ISHRAYEIN :: Scenes on ISHRA Scene 4 pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shimla532

Wow. ending line is so awesome :) excited for next part :) Pls pm me and update soon.


Have not thought of continuation but let's see depends on comments 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uss raath kya huwa tha un dono ke beech??😉

Superb...update soon dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Uss raath kya huwa tha un dono ke beech??😉

Superb...update soon dear..


Thanks so much for comment 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for your comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishrayein Scene 2 - this is not a continuation but another scene that I was thinking of and just penned it - comments welcome
Mani. Track :::

Kya baatey kartei ho tum dono?
Aap soye nahi?
Ishita surprised at the voice that came from the bed, she thought raman must be fast asleep
Soya thaa Lekin was wondering what you chat with him so much mihika ke saath bhi itni batey nahi karti ho
Mihika aaj kal mihir ke saath bahut busy hai so., she takes the blanket and lies down on the sofa
Oh he smirks mani is your mihika substitute, girl talk ke liye you use him, waisey dikta bhi hai quite bayla,
Please Haan mani is a man
Haan Haan tum to jaake check karke Aayi ho., he snipes, what a man?! Meri biwi ke saath poori raat biath ke gossip karta hai
Woh Aapki biwi ke saath apni life share karta hai Aapki biwi ke saath uski problems share karta hai
Achaa?? He sits up and glares at her Meri biwi ke saath aur kya karta hai?
Please woh Aapki biwi aur kuch kyun Karne laga? She moves and turns around on the sofa pls try and understand him uske paas koyi nahi hai na family na dost he is all alone so , turns her back to him
Arrey yaar inn Jaise logon ke liye special doctors hote hai psychiatrists tum Danton ki doctor ho - yells sitting up
Gets up and sits on the sofa Haan Haan Aapki biwi tho bilkul useless hai kuch nahi kar sakti hai na
Continues to shout Arrey tum kyun chidhti ho? Mainey kab kaha ki meri biwi useless hai? Arrey saman Seva mei bahut useful hai dekho na, mani ko man banana mei lagi hai
She stands up Aapki biwi samaj seva karti hai aap kya karte ho? Uske Kaam mei tang Adana.?
He also stands up walks towards her oh suno! Meri tang tumhari aur mani ke beech aane se rahi, tum dono ko apni taag Mubarak claps his hand into a namaste
She is so close to his face her nose almost missed getting squished in his clap, she continues to glare at him and he glares back and suddenly from nowhere tears collect in her eyes and he stares at her slowly separating his hands. He is shocked to see her tears, she steps away and walks towards the door
Kaha jaa rahi ho? She ignores him opens their bedroom door and walks to the kitchen, he wants to follow her but his feet take him to his side of the bed and he lies down waiting for her.
Edited by columbia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice felt so real continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Really nice felt so real continue soon


Tanks for the comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks so much for saying that hoping for more comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... nicde n interesting yaar... write more scenes n if possible pm me t

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