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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Ur wonderful comments make my day sorry the previous post was short ...
part 11
Raman returned to the room with a victorious smile on his face and tried to comprehend ishita's behaviour but she was already asleep raman goes closer to her and kneels near her side of the bed and assuming that she is asleep says
raman : ishita mujhe nahi pata tum gussa ho khush ho upset ho ... I don't know tum soch rahi hogi ki achanak raman ne mukhe kiss kyun kiya tumhe lag raha hoga ki main iss baat ka fayda utha raha hun ki tum meri biwi ho par aisa nahi hai ... mere past mein.dhokha khaane ke baad maine nahi socha tha ki aisi feeling kabhi kisi k liye hongi par maim galat tha ... pata nahi tum kahan thi itne wakt ... tumhari achayi tumhara ruhi k liye pyaar tumhara is tarah ghar ka khayal rakhna tumhara mere liye care karna yeh sab acha lagta hai ... jee karta hai ki sirf tumhe dekhta rahu par ... tumhari har baat ko mimd meim rewind karta rehta hun ... kehne mein bhi impossible sa lagta hai par madrasan mujhe ishk ho gaya hai ... tumse ishita ...
he smiles kisses her gently on.her forehead carefully trying not to wake her up and goes to his side of the bed and sleeps
ishita opens her eyes all the while she enacted of being asleep she heard every word raman said and could not believe that she was infact his dream girl the one jisse raman ko ishk hua hai her mind was in a happy space and she slept peacefully she woke up late that morning raman had left for work ... she looked at his picture and smiled ... she found a note on the table
going to work imp meeting will be late ... love raman
she smiling kept the note in her purse
ishita returned home from work around 9:30pm she expected raman at home but he wasn't ... the others had finished dinner and were in their respective rooms ishita decided she would wait for raman
around 12:30 pm raman called her
Raman : ishita "garden view hotel " mein aa jao dinner karenge mujhe pata hai timne khana nahi khaya
ishita happily :theek hai
she reaches the hotel and finds raman ... raman places his palm on her forehead and says
Raman : ishita tum theek ho? Bukhaar hai kya?
Ishita : raman main theek hun par aap kyun puch rahe ho ?
Raman : bina jhagda kiye tum aa gayi isliye and he smiles while ishita blushes 😳
they have their dinner and all the while steal glances at each other in secret
they are on the way home and suddenly raman stops the car
ishita : kya hua raman
raman : bahar niklo
noth get out of the car ...
raman : may I have the pleasure of a dance ? 😳
Ishita gives him his hand and they dance on the empty road .. and suddenly it starts raining ...
raman : ishita maine suna hai baarish ki boondein har dard mita deti hain ... aaj iss baarish mein main mera past mita dena chahta hun mujhe tumhare saath ek nayi shuruvat karni hai kya tum mera saath dogi
ishita with tears in her eyes ...main bhi and she hugs him ... 😳
they stay like that frozen into each others arms when suddenly ramans phone rings he checks his phone it reads
shagun calling ...

