Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: btalwar

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And Aani .. Since Besharmi is the flavor of the season ... I want a sequel for this also ... u know Ishita's POV ... 😳😳

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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What a story Aani!!!

Hey Lucky thank you 😊

Just when I thought this was going to be a wistful one, you turned it around and descriptively told us how Raman and Ishita would have reacted immediately in the moment after their 'intimate' moment ended...

I wanted to write this in a certain way...smut for the heck of it doesnt come to me nor am I comfy with writing it just yet so I planned it this way also I thought it would be a different thing for my readers too 😳


The slip n fall was a bonus 😃

Usually am not a fan of this thing but here it would have fit perfectly and went with the situation without being forced or unnatural, people tend to slip on soapy water in bathrooms

I found the last part of the story very interesting. I completed my edit on Nikki's post some time ago, and here's what I said in conclusion. (I won't put in my entire reply)... I loved the fact that your story was also leading there...

"How wonderful it would be to be Raman right now. He's living with a woman for few months now. He sees her as an ideal woman, some one with a golden heart and a strong moral compass. She is his perfect companion, life partner or Humsafar as they say. Now suddenly, BAM... attraction hits him in the face...


I love how you have written this - yep in many ways it is the golden period of his life, the stage where love is blossoming though he is as of yet unaware of it or is trying to deny it all he can but what the mind and heart sometimes can put a lid on... the body cant

He is now going to go through a phase of:

- reconciling his own feelings
- analysing her looks and looking for answers in her face
- trying to maintain the facade of normalcy that they have established after a long time
- forming an approach to how he would want to take these feelings forward
- trying to maintain the delicateness and sensitivity of their relationship.

He has to do all this WHILE he is sleeping in the same room as her. There is no escape for him from her, and hence his feelings too.

Yep he has it tough and with this attraction finally coming to the fore in a way that now none of them can deny nor discard its gonna get harder and since there are feelings involved now too its become even more tougher. Cos previously they had this undercurrent of attraction but that was never acted on but now... with their feelings coming into play its gonna be hard as hell

The reason I said it would be wonderful to be Raman right now is because, he gets to fall in love with the woman he already loves but doesn't know it yet. He gets to woo a woman, who is already his. He gets to find ways to try and wriggle out of the awkward situation he is in, when he himself doesnt want to get out of it... This phase may be the most challenging phase in his life. Only, the challenges are going to be sweet, so he cannot even complain about them! "

Yep somewhere he is already in love with her it happened with little instances like when he saw how she was so effortless with his daughter and went from aunty to mama to maa in the blink of an eye, the goodness of her heart in the various moments she has helped him through. he has tried to put up a wall around him but she is taking it apart brick by brick, so much so he cannot and isnt indifferent to her anymore her happiness means the world to him ... it would be interesting to say what finally makes him give up this war he has with himself and admit yes I love her 😳 and once that happens he would do all he can and more to make sure she falls in love with him unaware that she too is already there with him

"The opposite of Loneliness is not Togetherness , It's Intimacy" - Richard Bach

what a lovely quote Lucky thank you 😊

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Wow that was perfect

Originally posted by: CharmGal

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Originally posted by: Bul3

you are a gifted writer!!amazing OS👏

Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Lovely aani... How i wish cv's tried to show something of this sort...

Originally posted by: serendipity.

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This is beautiful Aaani! This scene, and seriously, if id have written a scene... it wouldve been super close to what yours was 😳 what was running in my mind, more or less, was the same. Your style is just amazing. Intriguing. I loved loved loveddd the Shower scene ❤️ I love ANY cliche scene that IshRa have 😳 😆 so yeah, i loved it, Raman is just ☺️ Im so glad Raman DID stop her and held her, but im ALSO glad that he didnt do anything further... (if i rationally think of it :P and from IshRa and Ishita's POV ;)) OTHERWISE... OH HOW I WOULD HAVE WISHED that theyd have let their passions get the best of them and just let go ;) 😆 but but that doesnt mean it was any less romantic or passionate. I LOVED it... this sure is a new beginning for Ishita and Raman!

Looking forward to more OSes :)

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Beautiful OS Aani..
Wonderfully blended with the story of the Beauty and the Beast with perfect answers from a mother to a child. Answers which will make her child a better woman as she grows old.

And the way you described the emotional upsurge between Ishita and Raman was just incredibly beautiful. Am at a loss of adjectives.
If ever, you write a book do PM me. You will find me standing in preorder/purchase lines for it. That's how much I love your writing

Originally posted by: Bruce_L

"she is the answer to the prayers he made"...you nailed it Aani.

Should I say it again and again that I loved it like all your OS😳

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra

Awesome...