The Beautiful and The Damned - IshRa TS - Part 2 - Page 13 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aani,
Just last weekend we had a session on desicion making in my office and there a quote was put up -
"If only. Those must be the two saddest words in the world." - Mercedes Lackey

Reading your portrayal of Subbu and how his life changed with a wrong and selfish decision reminded me of it. Regret is one of the harshest and undeniable phases of everyone's life
Very difficult to get over and get on with life as you keep doubting your self after taking a wrong step

In all your posts I have noticed that you have a way to pen emotions without going overboard and its very difficult to just be ON the line.👏
But you superbly achieve it everytime. God bless you for that(with much much more valuable things than charged batteries of course😆)

The way you used pathos in your writing shows how good you are at controlling your reader's emotions. You really are gifted my dear.

I purposely didnt point any particular line which stood out, as for me, it was not one or 2 lines but the way it was written, the flow of emotions, which stood out.
I dont know if I am making sense but hoping you got what i meant😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superbly written. Loved Raman and his attitude towards Ishu. Felt bad for Subbu though at last but I guess he deserved it as he had given Ishu the same pain.. Loved it overall!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally read both updates...
so sorry Aani for being so late😳😳...
my god i amazed reading it...
its personally one of my fav stories of urs..
u knw very well how much i am against Subbu entry and jealousy track..
and here i read something different...not the jealous Raman but a man regretting what he let go... i loved it...specially loved the second part...
i was amazed reading the every line of it...
so wish to see Subbu's entry for regrets what he missed... give justice to Ishita , that this guy is suffering now..
dnt wanna see raman jealous coz of Subbu...

loved both the parts Aani
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh Aani...a masterpiece... I love your writings.
the entire talk between Raman and Ishita gave the answer for subbu' selfishness. I actually have no words to tell you how your writing is Aani. I have read it 4 times and still searching for words to tell how your story was. Couldn't. I love to read your writings as my favourite author'.
waiting for your next creative writing.
stay blessed Aani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update...👏👏
Superb..👍🏼
Thanks for the pm...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely updates..!!
both were just awsum.!
loved it..!
do continue soon..!
and if possible do pm me for next updates..::)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was So Beautiful and Nice TS.😳
The whole part was so nicely explained.😊
ISHRA moments were so cute and lovely and their conversation was so cute.😳
The way Raman explins how much he loves her was so cute.
Subbu wife wanted Divorce,it was interesting.😊
Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.
I'm sorry for not commenting on last part,actually I am suffering from Fever and I am busy at my studies.Please Forgive me...😭
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorryy for the delay in replying. My account was not working for few days. Now all set!

Brilliant update! i loved raman ishita's conversation! too goodd!!

You have written them beautifully with all the emotions attached at the right places! perfect update indeed! kudos!

A whirlpool of emotions! Brilliant!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

brilliant update- surprisingly raman is loquacious here taking ishita's place 😃 but beautifully explained to her.
i would like to feel for subbu but just can't- feel for ragini though. wonder how bala's mom will deal with the news of divorce...
thanks for the pms😊


Thanks Rutu and he was needed to be the talkative one here, its what can set Ishita free from this place she has locked herself in, the part of her which can be only rid off if her husband lets her know he loves her for the woman she is regardless of her ability to conceive, it doesn't make her any less lovable or desirable to him
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Beautifully weaved in emotions!

Though i dont want this to happen in Subbu's life, i believe life is a circle and we get what we gave at some point...so in some form he had to get the returns for what he did to Ishu..

Raman Ishita moments and convo was amazingly written...

loved it!


thanks Vidya well I dont know if Subu will be shown to suffer similarly but I believe in karma and it never fails to payback so something would eventually come to bite him too

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