,he takes his mobile and calls to his known jewellery shop and talks,iam sending u a design of bracelet along with 2 pics u have to prepare same bracelet,he cuts the call
ishu see with in aweek u will get the same type of bracelet
ishu:but appa that bracelet is with me since my childhood today i suddenly lost it iam not feeling good
about it appa
appa:consoles her and makes her to sleep,he covers her with bedsheet,and everyone comes out of room
amma:its really hinting bad vandu,till today ishu never cried in this way she says looking at ishu
vandu:amma nothing happens dont be sentimental it is a thing somewhere it might be if we search we will get it
appa:stands silently with tears in his eyes
amma:vishwa why r u sad
appa:i cnt see my ishu in tears for the firsttime she cried vigorously,i comforted her but iam also feeling bad about the loss of bracelet,she never taken away that bracelet from her hand i used to check her hand and if the bracelet became tight to her wrist i used to make it extended
she never taken away from her hand
bala:appa nothing wrong will happen,its late for u,vandu iam also going to hospital by saying they both leaves
vandu and amma looks at ishu who was sleeping but still tears streaming from her eyes
in bhallas house
ramans first marriage sitting😆
everyone likes the girl
raman:feels irked but still sits for his daadi's sake.the bride side people leaves saying that they will inform about their decision tomorrow
raman:at night calls the girl and says iam not interested to marry anyone,u say no to this proposal,if u still willing to marry me it will be hell with u and u should not say that i asked u people to say no to my family,he cuts the call😡
girl:she was in hell shock the way he talked to her,she directly goes and says to his father,papa i cant marry that person u say no to him😡
her father says the same to mr.bhalla
mr.bhalla:tells to daadi that the girl rejected to marry raman😭.while raman was with them
daadi:rages and says how dare to say no that to for my raman,its her bad luck,u see some other proposals😡
raman:daadi u go for sittings but i cant accompany u,i will marry whom u will show😛
daadi:ok raman u dont feel bad as that girl rejected the proposal
2weeks passes in the same manner
mihir:getting surprised why every girl is saying no to marry raman,he gets doubt on raman😕
daadi:she is still unable to forget ishu,she is thinking that she was his soulmate because of this no marriage proposal was fixing
bhalla:comes to his mother and asks,maa what r u pondering
daadi:bhalla,i said u only that girl can be raman's partner,because of this we are failing to confirm any proposal
bhalla:but how can we find that girl only with name,and raman gave us only one month time and already 2 weeks are wasted
daadi:iam also saying the same only 2 weeks are left u leave to mumbai with mihir and search each and every lane of mumbai,u appoint some men if needed but before completing these 2 weeks i want that girl to be married with raman
u leave now itself call mihir
mihir:raman,dont lie to me iam asking the same question since morning,u r the one who was spoiling the proposals?😡
raman:tired out with his nagging questions,he finally shouts yes iam the one who breaking all proposals but i wont spare u if u leak about this in the house😡
mihir:about to talk but he gets acall from bhalla,
mr.bhaalla:tells everything and ask him to come airport with in hr
mihir:listen raman daadi informed to uncle about a girl,daadi met her in some temple now uncle and iam going to search her,iam leaving to mumbai,now u better get ready for ur marriage
by saying mihir leaves😡
raman:laughs and talks to himself,even if u search for years with only name as hint u cant get that girl,poor daadi atlast i will be the winner of this game,by their searching the remaining 2 weeks will be passed😃😃
ishu:was chatting with vandu,bala and amma suddenly she gets a message displaying the name as "subbu"❓



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update 👍🏼
continue soon

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