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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Cute..waiting for next..plss update soon

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _Deepika_
Lovelyy OS...IshRa are so adorable,confused and REAL unlike the show where they keep forgetting their basic nature every alternate day ...loved the cupid pair Bala and Vandu...Vandu is really sorted in her relationship and perfect person to guide her little novice sister...Ishita's silent hints and Raman's teasing avatar ...so cute ...so IshRa like😳

Loved the OS...cant wait for the 2nd part...waiting for the" Do dil ek jaan " or "Do jism ek jaan " part😳😉
Loved the flow of the OS ...u r such a natural writer dear...

Deepika!! Omg!! What a pleasant surprise! 🤗 Seeing here in itself is a huge thing. I am so happy! Missed u so much!

I will definitely update this tonight at latest. The plot is set just a bit busy to sit and write comfortably! See u

Thank u again😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: luks28
Loved it!😳
waiting for next update😉

Thanks😊

Wil, update soon. 😃

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

- Ishu when Bala told me about Raman and his friend's problem, I immediately understood who was the friend.

vandu akka is always smart in GM things... i think ishu n mihu should take some

tips from vandu akka

One week! Ishita huffed and puffed! Unbelievable! CEO and Best Asia Entrepreneur of the Year!

- Dummy of the Year

so true... n she is the dummiest wifey... 🤣

" Hmmm! Interesting! Madam wants things to gear up. That's why she is coming to me every night without any fuss...I am indeed impossible to resist!"

-Good night khumbkaran!

-Good night Boring Kumar!

shreeja im goin to be evil... updt sooon... maximum today 😆 😆 😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Nichuss
- Ishu when Bala told me about Raman and his friend's problem, I immediately understood who was the friend.
vandu akka is always smart in GM things... i think ishu n mihu should take some
tips from vandu akka

One week! Ishita huffed and puffed! Unbelievable! CEO and Best Asia Entrepreneur of the Year!
- Dummy of the Year

so true... n she is the dummiest wifey... 🤣

" Hmmm! Interesting! Madam wants things to gear up. That's why she is coming to me every night without any fuss...I am indeed impossible to resist!"

-Good night khumbkaran!
-Good night Boring Kumar!

shreeja im goin to be evil... updt sooon... maximum today 😆 😆 😆

U r cracking me so much! Can't stop laughing!

I am as evil as u! I think I will have to add a warning note for my next update coz I am as dummy as IshRa when it comes to romance writing!! Don't say I didn't warn u😉😉

I am updating this afternoon n will pm u first thing!😛😆

Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago

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ekta979

@ekta979

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

hey plz pm me too ... m waitng fr ur update ... luvd this os ... :)

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wow Osj...thats just so cute

In love with ur style of writing

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awww.. how cuteee! Lovely updateee! Ishu's blush... lol really wished if sucha scene cums up in yhm!

Enjoyed reading! Well is there a second part ? If yes, thn jaldi cont! Hehehehe