Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS - Page 9

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

lovely

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel

Beautifully written OS..

Loved it..

Originally posted by: Isma_A

Res.

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Brilliant OS Aani Di!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

Originally posted by: appuss

it was brilliant👏👏👏

loved it... thanks for writing this and for the pm😃

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Ahhh, I don't know what am I supposed to say to this one...

It was soulful and passionate at the same time Aani 😳

I was only wishing you write this scene in your words and here we have a brilliant OS on the shower scene, filling all the quotas that the scene didn't...

Hi Anu thank you so much 😊 glad my words could fulfil your wish 😳

Starting from the overflowing passion between the two to the growing need for the other, I don't think this OS could have been any better than the way it is. That's exactly how Ishra's relationship is, it's still blossoming and just as you said, one step ahead giving into the desires would take them 2 steps back. This was something which should have been shown in the scene, how their feelings are changing yet they are trying to hold themselves back still owing to their growing relationship.. The way Raman held her back in this one, if not exactly like this, they should have had some instance in the scene which conveyed their changing equation.. Well the scene itself was a breakthrough given Ishra's bitter sweet relation, but it could have handled a few more things. The scene was made to look romantic, yet it lacked the emotions it was supposed to give away due to the abrupt ending. Through the blushing marathon after it did help a bit... 😉

The blushing marathon was the saving grace to be honest in my opinion else it would have felt so contrived, if they had shown there was no after effect things back to normal like nothing happened to them I might have flinged a shoe at my tv 😆 cos I felt the shower scene lacked the punch it should have had not because it wasn't long or anything but because as usual the editing sucked and all the eyelock with shabby discontinuity didnt make it as pleasing to the eye as it ought to have been

I always love the way you pen their emotions down in the most amazing way possible, be it their fears, uncertainty, yearning, happiness, agony or their unsaid and unrealized love.! 😳

Lovely piece of writing as always Aani ❤️ Always looking forward for more from you.!!! Thank you..

thanks Anu 😊

Originally posted by: remya1990

you are a wonderful writer dear.

you know how to give soul to the characters. Such a soothing and emotional story.its not just a story that we read, but its like a beautiful feeling that everyone wants to have.

when i read your writings a smile always come which sustain for many more hours. And now, i have a smile which i know will stay for long.

reading your writings makes me really pleasant and a positive vibe always forms in me.

Brilliant you are as you know to calm anyone with your words.

thank you anie for your brilliant writings.

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for PM.

It was so Romantic OS.😳

Raman feelings were so cutely explained.

The story was so nice.😊

The whole part was so Beautifully explained.😳

Your imagination was so beautiful,I love it.😳