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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


Kal 11 baje tak rakhti hu fir Vrat pura karugi 😳
I read ur post and think if she can write long lecture without watching show so why can't I?



Shukriya ji :)

and your last line... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72


<font size="3">In same way Raman has said that multiple times to her that he is over Shagun </font>




<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Now name one episode .. or instance when he tells her .. HE DOES NOT STILL LOVE SHAGUN ... while she has asked HIM POINT BLANK .. during the accident track when he accuses her of stealing the picture .. she says .. " u love Shagun .. keep loving her"</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">As u said .. u r failing to Understand or connect to this track .. its of course ur POV .. which ur entitled to .. & no pov of is right or wrong .. so if thats the feeling ur getting .. then thats right for u ..</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">somehow the writer has failed to convince u .. which is ok .. when millions watch a show .. one cannot satisfy everyone ..</font>



Well this is your view

And you are entitled to your view

I respectfully don't agree

Well I am just saying what I feel is inconsistent

That's all




No sweat we can always agree to disagree ... we do it often enuf 😉😆
absolutely i wrote that to .. we both have a pov .. & pov of cannot be right or wrong .. coz its what u felt when u watched .. so both go us are entitled to it ..

But pls do answer the first ques ..u did not answer on the bold .. when did Raman tell ISHITA he does not love Shagun .. ??? missed that episode ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: redwine1



<font size="3">In same way Raman has said that multiple times to her that he is over Shagun </font>




<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Now name one episode .. or instance when he tells her .. HE DOES NOT STILL LOVE SHAGUN ... while she has asked HIM POINT BLANK .. during the accident track when he accuses her of stealing the picture .. she says .. " u love Shagun .. keep loving her"</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">As u said .. u r failing to Understand or connect to this track .. its of course ur POV .. which ur entitled to .. & no pov of is right or wrong .. so if thats the feeling ur getting .. then thats right for u ..</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">somehow the writer has failed to convince u .. which is ok .. when millions watch a show .. one cannot satisfy everyone ..</font>



Well this is your view

And you are entitled to your view

I respectfully don't agree

Well I am just saying what I feel is inconsistent

That's all





<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">No sweat we can always agree to disagree ... we do it often enuf😉😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">absolutely i wrote that to .. we both have a pov .. & pov of cannot be right or wrong .. coz its what u felt when u watched .. so both go us are entitled to it ..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">But pls do answer the first ques ..u did not answer on the bold .. when did Raman tell ISHITA he does not love Shagun .. ??? missed that episode ..</font>
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To that

I would say action speaks louder than words

He has said he wants to build new memories with ishita

His expression says many things

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Vyas,
In the initial episodes just before the first rain scene, Ishita justifies Mihika Mihir union by saying "Pyaar ke bina do log kya hain? AJNABI, Mihika Mihir pyaar karte hain."

And then a week ago when Mani asks her she says "Pyaar zaroori nahi shaadi mein" or some such thing

Inconsistency anyone?
In that episode Raman says "Hum tere koi nahi hai, obviously we are not family" to MIHIR

And now he is Shagun's brother

They make up stuff as they go along

Tomorrow Mani could turn out to be Raman's kumbh ke mele mein bichhda hua bhai

Or even he could turn out to be Shagun's brother or Ashok's brother

Anything to bring in TRPs is the motto
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--



Very well said

But the reason for pain is subbu

And she keeps remembering of pain from time to time

But my problem is lack of any sort of reaction when mani keeps bringing out subbu


CVs have mentioned before Subbu has now no effect on Ishita whatsover. But they didn't bring it to portray on the show. Now they rushed it just like Mani character itself. Subbu topic was brought to discuss mostly 3-4 times in entire 6 moths of the show and now Mani used it more than 5-6 times in a week. CVs clearly wanted to show like Subbu was never existed in her life to emphasize how much she's in love with Raman but as usual they rushed it. It would have been better if this process followed a gradual path and it would made more sense to us. Mani's constant chanting of Subbu can't be justified though. No friend, let alone a bestie, constantly reminds a friend about her ex-boyfriend who betrayed her badly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy

lucky

lol our gujju funda is flouring on hima(yhmdivan) thread also.
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itna obsession and mantra jaap to mene "majburi" or "adi ke liye" ka bhi nahi dekha within 2 months of track compared to 2 weeks of mani track.


mani jaap has won competition with "ruhi ke liye" .

