Undisclosed Desires|| An IshRa FF || Part 10 Page 58 03-July-20 - Page 36

Originally posted by: avni_19

Wowww! Awesum update! Loved it! Ishu's confusion regarding raman's behavior has been written beautiful... the hand holding scene was the best!

Cont soon... really wwonder if ishu remembers tht raman ws in the same colg as ishu!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awesome blossom! Well written. 👏

Why so many haddis in the kabab? 😆

Originally posted by: shavi2311

congrts fr 50 pagees...

i loved raman making his steps fr ishu and ishu feeling spl with his touch...

sahgun yar u wont change nd dont come between ishra...

raman made clear tht she is nt like other gal...and making efforts to some close with ishu...

subbu😡 wrng timing... nd y u r angry on ishita... waste fellow...

loved it...

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra

Amazing update...

Originally posted by: shravsss

good gng...

bang on update...

haha... he came to know that her reaction was for him... n infact he just said to her... haha i could imagine a gals face then...

under d table dealing was awesome...

haha... Shagun a big joker...

cute update yaara..

hope next update has some more romantic scenes...

pls update the nxt part soon..

waiting for the next update...

thnks for the PM dear...

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

loved ishita getting jealous...

oh hey have progressed to hand holdings and direct teasings..great...

aah subbu saw this..hope he does not mess with ishu again

cont soon..

ps:: hope u r all well now...take care

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Loved the update...continue soon...aww nice for subbu...but I can't trust that idiot..he may spoil...ishu's mood...update soon...

Originally posted by: Richajin

To say ur update is good would be an understatement... It's great.. A simple statement that I m not just reading ur writings.. I m kindaa re re re re re... Reading them.. Loved the update though. Ur words speak emotions.. Can actually visualise the scenes.. Refreshing stories.. Different set ups and the same characters with same passions And love for each other..
Just a little request though.. Please turn ur OS a beautiful mistake into a FF.. It is just brilliant... And the other one till last breath.. What to say.. Just keep on updating...

Simply beautiful n perfect I literally had butterfly in my stomach at evry ishra moment in conference n cabin visualising it is giving me goosebumps. so beautifully written.cant wait for next n subbu I wish I could see his face seeing thm at such proximity. update soon yaar n pm me if possible. I read all parts in one go

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

Really!

Ohh try others... Mine is nothing infront of them, Let me please suggest some authers who are my fav... Aaminah, Vidya, Arabearxx, Columbia, Aaravkidevani, Scribble_Tweety and well there are many... start with them... mine is gutter work infront of them anyways...😆

Will defo add you...😃

But Do I recognize you from EHMMBH forum? I wrote few fictions there... like Finding Mr. Destiny and the Breakup of Friendship and Realization at last!😃 Do you remember me? 😕