A Different beginning OS part 13 pg 12 complete

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Hi all im new here and loved the writings on this forum i tried to write a little something too please do read and give your valuable reviews
Ishita draped the saree all she could think of was 'why are my parents doing this? Why meet this probable groom who would reject me because of my infertility ? Why should I have to go through this pain each and every time I am rejected? Murugan please stop this !!! I can't afford another emotional breakdown after what subbhu did to me ...'"akka lets go peri amma has called you outside " said mihika ...ishita and mihika walked into the hall to find their neighbouring family the bhallas seated there ... ishita could not believe that her parents were ready for a son in law who wasn't an iyer ... while the two families discussed the details raman asked Mr iyer if he could speak to ishita in private ...mr iyer agreed .ishita and raman are now in ishita's room .ishita knows that raman is famous for his anger and she just does not want to marry him ... she says "I can't marry you " raman interrupts"i dont care if u don't want to but I don't have a choice ... this marriage is being considered just because I need my daughter ... look ishita I dont know what are your expectations of a marriage but this marriage is just so I can have the custody of my daughter Ruhi" RUHI this word strikes ishita's heart ... ruhi and ishita met a few weeks ago and ishita grew fond of ruhi little did ishita know that this emotionally broken child was raman's daughter .. the love ishita felt for ruhi shadowed all her feelings of being barren

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part 3 update on page 2

part 4 update page 3
part 5 pg 3
part 7 page 6
part 8 page 6
part 9 page 7
part 10 page 9
part 11 page 10
Part 12 page 11
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start do continue... if possible pm me yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...continue soon dear...
and also pm me if possible for u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Since I am free today here's the part 2
as raman went on to explain the details of the case to ishita ..all ishita could think about was the pain ruhi had gone through ..the broken marriage of raman and shagun had shattered ruhi's childhood completely ... raman said "please ishita you are my last hope to win back my daughter " ishita stood up and left the room raman followed her .she declared to both the families that she wouldn't take any decision unless she speaks to ruhi and immediately leaves to find ruhi at bhalla house ... when ishita asks her who would she want to be with the troubled child replies " ishita aunty I want to be with you..." and then and there ishita made her decision ..

ishita and raman had a court marriage and also won the custody case but clearly there is a huge rift between the couple and ruhi can sense it ... ruhi then goes to paati and says " paati maine south indian shaadi nahi dekhi hai ... kyun na hum ishima aur papa ki shaadi south indian style mein karvayen " ishita's mum who had a lot of plans with regards to ishita's wedding was happy with this suggestion ... and put the idea forward to both families. .. ruhi thought this ceremony would bridge gaps

Ishita and raman are now all set for their traditional wedding and smile throughout knowing that this is essential for the happiness of ruhi . That night when all have dinner raman and ishita talk cordially with each other .. seeing them have a conversation ruhi believes that her plan was successful ... ishita and raman kiss ruhi goodnight and enteer their room ...raman closes the door
"Thanks mere iss natak mein mera saath dene k liye .. I know looking at us talk ruhi would be happy" he switches off the light and sleeps on the couch while ishita is lost in thought "did I take the right decision? of course even if this marriage doesnt benefit me I know it will bring joy to ruhi


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
continue n pm m plz
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nice yaar... give us a long update yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 update im really too free today 😛
its been a week since ishita moved into the bhalla house and she hasn't had a substantial conversation with raman .ishita has decided in her mind 'so what if we married for ruhi im sure me and raman could be friends'
Raman comes into the room tired from a long day of work and doesnt acknowledge ishita's presence ishita speaks

ishita :ummm raman I had to talk to you
raman :(shocked) what is it?
Ishita: we should be friends :)
Raman : why should we ? Just to show the world that we get along ..ishita I married you just for ruhi I don't feel anything
ishita: neither do I (angrily) I just wanted us to be normal we share the same room and yet it seems like there is a wall between us . Even if we don't behave like a normal couple we could be friends atleast!
Raman : the last time I made a woman named shagun my best friend my better half it ended badly why should I have to experience that pain again .look ishita u are a wonderful human being and a great mother to ruhi but I have a broken past I cant get over that easily
Ishita: I am not shagun u know im ishita
raman: exactly I don't know this ishita either
ishita : ok so let me introduce myself im ishita raman bhalla your legally wedded wife
raman is not liking this but sees ruhi at the door and therefore stays there talking to ishita
ishita:I am a complete madrasan I love everything south indian I love dogs I love the colour blue I love coffee
raman seeing that ruhi has gone away tells ishita : is there anything you don't love ? Can we not have this conversation please I don't want to know what you love or you dont
ishita holds raman's hand and tells him : I know you don't care but I will tell you anyway hoping that you would share your secrets with me someday
Raman is left thinking 'do I really want to share anything with this woman ?'
While ishita thinks' I hope he shares the pain of his past with me someday im sure he is a better person'



The next morning ruhi is having breakfast happily and ishita is checking her school calendar
ishita: wow ruhi your marks have improved in the recent test
Ruhi : ishima this is all because of papa .he helped me learn maths
ishita : wow your papa is really talented
Ruhi:ohh ishima before I forget u and papa have to participate in a dance competition in my school
raman overhears this and thinks' whats wrong with these schools '
Ishita thinks 'ohh no seriously? Whats wrong with school these days ?'



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys should I update this further?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update... even der thinkings is also d same... waiting for more... i loved ishu in dis part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dance competition..awesome.

Update soon.😊

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