Undisclosed Desires|| An IshRa FF || Part 10 Page 58 03-July-20 - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago
This is a very fresh and I interesting story. I liked the characters and the way you have toyed with the story. Raman and Ishita have their nuances from the show, but have a very different flavor to them.

Kudos, to your style of writing.
Continue soon and do keep me in the loop when you next update. Would be happy to read ahead, soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Frst of all sorry for late rply priya
There are so many pms i hav pending...am trying to reply all...actually I was on a break..thats why

Coming to update

Story took a new twist...wow
raman coming to know through mihir about ishita liking him...this was least expected...yet so good...wow
omg...raman's actions in conference hall...epic...lol...shagun is out...hehe
i liked the fact je talked everything in front of her...he didnt want that she takes anything wrong
superb...begining of romance
this subbu is giving negative vibes
pls cont soon
waiting for next
and yess...next rply will be on time for sure
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Loved the way Raman held Ishita's hand under the table during the meeting. Only RKB can maintain a poker face during such a moment. I'm glad that finally Raman sort of showed his attraction towards Ishita especially when he stopped her from leaving his cabin after the whole Shagun scene. It was icing on the cake that Subbu had to come up on them in such a moment. Though I hate that their moment was interrupted, I'm sure there are many more of those in the next updates.



Thanks!
I am glad that you liked this part... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

Hmmm lovely
I request you
raman should beat subbu atleast once



Thanks so much!
I'll try my best for that dear!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

great part dear👏

im ever ready to swoon over a playful, flirty Raman Kumar Bhalla...☺️
(sigh ) i could so understand ishita's plight..😆
damn that subbu...😡
im guessing he will confront ishita and hopefully this time raman will witness it and beat him black and blue and ofcourse fire him..
eager for the next part😃

do continue soon
take care



Thanks so much!😃
LOL! I love Flirty, kinky and cute Raman!😉

Will be updating in few minutes...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

The way she blushed and freaked out when he held her hand☺️ i love your sexy devil😳 lets see how this moves ahead. Subbu barged in but loved it, really curious to see how he might react. RKB is so ☺️



Thanks so much Scribble!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anum_says

i am totaly loving it...



Thanks!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks so much!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely update Priya. Raman such a naughty guy he has romance her under the table during the meeting going on and he just keep her in the room and just show her how he reject Shagun.that made Ishu piss off . May be she think Raman also same like Subbu Hope Raman clear this point. Wish to see Raman more flirt with Ishu next update😉


Thanks so much!

LOL
Under the table romance is so fascinating that I couldn't help but include it my update!😉

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