The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: clover
Subbu really was a certified fool. It would be amazing to watch something like this happen in the show. Not the discretionary parts but the other ones.😊

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: mandu
That was a vey soul stirring update...I still have goosebumps..and also the way you wrote this out...I could empathize with ishra and feel Subbu's wife's pain...there is no way any woman could forgive that.
Though I ultimately don't feel bad per se for subbu ... He had made his bed and now has to lie on it...that's life ..and more often then not it is cruel and unforgiving!

Thank you for a wonderful piece of writing!!

Hi Mandu thank you 😊

Glad you could feel for Ragini too cos she def would be the casualty in this should something similar happen and as for Subu - as you sow so shall you reap

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
WOW in capital letters Aani. Very very intense... As much i dont want to, i feel myself saying Bichara Subbu. Dhobi ka kutta !!!

The exchange between Raman and Ishita was something else... I would love for these lines to be used in the show, really. Ishita needs that assurance, along with Raman's love!

Frm phone now, so dont have a quote for u...

This is perhaps the second best thing I have read. The first u know is the OS set after Param fiasco and Raman witnesses Ishita's breakdown. This is a close second I must say...

U do introspection best, even when u wrote Shagun's story.

Excellent Aani!!!

Hey Lucky thanks a lot and no issues on the quote thing 😊 and I do want at some point Raman to assure Ishita in a similar manner 😳

😆 you are the only one who called him a bichara 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
Interesting how you defined the "making love" part. That entire dialogue of Raman's.
If it wasn't for the melancholic mood of the episode, I would have laughed badly. I mean Subbu called out Ishita's name when he was with his wife? I find it hilarious!🤣

Thanks Sneha and I have read about this happening - fantasizing about someone when you are engaged in intercourse with your partner - most people do about celebs, someone they have a crush on or got attracted to, but it also happens sometimes your mind conjures up your ex' now in such a case how can any wife not be hurt especially if it happens twice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: aaminah123
Thank you for granting my wish, it was sensitive indeed and the way you depicted their emotions and feelings was an absolute treat!

Loved it.

thanks Aaminah 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Rozy77
wow, this was amazing, brilliant and intense👏👏

oh the raman-ishita conversation was too beautiful ❤️. loved everything about it
it would be a dream come true so see them reach this stage in the show

i dont feel bad for subbu at all.
it was understandable he still loved ishita but he was a coward and a total jerk. he could have stayed a friend and been there, in the most difficult phase with her. you dont just leave, breaking all contact with a person you claim to love.
no wife would tolerate a husband calling out to his ex when making love. she's right, he used her.

loved this😃
thanks for this wonderful piece of work😃

thanks Rozy

Actually had he stayed on as a friend after dumping her it would have been worse cos then she would not have been able to move on ahead in her life some part of her would have clung to the hope of him and them and his wife, if she goes through something like this has all the rights to dump him

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ankitasidana
ress..

omg...subbus pov
something rlly unique n different
was so lovely the way u wrote girl...
some people dont deserve the happiness...
ishra convo awesum...

nd nd the title...apt...perfect..i loved the title of your story yrrr
the beautiful and the damned...wow

thnks 4 pm buddy...amazing story..

thanks Ankita glad you found the title apt and its not that some people dont deserve happiness, but its just that karma doesnt spare anyone 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy
awesome update aani

loved the way you showed how raman feels about ishu, and the way both of them decided to try other things , very progressive and practical.

liked how you showed comparison of subu s feelings vs raman s feelings and determination and approach to life. one is left with kids and other had left ishu once because of not having own kids in future. what subbu got today? he had said that after few year of marriage, only kids can keep couple together but here also subu failed big time . he expected to get back to ishu but she has moved on with man who has completed her in every means.

superb description of subbus feelings and his regret.

Hey Zene thanks

many couples face this issue in this day and age and TV as a powerful medium can help them know of options and help them break their mental barriers too if it gets them thinking

I think his words @bold - might be shown as a way of him wanting to hurt her on purpose, so that she hates him, moves on...if it is his maa who made him break up the engagement, it might be shown as his last bit of kindness veiled under a blow to her. But yes those words impacted her on a deeper level than he imagines since perhaps they might not have been thought through and were a spur of the moment utterance.

He didnt expect to get her back here in my head, since I wrote he is happy for her too - the part of him which carried the guilt of hurting her, breaking her heart but as a human how can he not imagine he could have been happy, the one who could have had it all had he been able to fight with his Amma and make her see reason say the words Raman did to Ishu today he would have had his love and a family - all of it - but today he has none and nothing 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wow it was brilliant I just love Raman n ishu's convo the way u penned Raman's emotions was marvellous subbu's feeling n regret was very nicely penned Thanx for pm

thanks Prachi 😊