Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

wow..nice story
Raman's emotions penned very well
u extended d shower scene n it was marvelous
loved it :)

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columbia

@columbia

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Kya likthi ho yaar dil khushi se dance marey

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--Sia--

@--Sia--

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Lovely OS Aani ...

I was not so happy with yesterday shower scene but didn't say anything because I didn't want to spoil the atmosphere here and get some chappals on my b'day 😆

Edited by --Sia-- - 10 years ago

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wow!
Truly one of the best works I've read on ISHRA, simply scintillating, your reading is so soothing. I'm not sure if that's the correct usage of the word, but you get my point, it's so refreshing and light, that by the end of the OS you're mesmerised by life and amazed at how a certain piece of writing fiction can provide you exactly what you need, solace from the hullabaloo of the daily life.
Simply amazing
The best line which I feel suits ISHRA aptly in the current situation :
Their equations have changed and now the question of them crossing this thin line, this boundary no longer starts with an if but has become a matter of when.

You're truly a prolific writer, I don't know what you do, though I wouldn't be surprised if I find your name on the book racks some day. Let me know if I have something in particular, already to look for? Would love to read your work!
Take care.

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wow!!! Would you believe me if I told you that I was dying to read your version of the shower scene? Your incomparable imagination and beautiful words elevated the entire scene to another level!! Kudos to you dear friend... Proud to be your fan!!

Edited by tanya_vi - 10 years ago

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Brilliant OS Aani Di!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Just i was goin thru the last nyt ishra scene...

the visualising n the writing...

was so matching the situation...

nice n sweet updt... :)

sorry yahaan dobaara post kar rahi hoom but I am in love with that cat...awww its so cute ❤️

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Ahhh, I don't know what am I supposed to say to this one...

It was soulful and passionate at the same time Aani 😳

I was only wishing you write this scene in your words and here we have a brilliant OS on the shower scene, filling all the quotas that the scene didn't...

Starting from the overflowing passion between the two to the growing need for the other, I don't think this OS could have been any better than the way it is. That's exactly how Ishra's relationship is, it's still blossoming and just as you said, one step ahead giving into the desires would take them 2 steps back. This was something which should have been shown in the scene, how their feelings are changing yet they are trying to hold themselves back still owing to their growing relationship.. The way Raman held her back in this one, if not exactly like this, they should have had some instance in the scene which conveyed their changing equation.. Well the scene itself was a breakthrough given Ishra's bitter sweet relation, but it could have handled a few more things. The scene was made to look romantic, yet it lacked the emotions it was supposed to give away due to the abrupt ending. Through the blushing marathon after it did help a bit... 😉

I always love the way you pen their emotions down in the most amazing way possible, be it their fears, uncertainty, yearning, happiness, agony or their unsaid and unrealized love.! 😳

Lovely piece of writing as always Aani ❤️ Always looking forward for more from you.!!! Thank you..

Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 10 years ago

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appuss

@appuss

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

it was brilliant👏👏👏

loved it... thanks for writing this and for the pm😃

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

you are a wonderful writer dear.

you know how to give soul to the characters. Such a soothing and emotional story.its not just a story that we read, but its like a beautiful feeling that everyone wants to have.

when i read your writings a smile always come which sustain for many more hours. And now, i have a smile which i know will stay for long.

reading your writings makes me really pleasant and a positive vibe always forms in me.

Brilliant you are as you know to calm anyone with your words.

thank you anie for your brilliant writings.