Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Just i was goin thru the last nyt ishra scene...

the visualising n the writing...

was so matching the situation...

nice n sweet updt... :)

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aah aani..i feel SO CONTENT now readin this OS...u did justice to evry single moment...n shower disaster ko totally u covered up here in ur own epic beautiful style..!!

simply LOVED LOVED this OS.....

thanks Nikki the editing killed it as always 💔 seriously could you ask Sonali mam to convey our this problem to the concerned person

n woman..i AM SHOCKED AGAIN at our co-incidences..😲😆...for u now IshRa is the couple on which u hv written max os till date na...

Yep posted my 28th on em today and the show isnt even a year old nor have the confessed or anything I am doomed and so are you Nikki 😆

similar is the case with me..i mean out of 31 forums,i hv made 446 topics in 22 forums by now n MJHT mein 2009 se leke ab tak i hv made 233 topics(highest topic count)...

WOW I cant even imagine this - I mean I have joined IF before you but look at the no of my posts 😆

But when show ws on air,THE NUMBER OF MJHT EPISODE RELATED TOPICS ws 71...i made 71 mjht epi related topics from june 2009-nov 2010...but u knw what... now in YHM,out of 79 topics i made till now 69 r YHM epi topics...n i started makin YHM topics from Feb 2014 only evn though am in forum frm dec 2013 onwards..so u gettin my point?lik for u IshRa made u write max os..soon YHM will cross the HIGHEST NUMBER OF EPI TOPICS for ANY SHOW-which ws held by MJHT till now for me in these 5 years will be broken with YHM n tht too 71+ epi topics in just 8 months..😲😆

I swear MJHT had me be so crazy cos of SaJan but this is a new level of insanity for even me 😆 and I joined the show around Feb during the time IshRa got married and the forum somewhere around the same time too

what hv this show done to both of us?😲😆

Beats me Nikki what would become of us once they confess or at least accept to themselves they are in love 🤪 I so want Raman to woo Ishita damn I am dying for that day already and when it does we would be in la-la land

Originally posted by: redwine1

What can one say after such a soulful post ...

I wish the DIRECTOR of this show actually reads this post .. one must bring it to his attention ...

Hey Ruby thank you 😳 I think the editors are as much to blame here in fact more we cant say what the director shot was his fault or not really also the writers must have given some vague description perhaps for this scene 🤔

U know the one thing lacking in yesterdays scene for me was ...there was NO SOUL in that scene ... u had water flowing ... u had 2 people staring ... what was missed was the SILENT COMMUNICATION ... Ur bit about the fact that he stopped her when she first turned to go was simply brilliant ... i would've loved to see a variation of that ( not exactly stop ... but a variation) ... the scene ended to abruptly ... a million angles to the shot .. but no end ...

Thank you for saying that really I felt I was the only one who thought so their scene in the rain - the first one - ek duje ke vaaste had more fire than this one did as per me cos the way it was shot was brilliant here the editing killed it and so did the vagueness of the way it was shot also I would have loved to see something apart from an eyelock and the song too - him holding her hand...something anything - why did he want to say something to her when he comes dressed in the robe and why is she so shy... what could have upped the ante of what transpired that made them feel the way they did in their scene in the bedroom post the shower scene

Today as a viewer i feel satisfied after reading ur post ... now i have some take away of how it could've moved .. Thank u for the absolutely wonderful OS ..

😳☺️ glad to know that

About ur writing .. somehow this seemed to oame out directly from ur heart .. it was not simply story telling .. .it was full of repressed passion & intensity ... ( all that was lacking in that scene) ... ((((HUGS))))) Aani ... this is one of my fav ones of Urs ... simply brilliant ..

🤗 Thanks Ruby - like you said the scene lacked a repressed passion which finally found a channel to express itself for the first time which is what I wanted to see and hence wrote

Originally posted by: whitelily

lovely os

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Aani, I have a doubt since a long time. ... are you a professional story or script writer? 😳

Kahaan se aathi ho Yaara? 😉

Marvelously written , with every word oozing out that classic aura that mesmerise the senses of the reader! 👏

Strong advice to you,

Send in all ur posts to ektha, we yhm forum waasis will be more than glad , just floating on cloud 9!⭐️

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome and lovely one shot

raman thoughts were very well written.

I like that you included beauty and the beast story.

Indeed Raman was the beast but now he is turning into cintent prince because of his belle's belief and trust in him and his innocent heart.

wonderful 👏

Originally posted by: Jyoe

res!

Edited finally! 😊

Aani, I can't thank you enough for writing this OS! and can i say I really really love you and your writing. You are the BEST when it comes to any writing on YHM !

Hey Jyo thank you ☺️ and love ya too

You know what, I was just kidding in the LU when I has asked you what are we supposed to imagine😉 when I felt the scene was absruptly ended and you said its left to our imagination! and some of us pressurised you into writing an OS to give wings to our imagination! and glad are we that we did that. otherwise, we would not have probably got this OS!😆

😆 I know you were kidding me back there but I felt something lacking myself in the scene maybe because of the as usual shabby editing that I wanted to do my take on it and since you guys encouraged me so much I thought yeah I def should write on it 😳

How beautiful have you written Aani! Yes the shower scene was great that they showed on episode, it was hariyaali to the eyes and for the romantics in us that yes finally something happening btwn the two at physical intimacy level... but it clearly was not complete for me.. I felt there was something lacking, something missing..and I could not connect with the scene...and you my dear have filled that missing part for me through this OS. The emotions/the feelings..you expressed btwn ishra is what exactly was missing in the scene and I got them here through this OS.

I know the scene was wonderful hell the precap had me excited and knowing our editors I should have been prepared and not expected much but this lacked punch somehow cos of the shabby editing and while DivAn gave their best - the writer perhaps was too vague in the description of the scene which is why the way the director could only do so much and of course leave our editors to ruin a good thing this scene should have made them uncomfortable to finally acknowledge the sexual tension that has always been present amidst them, to come face to face with the attraction that simmers which they hold back always but finally the mask slipped and the first chink in the armor appeared

I have said that earlier also what I miss in the show, you complete and show that here that for me through your writings!

☺️

I read OSJ's post where she talked about the shower scene through Ishita's POV and in this OS of yours you talked about Raman's POV! And NOW is what I say, has this shower scene has fully been justified and completed for me in every sense. This is exactly what I was hoping and looking for in that scene!

Do you mind sharing the post I would love to know and read it 😳

Aani, I am very romantic person..hopelessly diehard romantic person, and everytime i read something written by you, I always have this smile on my face and it gives me so much of positivity and sukoon to my mind, my heart and lalso touches my soul!

I am not sure if I am a romantic or not but yeah I do love romance and the idea of it but cant say I am easily impressed 😆 for me romance isnt in grand gestures but in the little things, gestures and words so I am glad that my words have this effect on you 😳

You are such a beautiful writer and I really dont have words to say what a pleasure it is reading your writings... You put deep dive into the characters and show us their souls! Your writings capture the minds, thoughts, hearts, feelings, emotions, souls of us viewers. Thats how brilliant you are!!

thank you 😃

I am in awe of your writing as always and once again..thank you so much for writing this OS on our request!!

BIG HUG for that 🤗

🤗 Thanks once again Jyo just posted another one today and I hope this show keeps up in the same vein always for me to be inspired as much as I can be 😳

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Omg Aani...thats beautifully written

Awesome ...