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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
good on you to keep going :)
wonderful bits - give closure to #2 and 3 pleej
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Not understood ua parts. Each part is different. There is no continuation to the part. Last part is painful. Nw dz part is different
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
very intrstng...
nice updtes...
very sweet nd romntic...
pm me fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: columbia

Scene 3 :: house caught fire track

Mr. Bhalla actually humei aur ek Soney ki jagah chahiye, hamare kamre mei ek hi double bed mihika aur mrs Iyer to so jayenge but aur ek - kal raat Mai zamin pe soya but I don't think
Toshi listens to mr Iyer and decides this is a good opportunity to bring Raman's and ishita closer, Arrey Iyer Saab hamare hotel hue aap zamin pe kyu soyenge? Arrey Romi raman bhaiya ke room se woh white sofa hai, usey Iyer uncle ke room mei shift kar dei Bhalla Ji aap Zara help kardo


Later that evening ishita and raman are not on talking terms,
Tum zameen pe apni bistra kyu laga rahi ho?
Shayad dikhai nahi dei Raha sofa yaha hai nai
Wow, apni mahanta dikhaney ke liye tum ne sofa bhi shift karwa Diya
She glares at him and does not realise wot has come over her,
Aap sach kehte hai, main kyu mahanta dikhau? Main yaha bed pe sojaungi aap zameen pe
Diamag kharab ho Gaya hai Kya. Main kyun zamin pe sone laga
And the next minute they are both on the bed backs facing each other
Raman begins to get even more angry
Apne pati ke paas soogi to apne aashiq se kya kahogi? Tum tho badi easily bewafaii kar leti ho
Tears come down her eyes, she wipes them but she is in full silence mode
Her silence irritates him even more
Kya hua? Aaj kal tumne lecture dena band kar Diya kyun sab kuch uske liye bachaa ke rakh rahi ho?
She suddenly gets up, wipes her cheeks, stands up and picks up the pillow
He sits up kaha jaa rahi ho?
Yahaan zamin pe, meri ehsiyat bass yahi reh gayi hai she says softly
He watches her in the darkness and in some time the silence of the room puts her to sleep, he gets up and puts the blanket on her, and then his tears fall on her face, he wipes them. He has not realised he has wipes hers too.


Just wow. No doubt we have so many better writers on the forum than those writers of the main show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Really well written C. Especially loved the first one. Please give Him and Her other names, like Ram and Sita or something and continue your funfics.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Scene 1

HOLY! my screen's on fire!!!!
i did NOT see that coming... loving her attention - haye main marjawaan...

be it funfiction or fanfiction, the ending just gets to me!!! 😳😳 [and damn IF rules - i will miss the funfictions, oh so much!!!!! i wish they could change the rules but sigh... its all well... we'll make do with the pieces we got.. 😳 at least you'll carry on with your writing, as that's what matters.. 😃😃😃 cuz it's your writing that makes the scenarios 'perfect']

Scene 2

awww their mani fight... mani ko man banane lagi hai.. 🤣 mani is a gf though, she said so herself.. replaced mihika... 😆😆

Scene 3

ohh that was sad and brought back memories... that moment had left my brain (cuz clearly it left the CVs brains too... the way they just changed the whole damn story... but that was good, i loved it... raavan kumar in full raavan mode.. and JKR crying at his bitter words.. and he was crying too.. it was so sad.. that was a sad period in YHM... not that the current one is any better but this is just 'what the hell is wrong with the writers -- kinda sad'... loved the scene.. his jealousy, his hate for mani.. so visible...

Scene 4

DAMN IT mihir... leave them alone, will you... we just got to the good part... but C up till that part, it was oh so awesome... kaash aisa hota show main... chalo let me continue reading.. ahahaha i love this raman... we need our old raman back in the show.. his idea to go home and be called when the problem was sorted - GENIUS.. if only mahaan ishita would let that happen, ever! i love how mihir talks to them with the 'bhaiya bhabi' in the same flow, its cute! 😳 LOL shaadi se pehle wala dhamaka... 😆

loved 'em C, keep them coming.. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Loved all the shots.

Do write more and please PM me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Bful scenes dear
loved them
thnks 4 pm..keep writing
srry 4 late rply yrr
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Hey C🤗
Such cute scenes.. Especially loved the last one..
Raman's one liner about Ishita's hum saath saath hain shaadi tyohar khel was damn funny😆

Waiting for the next update, C 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rutu83

good on you to keep going :)
wonderful bits - give closure to #2 and 3 pleej
continue soon


I hope too. Have not watched the past few tracks was thinking of posting a one year anniversary special maybe

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