It was fun to talk in gujju
I just hope we won't get adi ke liye jhap again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: BIaddict

To me this whole Mani gushing and Mani's love smitten cheesy dialogues are like suddenly chewing on gravel in the middle of a good meal. I won't say YHM has lost its charm or anything. But often when they bring in new characters they go to extremes to hi light a certain point without paying attention to the character sketch. Same thing happened with Param, Sanjana and now Mani. They end their tracks quite nicely but the way they try to bring out a certain aspect in a track mess up with their original characterization. I think the reason is unlike viewers like us who fell in love with the original concept and the strong character build up they gave us on Ishita and Raman, they only focus on that particular track and TRP is their only goal. In the race for TRP, they know jealousy track will work because the majority wanted that. So even if that butchers the characterization of the characters they will go with that. After all it is about quantity (TRP) not about quality.

In real life If a mature lady like Ishita meets her school best friend, I don't think suddenly she would gush over that friend like a teenage person. Yes, you will remember the old times and talk a lot about it in a mature way. And you will not keep comparing your friend to your husband. And this sudden line up of boys who were waiting to marry her, where were they when her parents and she herself gave up on marriage and decided to adopt a kid just so she can have a family. The beauty of Ishita's character is getting spoiled in this race for TRP aka jealousy.

The way RKB is reacting to Mani is definitely childish, not how a confident, mature grown up would react. But that does not mean that what he is doing is not cute. If you just look at this track, yeah you can enjoy it forgetting who Raman and Ishita was. For me the sad part in this jealousy track is I am missing the ishita and Raman I fell in love with.



To me

This is the reply of post so far

I agree with everything you say

Bang on post
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
.. when did Raman tell ISHITA he does not love Shagun .. ??? missed that episode ..</font>
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To that

I would say action speaks louder than words

He has said he wants to build new memories with ishita

His expression says many things


How does building new memories say .. i don't love my first wife ... it was direct question that ishita asked .. u love ur wife right .. no answer to that .. did he refute that ?

If its actions u speak of .. then ISHITA married another man . was looking to marry someone . so she has moved on from SUBBU .. right same bit of logic applies ??

actions are acceptable one place & unacceptable in another case .. hmm ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ankitasen


CVs have mentioned before Subbu has now no effect on Ishita whatsover. But they didn't bring it to portray on the show. Now they rushed it just like Mani character itself. Subbu topic was brought to discuss mostly 3-4 times in entire 6 moths of the show and now Mani used it more than 5-6 times in a week. CVs clearly wanted to show like Subbu was never existed in her life to emphasize how much she's in love with Raman but as usual they rushed it. It would have been better if this process followed a gradual path and it would made more sense to us. Mani's constant chanting of Subbu can't be justified though. No friend, let alone a bestie, constantly reminds a friend about her ex-boyfriend who betrayed her badly.



Awesomepost

Agree with you completely

This needed to be shown phase by phase
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: redwine1

.. when did Raman tell ISHITA he does not love Shagun .. ??? missed that episode ..</font>

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To that

I would say action speaks louder than words

He has said he wants to build new memories with ishita

His expression says many things



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">How does building new memories say .. i don't love my first wife ... it was direct question that ishita asked .. u love ur wife right .. no answer to that .. did he refute that ?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">If its actions u speak of .. then ISHITA married another man . was looking to marry someone . so she has moved on from SUBBU .. right same bit of logic applies ??</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">actions are acceptable one place & unacceptable in another case .. hmm ?</font>
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Well

We can say that logic applies to why I don't believe ishita is over subbu
And atleast it is not shown properly in show

And my main grouse is that lack of reaction to mani constant subbu point

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