ISHRAYEIN :: Scenes on ISHRA Scene 4 pg 8

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Thanks all those who commented here

Your encouragement makes me want to write these scenes again

I hope I can be able to

Thanks again

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Love your spirit gal😊 keep em coming😊Oh and also please PM me whenever you update..will be back in a while to comment on the scenes 2 and 3

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Paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Love these bits C ..., you should write more and since these are fanfics on the characters, can I ask for longer bits 😳

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Love these bits C ..., you should write more and since these are fanfics on the characters, can I ask for longer bits 😳

Tried to write this afternoon since I had some time - could not come up with anything when the show has nothing going for it it's tough to write

But I shall think and think 😛

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columbia

@columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: aishu_divan
Love your spirit gal😊 keep em coming😊Oh and also please PM me whenever you update..will be back in a while to comment on the scenes 2 and 3

Aishu I have to admit you and many many others have encouraged me and that is why I am re attempting let's see😊

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Scene 4

Shagun wedding Track (before Ashok Banianwala happening)

Kya hai?? Kaha Gaye aapke saare one liners? Itney chup kyun ho? Kahin main itni sundar toh nahi lag rahi ke the great mr Raman Kumar Bhalla speechless ho Gaye?

Maine tumhari taraf dekha bhi nahi, meri nazar tho dulhan se hat nahi rahi..

She grabs his chin and makes him look at her

Oh hello, aapke iss sadiyal muh ke saath shagun kya main bhi dubara shaadi nahi karungi.

He holds her hand, intertwining his fingers into hers and a small smile on his face

Toh tum dubara kiss ke saath shaadi karogi??

Pata nahi, (pulling herself towards him and holding his hand tightly) sab log aapke Jaise lucky thodi hai

In his gravelly voice, placing his other hand on her cheek, he comes closer, you are right Ishita, main bahut lucky hun, agar tum apne aap ko unlucky shamajhti ho to main tumhe

Before he can finish his sentence, Mihir comes running to him,

Bhai, Mihika kahin nahi mil rahi, Aapne kahi

Haan Mihir, meri pocket mei hai woh, kya yaar meri puri family ne thaan liya hai ki Mai

Raman, rukkiye na, mihir kya baat hai?

Bhabhi yahaan mihika nahi mil rahi aur wahan shagun Ashok ko leke pare shaan hai

Abb kya Kiya lambu ne?

Pata nahi Bhai I don't know what to do

Even I don't know, so Ishita let's go home, Mihir jab problem sort ho jaaye, hamei call kar Lena

Raman kya baat kar rahe ho?

Main toh aise hi try maar Raha tha, pata thaa ki yaha dal galegi nahi, batao meri ma kya kare?

Kya matlab hai aapka? Main toh

Bhabhi bhaiya please abb no jhagda I am worried

Mihir, sunn tu jaake sab ko phone karke puch le and I am sure

Ok ok bhaiya aap guests ko sambhaliye I am out

As soon as Mihir leaves

Kya keh rahe tha aap? Dal nahi galegi and all that?

Toh main galat kya keh Raha thaa?

Main yeh sab kya apne liye kar rahi hun??

Vahi tho Mai keh Raha hun tum khud ke liye kab kuch karogi?

Kya matlab?

Itni si baat tumhare bheja mei toh ghusti nahi hai, main tumhe apne dil ki baat batana chahta aur tum ho ke hum saath saath hai shaadi tyohar kher rahi ho

Listen Haan, Mai kuch nahi khel rahi ok..

Raman's phone rings. He takes it, Ishita fumes and stands angrily with her hands folded. As the call is over, he hangs up, pulls her elbow and begins to drag her

Kya hua? Kahan jaa rahe ho Raman?

Main kahi jaana nahi chahta, main Sirf tumhare saath rehna chahta hun, Lekin tum toh jaogi isiliye khud leke jaa Raha hun

She smile, and holds his elbow Lekin kaha raman?

Chalo tho, yeh shaadi se pehle wala dhamaka dekhne

Kya?

Chalo bhi...

TBC

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Megan

@incendio

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

"Shadi se pehle wala dhamaka" ..LOL😆😆

Beautiful scenes... i read all 4 parts in a go...

RKB's dialogues were just like RKB's..😆

Thanks for the PM...

Would love more of the scenes from you...

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columbia

@columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: arrowfan
"Shadi se pehle wala dhamaka" ..LOL😆😆
Beautiful scenes... i read all 4 parts in a go...
RKB's dialogues were just like RKB's..😆
Thanks for the PM...
Would love more of the scenes from you...

Thanks so much 😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

funny scene...much needed after the emotionally draining episode...and Raman's guilt waala sad waala chehre dekh ke yeh sab read kiya toh dil ko sukun mila!

Mihika ka janam janam ka friendship dekh ke pak gayi thi...ab accha laga!

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columbia

@columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
funny scene...much needed after the emotionally draining episode...and Raman's guilt waala sad waala chehre dekh ke yeh sab read kiya toh dil ko sukun mila!
Mihika ka janam janam ka friendship dekh ke pak gayi thi...ab accha laga!

Thanks vidya appreciate all the encouragement

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