Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

awww beautifully written as always...loved it!

Read this quote some time back and had used for my story caption too...felt it apt here after reading ur OS

it was along these lines...

The greatest distance is when I am right in front of you but cannot tell u how much I love u...❤️

Originally posted by: exploringmyself

loved it!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: -MariaMars-

Aani.. Firstly thanks for writing an OS on our request last night 🤗

You write so beautifully.. You should join as YHM CV yaar...

Thanks Maria glad you liked this one so much 🤗 and 😆 if I join the CVs I doubt I would be able to write on IF 😉

I need to confess something.. I don't like to read be it books or stories. But after coming to this forum only i started reading all the OS, SS here. Infact have become addicted to it.. Thanks to wonderful writers like you..

No issues my bestie hates reading too but she is addicted to fan-fictions of her fav shows mostly TVD and I just cant get into that show though I find Ian Somerhalder delicious 😆

How SBS is good with their songs edit more than episode editors, the same way our forum OS writers are way better than our CVs 😆 Wish they could read these amazing stories here and get inspired..

LOL this thing cracked me up I cant know how good I am compared to the CVs cos their work inspires me but thank you for the compliment anyways but yeah on the editing part I agree EK should hire the guys who work for SBS/B and fire the one who does this show cos he/she sucks

I simply loved the way you narrated it.. This is what i expected from the scene but thanks to the editors and some in between crap romi-sarika ji romance killed the shower scene.. only saving grace was the eye lock.. But still it could have been way better.. In certain shows leads are not comfy doing such scenes, but here we have both leads who are comfy doing such scenes but editors/director don't get the best out of them.. Sigh..

☺️ thanks Maria and yeah trust the editor to kill our buzz even in normal scenes like urghh

The small scene in the room was the best for me yest.. The blush , the looks and the dialogues.. DiVan just killed it... I was so happy reading your OS and was just imagining IshRa and it definitely made me smile... Too good Aani... Keep writing more..🤗

And I loved the bedroom scene too no words and yet it spoke louder than words could have of the impact of the moment they shared thanks Maria glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

loved it..each and every moment of that scene is portrayed well..really it was an amazing work..

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow..nice story
Raman's emotions penned very well
u extended d shower scene n it was marvelous
loved it :)

Originally posted by: columbia

Kya likthi ho yaar dil khushi se dance marey

Originally posted by: twerping

Beautiful!

Originally posted by: --Sia--

Lovely OS Aani ...

I was not so happy with yesterday shower scene but didn't say anything because I didn't want to spoil the atmosphere here and get some chappals on my b'day 😆

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

Wow!
Truly one of the best works I've read on ISHRA, simply scintillating, your reading is so soothing. I'm not sure if that's the correct usage of the word, but you get my point, it's so refreshing and light, that by the end of the OS you're mesmerised by life and amazed at how a certain piece of writing fiction can provide you exactly what you need, solace from the hullabaloo of the daily life.
Simply amazing
The best line which I feel suits ISHRA aptly in the current situation :
Their equations have changed and now the question of them crossing this thin line, this boundary no longer starts with an if but has become a matter of when.

You're truly a prolific writer, I don't know what you do, though I wouldn't be surprised if I find your name on the book racks some day. Let me know if I have something in particular, already to look for? Would love to read your work!
Take care.

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Wow!!! Would you believe me if I told you that I was dying to read your version of the shower scene? Your incomparable imagination and beautiful words elevated the entire scene to another level!! Kudos to you dear friend... Proud to be your fan!!