ISHRAYEIN :: Scenes on ISHRA Scene 4 pg 8

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: yazhi
wow... nicde n interesting yaar... write more scenes n if possible pm me t

Thx for the comment shall def try to PM if I think more

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#32

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel
Lovely ..

Thank you for this!!!

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#33

Thanks for all the likes and comments

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#34

Originally posted by: YhmCraze
Awesome yaar..

Thanks so much 😊

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#35

Scene 3 :: house caught fire track

Mr. Bhalla actually humei aur ek Soney ki jagah chahiye, hamare kamre mei ek hi double bed mihika aur mrs Iyer to so jayenge but aur ek - kal raat Mai zamin pe soya but I don't think

Toshi listens to mr Iyer and decides this is a good opportunity to bring Raman's and ishita closer, Arrey Iyer Saab hamare hotel hue aap zamin pe kyu soyenge? Arrey Romi raman bhaiya ke room se woh white sofa hai, usey Iyer uncle ke room mei shift kar dei Bhalla Ji aap Zara help kardo

Later that evening ishita and raman are not on talking terms,

Tum zameen pe apni bistra kyu laga rahi ho?

Shayad dikhai nahi dei Raha sofa yaha hai nai

Wow, apni mahanta dikhaney ke liye tum ne sofa bhi shift karwa Diya

She glares at him and does not realise wot has come over her,

Aap sach kehte hai, main kyu mahanta dikhau? Main yaha bed pe sojaungi aap zameen pe

Diamag kharab ho Gaya hai Kya. Main kyun zamin pe sone laga

And the next minute they are both on the bed backs facing each other

Raman begins to get even more angry

Apne pati ke paas soogi to apne aashiq se kya kahogi? Tum tho badi easily bewafaii kar leti ho

Tears come down her eyes, she wipes them but she is in full silence mode

Her silence irritates him even more

Kya hua? Aaj kal tumne lecture dena band kar Diya kyun sab kuch uske liye bachaa ke rakh rahi ho?

She suddenly gets up, wipes her cheeks, stands up and picks up the pillow

He sits up kaha jaa rahi ho?

Yahaan zamin pe, meri ehsiyat bass yahi reh gayi hai she says softly

He watches her in the darkness and in some time the silence of the room puts her to sleep, he gets up and puts the blanket on her, and then his tears fall on her face, he wipes them. He has not realised he has wipes hers too.

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kuls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

awesome... sach me bahut accha tha... bilkul vaise the jaise cvs write karte... hum sab aise scene ko tho zaroor expect karsaktha hun... it was even heart touching...

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: yazhi
awesome... sach me bahut accha tha... bilkul vaise the jaise cvs write karte... hum sab aise scene ko tho zaroor expect karsaktha hun... it was even heart touching...

Thank you comment ke liye

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: YhmCraze
Soo..cute..

Thanks for the comment 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

NiceHe watches her in the darkness and in some time the silence of the room puts her to sleep, he gets up and puts the blanket on her, and then his tears fall on her face, he wipes them. He has not realised he has wipes hers too.Their words contradicts from their actions. Kehte hai kuch karthe hai kuch aur.They hurt each other with words but their actions always show us how they are caring for each other.sply Raman.

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: felciya
NiceHe watches her in the darkness and in some time the silence of the room puts her to sleep, he gets up and puts the blanket on her, and then his tears fall on her face, he wipes them. He has not realised he has wipes hers too.Their words contradicts from their actions. Kehte hai kuch karthe hai kuch aur.They hurt each other with words but their actions always show us how they are caring for each other.sply Raman.

Thanks for such a detailed and lovely comment 😊

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