ISHRAYEIN :: Scenes on ISHRA Scene 4 pg 8

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ISHRAYEIN - scenes on Ishra



Most people may know me from my FUNFICTION, http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245643
and some of you from my suraj-shagun FF, http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4248623

Of course these are not comparable to writers here but my contribution to ishra - these are one shots or scenes whenever they come to my mind I will write them here. I am calling this collection Ishrayein - please comment and give encouragement read and review pls. The scenes are track oriented and one off. There is no continuum to the scenes.

Scene 1:: see below
Scene 2:: page 4
Scene 3 :: page 6
Scene 4 :: page 8



Scene 1
Toshiji was observing her eldest son from the kitchen, raman was working from home, his back was aching, he was supposed to be checking emails on his laptop, but her son seemed to be smiling more than anything. She walked around him without his notice and saw that Raman was busy watching photos of his wife, toshi smiled to herself. She returned to the kitchen and cleared her throat..and started muttering about sambhar

Arrey kya hua Ma?? Kya apne aap se baat kar rahi ho?
Arrey kuch nahi beta, buss main soch rahi thi ki ishima ke liye aaj kuch madrasi khana banuu
Kya? Chodho ma! Kissi ko nahi khana madrasi khanna, aaj aap chole banvaye mujahe bahut khane ka mun kar Raha hai
Raman puttar, kabhi socha hai iss shaadi mei ishita ko kya mila hai?
Kya matlab?
Dekho, she sits next to him, hamei ek pyaari bahu mili, Romi and simmi ko sabse achee bhabhi, Ruhi ko tho India ki best mummy mili, tumne apni beti ek liye ek lajawab maa mili.. Ishita ko kya mila?? Dekh Raman abb time aa Gaya ki hum bhi ishita ke liye kuch kare.. Usey iss ghar mei Dhair saara pyaar Miley
Kya matlab? Tho abb kya ussey pyaar nahi milta.. Hum kya use Dushman banai hai kya?
Pyaar tho hum sabse mil Jataa hai, Lekin woh ehsaas de ki woh kissi ki zaroorat hai, woh tho abb takk ..
Ma..Jo Kehna chahte ho Saaf Saaf batao- waise bhi meri kamar tooti huyi hai..
Toshi sees him getting up and moving towards his bedroom and finally says ek biwi ek liye uski pati ka pyaar ki baat kar rahi hoon Raman, Baaki tum tho Bade CEO ho, itni Akkal tho tumhe hai.

Raman replies by shutting the bedroom door, lying down on the bed thinking of what his mother said. He wakes up to lot of hulchul in the house, his back seems fine, but his wife is in front of the mirror putting a pair of earrings, as always taking his breath away

Kya hua? Ghar mei itna Hungama kya hai?
Arrey mummyji be AAPko bataya nahi, sab log dinner ek liye Bahar jaa rahe hai
Achaea? Mujahe tho kissi ne bataya nahi.. Tho tum kya sis iliye San rahi ho? Ruhi kahaa hai?
Ruhi aaj raat Amma ke so rahi hai.. Bachey Vandana Akka and Mihika ke saath pizza khayenge aur hum sab Baaki dinner ek liye jaa rahe hai.. Chaliye na aap bhi uthiye
Mujahe mood nahi hai
Kya hua, walks closer to him, abhi bhi dard hai?
She stands so close to him, he begins to tingle, he shifts and she sits next to him
Abhi bhi dard hai
Loving her attention, just mutters thoda sa hai
Layiye, Mai thoda balm laga doon, medicine liya, aap bhi na, bina pain killer liye so gaye. Rukiye main davai Lati Hun
She brings the medicine and glass of water to him, he watches her closely with a smile on his face, sari nayi hai kya?
Kya?
Nahi main pooch Raha thaa ki apni salary saadiyon mei spend karo gee tho budhape mei
She stops him and pops a pill into his mouth, chuchap davai le lijiye, hamei nikalana hai
He drinks the water gives her the glass main kahin nahi jaa raha
She pouts a little taking the glass from him and just as soon as she keeps it on the side table, he holds her hand, caresses it, tum bhi Ruk jaao, please
She is shocked at his please, tongutied, walking out of the bedroom door, turns to him and smiles at his smiling face, Lait jao, main balm leke Aati hoon and laughs at his blushing face

The next morning, Ishita is driving her husband to his office, she keeps stealing glances at him, but he is quiet, and only looks at her when she is not looking at him.
Aa Gaye Aapki office, phone kar dijiye, main pick up kar lungi
He watches her smile, smiling back, holds her hand, Tum thik ho na? I mean
She smiles back, Mr Bhalla main koyi nazukk kali nahi hoon, I am fine and very happy
He grins at his wife and their new found love makes him happy Nazuk aur tum, woh tho kal raat pata chal Gaya ke JKR kyun ho tum
She smiles, aur AAPko kya ho Gaya thaa?? Ravan Kumar bade ram Kumar nikle, was not expecting huh?
Kyun koyee complaints? Smiles
Nahi bilkul nahi, it was nice, Lekin main expect ravan ko kar rahi thii
Pulls her hand towards him and her head is on his shoulder, kisses her forehead, aaj raat main ravan ban ke dikhaunga, tayaar rehna..
Ishita raises her head and grins at him, Raman gives her a hard kiss on her mouth and gets off the car. She cannot wait for the night!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS dear😊..Im not sure what Im missing here but I feel something happened overnight😉😆Ek dum kiss wiss karne laga Raavan kumar😃😃Not that Im complaining😉😉..but was jsut curious how Raavan become Ram in just one night?😉😉..Toshiji's words gave him enlightenment I guess😃😃..
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Originally posted by: simples28

Nice OS dear😊..Im not sure what Im missing here but I feel something happened overnight😉😆Ek dum kiss wiss karne laga Raavan kumar😃😃Not that Im complaining😉😉..but was jsut curious how Raavan become Ram in just one night?😉😉..Toshiji's words gave him enlightenment I guess😃😃..


Yes I did not want to write detailed love scene I don't know how 😕 But I felt like writing something which shows that Raman has a side or him which only ishita will see in their privacy - shall write one more maybe later which brings this out more! But later hopeing more members read and comment on this one thanks for comment appreciate
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Would be nice to c more comments thx
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Thank you for your comment
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crucial part skip kar di...koyi nahi, it was beautiful and guess kardiya ke kya hua hoga...

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Originally posted by: vidya.anand

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crucial part skip kar di...koyi nahi, it was beautiful and guess kardiya ke kya hua hoga...



😆 That was the point. I am planning another OS with the crucial part but waiting for more comments
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Thanks for the comment
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Shrt nd nyc os yaar gud 2 c raman lyk tat, bcz in serial it take anthr 200 epi happen lyk dis.. what toshi said 2 raman was exactly i was thnkng bcz raman sumtimes bhve weird(aise thaane maar tha hai jaise kuch ehsaan kar raha hai ishu par) 1 step frwd n reltnshp nxt mvemnt 10 step bckwrd...
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Originally posted by: sweetiepiee090

Shrt nd nyc os yaar gud 2 c raman lyk tat, bcz in serial it take anthr 200 epi happen lyk dis.. what toshi said 2 raman was exactly i was thnkng bcz raman sumtimes bhve weird(aise thaane maar tha hai jaise kuch ehsaan kar raha hai ishu par) 1 step frwd n reltnshp nxt mvemnt 10 step bckwrd...



Thanks so much for the comment - you are exactly right about one step forward 10 steps backward I feel in the serial they are nit moving ahead at all

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