please do review guys your comments are appreciated
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
sweet update...
their realtn strtd nd put the twst...
u r mre thn cv's yar...twst mein...
continue...
waitng fr nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Hey dont worry I wont torture like the cv's ...
you would be happy to read raman's actions on the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow... such an awesome update yaar... n d way raman confessed his love thinking she is asleep was super cute... awww... dat was sooo lovely.. each every line was awesome... par yeh kya shagun calling... sacchi yaar... muje tho ithna gussa aaraha hai... shagun y shld she always peep in a wrong time... hope ishra undrstand each other well...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nice yar i reas u r all parts awsome waiting for next keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
both d parts r awesome
raamn's was beautiful
now what's wrong with this apshagun
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Awesome update...
Loved their dinner date and dance..😊😊
And the twist in the end...
waiting for the next update..
Superb writing...👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Read all the parts in a go..and I was like wow it feels so good reading ishra' s story without all apshagun, parmeet n ashok ...par shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan haazir!! Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Hey all thanks for ur likes and comments and also a big thank you to the silent readers hope you enjoy the update
part 12
raman is irritated with shagun ..here he was embracing the woman he loved and there was shagun trying to interrupt he immediately cut the call and switched off his phone
ishita : raman its ok aap baat kar sakte hain usse
raman : nahi main busy hun ... usne paison k liye phone kiya hoga aadi ki school fees bharne ki date hai kal woh main bhar dunga mujhe usse baat nahi karni
ishita : agar kuch imp hua toh
raman : meri jagat maata dusron ka sochna band karo theek hai ... ek din kisi aur k liye nahi sochogi toh earthquake nahi aayega waise baarish bahut tez ho rahi hai gaadi mein baithte hain
they go inside both are happily talking to each other when suddenly someone knocks the car window
hawaldaar : aey yeh kya chal raha hai ? Aise gaadi park kar rakhi hai sharam nahi aati public mein yeh sab chee chee
raman : ohh policeji kya bakwas kar rahe ho
ishita calms raman
ishita : dekhiye sir baarish bahut ho rahi thi toh isliye hum yaha ruk gaye
raman : aur waise bhi yeh meri patni hai
hawaldaar : toh kya hua patni hai toh ... yeh sab public mein allowed nahi hai yeh baarish k bahane mat do chalo 500 rs nikalo jurmana bharo
ishita quietly gives the cash and takes the slip from the hawaldaar and they immediately leave
ishita is smiling
raman : kya hai ?
Ishita : yeh slip dekhiye
raman : padho kya likha hai
ishita : fine for indecency in public
and both have a hearty laugh ... they reach home and are completely drenched
both sneeze together
raman : ishita sab tumhari wajah se
ishita : aiyyo maine kya kiya
raman : kisne kaha tha itna pretty dikhne k liye ... he winks and goes to change
ishita thinks : I love you toh inhone neend mein kaha tha jab tak pure hosh mein nahi kehte tab tak ishita control kar ...!!!
Ishita keeps raman's pillow on the bed he comes to take it towards the couch ishita stops him
ishita : raman aap yahin so jaaiye yaha do logo k liye kaafi jagah hai bed par aur mujhe aap par bharosa hai ...
raman : don't worry ishita just because maine tumhe hug kiya iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki main tumhara fayda uthaunga and he smirks she shys away they sleep on the same bed
Raman thinks " raman bhalla ab tujhe apni biwi se bulvana padega ki yeh tujhse pyaar karti hai ya nahi "
The next morning
mrs bhalla : ishita putar kal karva chauth hai tu vrat rakhegi na
ishita : ji mummyji bilkul
raman : ishita tumhe vrat rakhne ki zarurat nahi hai
ishita : raman aap please kabhi toh mujhe koi cheez apni marzi se karne dijiye
raman makes an irritated face and walks away
raman goes to a jeweller and buys the perfect gift for his wife
that night he tells her again
raman : ishita mat rakho vrat yaar tum jyada patli ho jaogi toh main haathi kise bulaunga
ishita : raman !!!!
Raman : theek hai theek hai rakho fast mujhe kya
ishita wakes up early in the morning for the sargi and then wears the beautiful red saree her mother in law gave her ...raman cant take his eyes off her
raman : ishita kuch missing hai
ishita : kya missing hai ? Boliye na mere hisaab se to sab kuch pehen liya hai maine
raman : ek min haa
he comes really close to her he can see that red blush on her face and his happy to see the effect his presence has on herhe takes some kajal and applies a kaala tikka right behind her ear
Ishita smiles
raman : tum itni pretty lag rahi ho toh nazar ka tika toh lagana hi tha ... he smiles widely and goes away
in the evening
the chaand has not arrived yet
ishita : yeh chaand kab aayega
raman : wahi yaar kitna time laga raha hai ...
ishita : aap kyun wait kar rahe ho ?
Mihir overhears them ...
mihir : woh bhabhi bhai ne bhi vrat rakha hai na
raman : saale bhabhi ke chamche maarunga ek kheech ke
mihir runs away trying to save himself from raman
ishita : raman aap ne kyun ?
Raman : ishita agar tum meri umar yeh vrat rakhkar badha rahi ho toh mujhe bhi tumhari umar badhani padegi na ... main tumhare bina kya karunga ... and he looks into her eyes intently
just then they hear ... ishita putar aaja chaand aa gaya
ishita does the puja and raman breaks her fast ishita also feeds him mithai and breaks his fast
ishita thinks " murugan main kitni lucky hun meri liye aapne raman jaise chaand ko bheja thank you murugan "
ishita and raman don't get a time to chat as all ladies are busy talking about something
just then a message arrives on ishita's phone
ishita jis insaan k liye vrat rakha hai woh jyada imp hai kamre mein aao ... love raman
ishita hurriea away to the room she walks in and finds the door close behind her
raman : ishita tumhara pehla karva chauth hai na isliye main tumhare liye yeh lekar aaya
he takes her hand in his and puts on a ring with a ruby diamond shaped like a heart
ishita : thank you raman its very pretty ...
raman : thank you se kaam nahi chalega mera bhi toh vrat tha mujhe gift chahiye
ishita : raman ... kya chahiye aapko
raman : sirf yeh .he leans forward and kisses her cheeks with a lot of passion
thanks ishita ... and he knows he is driving her crazy he leaves her in the moment and goes away from the room
ishita stares into the mirror and finds the perfect blush on her cheeks ...

hope u guys like it please do review ur comments are appreciated
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awww... the mostt beautifulll updatee!! loved ittt! ekdum perfect start for their official lovestory!
cont soon.. if possible, plsss PM me.. thankuu!

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