Do 'Dil' Ek Jaan! Last part on page 16

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Hello everyone. 😊
Remember me? I am back with a story on IshRa after a long time. My last one was on Diwali. I hope you will shower your love on it like you always do on my works. Looking forward to your views, reviews and feedback.
It is just a teaser or if you want a prologue. It is not a short story just a two shots. The next part will be about how IshRa finally become - Do Dil ek Jaan😳😆

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Do "Dil" Ek Jaan


Do Jism errr dil Ek Jaan!!
Vandu and Mihika burst into laughter while Ishita wished that the ground would split and engulf her.
- Awww jeeju is so so cute. He looks like a hero and acts like one too.
Ishita mentally thanked God and her Akka for not revealing the other embarrassing thing in front of Mihika and heaved a sigh of relief when Mihika got an urgent call. Finally she was left with her Akka who was always an eye opener and a guide to her. Mihiku was her confident too ... her crazy friend who helped her to unleash her crazy side. She looked forward to both her sane and crazy sisters since they were always there to strike a balance in her life.
- Ishu when Bala told me about Raman and his friend's problem, I immediately understood who was the friend.
Vandu smiled when she saw her little sister blushed and smiled shyly.
Seriously her husband was one of a kind. How dare he broach such a topic with her jeeju!!
And jeeju gave him...a packet of condom to...to...move things forward between them!!
Ayyo Murugan!
And she, the dummy thought that the chemist sent that by mistake!

- You also love him right Ishu?
For how long will she keep hiding it? She finally decided to confess to her elder sister with whom she had shared all her joy, insecurities and pains.
- Yes I do Akka. I love Raman but I don't know how to tell him.
Vandu moved to her sister and hugged her expressing her happiness that her little sister has finally found the love and man of her life in Raman.
- Then forget everything! Embrace a new life with your husband. Raman loves you so much and it shows in his every demeanor and actions. Just like it shows in your every action and reaction. You two are just so similar! Go for it Ishita. Don't let anything or anybody comes between the two of you. You both deserve it.
- But Akka...
- Aren't you ready for...
- No Akka!! I mean...I am...but it is just that we haven't even confessed...I mean we haven't even said...you know...I love you to each other...
Ishita turned a deep shade of pink and Vandu smiled broadly to her. Holding her by her shoulders the elder sister exclaimed:
- Look at you Ishu! Go and tell him " I love you" if it is really needed. Marriage is all about giving body and soul to each other. Complete this sacred bond by giving it it's right due and place in your life Ishu...well...if you are read, that is.

Vandu walked away leaving her sister in deep reflection, tapping her shoulders for her amazing and sophisticated "brainwashing". Bala would be so proud of her. She and Bala had decided that it was time that they played a little intervention in these two novices' married life and put it on track.

Am I ready? Ishita didn't have to ponder much about the question. If she was not ready, would her body react like it did every time Raman and her would find themselves in an intimate position.
Flashbacks of them fighting for the remote and entangled in each others' embrace with her heart drumming at an alarming rate, or their rain dance which was more than a dance for her, for them, their "kuch Kuch hota" moment with his hands over her body making her experience the meaning of the expression "fire on ice"...the kiss on her cheek... The way his lips had lingered on her cheek and more importantly the look he had which conveyed much more that he wanted to show...or lately her dancing for him, in the confines of their home. If she was not ready would she be ready to dress skimpily and sexily for him? She was clearly vocal. She wanted to be sexy for her husband. Why?
If her in-laws didn't reach home "on time" , she wondered how that sexy encounter would have ended? The look he had when she had boldly pulled him to her with that walking stick... Ishita blushed and hid her face in her hands. Yes she was ready. Was he?
Ishita shut her eyes tightly but was unable to hide that smile. Obviously he was! Why would he want her in sexy clothes if he did not desire her? Why would he ask for advise from her jeeju and bring that thing home?

Vandu Akka was right, she concluded. It was time that they took that relationship forward and stop hiding behind Ruhi. Their relationship was for Ruhi of course but not entirely for her only. Her eyes drifted to her engagement ring. The ring which he had claimed days ago was sealing the life long deal!
"You cannot back away now. The deal is sealed". Ishita sighed! There was no backing away now as she had promised him. It was time to move forward, towards him, time to merge with him, in him and march together for a new beginning. After all it was a life long deal that they had bargained for.

From there, Ishita had made sure that Raman understood that she had understood. She would come every night and sleep on the other side of the bed without any excuse. He would smile and blush but would not say anything.
One week! Ishita huffed and puffed! Unbelievable! CEO and Best Asia Entrepreneur of the Year!
- Dummy of the Year!
She muttered under her breath, with her head buried in her pillow.
- Excuse me! You said something.
- Uh...no...I...
- Just talking to yourself? Paagalpan ka dowra again?
- Han! Jiska pati Itna Buddhu aur slow ho to koi bhi patni apni sanity kho jayega!

Ishita turned off the lights and pulled her quilt over her while an amused Raman looked at her back with a mischievous smile, blowing his own trumpet.
" Hmmm! Interesting! Madam wants things to gear up. That's why she is coming to me every night without any fuss...I am indeed impossible to resist!"

-Good night khumbkaran!
-Good night Boring Kumar!
Raman smiled with the resolution that as from the next day things would indeed gear up. Bala was right after all. No wife would come and say that she was ready for...
Ishita smiled despite herself. Raavan Kumar was purposely teasing her, she was sure of that. She had lived long enough with HIM to know that her husband was the most devious and wicked man on earth!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soon will b waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovelyy OS...IshRa are so adorable,confused and REAL unlike the show where they keep forgetting their basic nature every alternate day ...loved the cupid pair Bala and Vandu...Vandu is really sorted in her relationship and perfect person to guide her little novice sister...Ishita's silent hints and Raman's teasing avatar ...so cute ...so IshRa like😳

Loved the OS...cant wait for the 2nd part...waiting for the" Do dil ek jaan " or "Do jism ek jaan " part😳😉
Loved the flow of the OS ...u r such a natural writer dear...
Edited by _Deepika_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shreeja...
like puttar we all want straight to climax 🤣

will wait for full updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!
Did you intentionally replace the title to "do dil ek jaan"...wasn't it "Do Jism Ek jaan" that Raman was aiming for!😉😆

eagerly waiting for the next one with some action in it!☺️
Edited by Jyoe - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue/teaser updated. 😃
Next art will b ready on Subday if you ppl like what u have read so far!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

shreeja...

like puttar we all want straight to climax 🤣

will wait for full updt



🤣
Puttar is one of a kind. Kuch bhi nahi bola but is going straight in bed with condom in hands!!☺️
Read the teaser. The climax will b for tomoro. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: omshreejaanu



🤣
Puttar is one of a kind. Kuch bhi nahi bola but is going straight in bed with condom in hands!!☺️
Read the teaser. The climax will b for tomoro. 😆


aha ha ha ha ha ha ha


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoe

Loved it!

Did you intentionally replace the title to "do dil ek jaan"...wasn't it "Do Jism Ek jaan" that Raman was aiming for!😉😆

eagerly waiting for the next one with some action in it!☺️


Yes I did that purposely! 😆
Yes that was just a trailer, picture Abhi baaki hain!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!😳
waiting for next update😉

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