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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: aaminah123
For a second I was wondering what made you add chapter 1 here.

I had a brainwave that I need to do this. The title seems misleading. Should I edit it?

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aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

I had a brainwave that I need to do this. The title seems misleading. Should I edit it?

Yes, I think so.

How about paparazzi?

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#653

evn i dnt undrstnd y u pen it dwn bt its really nice...

it som hw divrtd the prev updte...

waitng fr 15b...

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Yes, I think so.

How about paparazzi?

Done.

Are we updating tonight?

PS I love Dance Basanti. The whole song in the next update. It just is so IshRa ish

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: shavi2311
evn i dnt undrstnd y u pen it dwn bt its really nice...
it som hw divrtd the prev updte...
waitng fr 15b...

Because I love the media and it's random stupidity. I honestly want to venture into what goes on besides what in mentioned in the chapters. The tweets, IG updates, spotting, media documentation because sometimes you need views other than first second and third.

I'll continue the Paparazzi part based on the response and on mood.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Done.

Are we updating tonight?

PS I love Dance Basanti. The whole song in the next update. It just is so IshRa ish

Not sure. I have to set the sequence in the right order before I pen it down.

Isn't it such a catchy song? I heard it on radio the first time and since then I became its fan. Yay! Super excited. Tell me you are updating it tonight. Okay thank you!

Also watch ed shareen's thinking out loud. I fell in love with the video-.

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malar3

@malar3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Wonderful written piece..it's jus like an original article in a paper..ur talented my gal..finally are ppl gonna read the paper and their brain bulb wil switch on and realise she is mrs Raman bhalla..waiting for next..hope ur finger is ok..take care

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#658

And I repeat, you are super talented.

When I'm reading a dance scene you make me visualize the steps effortlessly, when I read a gossip session of auntyjis I enjoy the spice they add, when I read their romantic scene you make me grin and when they tease each other I can't help but laugh like when ishita was dancing on om shanti I'm song and when I read the article, I couldn't help but admire the language, the crisp use of words and tone.

But this does not mean I wouldn't ask for chapter B.

Yes, I continue to demand.

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#659

hey kiara i am totally loved with meharbaan. loved ur way in which u portraing ishita raman nd ruhi relation nd especially ishra relation infront subbu. sorry not to comment regularly on story bt i am so lazy to comment bt seriously i am love with meharbaan. waiting for nxt part.