Ehsaas Bheege Bheege Tere Mere - IshRa OS - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a story Aani!!!

Just when I thought this was going to be a wistful one, you turned it around and descriptively told us how Raman and Ishita would have reacted immediately in the moment after their 'intimate' moment ended...

The slip n fall was a bonus 😃

I found the last part of the story very interesting. I completed my edit on Nikki's post some time ago, and here's what I said in conclusion. (I won't put in my entire reply)... I loved the fact that your story was also leading there...

"How wonderful it would be to be Raman right now. He's living with a woman for few months now. He sees her as an ideal woman, some one with a golden heart and a strong moral compass. She is his perfect companion, life partner or Humsafar as they say. Now suddenly, BAM... attraction hits him in the face...

He is now going to go through a phase of:

- reconciling his own feelings
- analysing her looks and looking for answers in her face
- trying to maintain the facade of normalcy that they have established after a long time
- forming an approach to how he would want to take these feelings forward
- trying to maintain the delicateness and sensitivity of their relationship.

He has to do all this WHILE he is sleeping in the same room as her. There is no escape for him from her, and hence his feelings too.

The reason I said it would be wonderful to be Raman right now is because, he gets to fall in love with the woman he already loves but doesn't know it yet. He gets to woo a woman, who is already his. He gets to find ways to try and wriggle out of the awkward situation he is in, when he himself doesnt want to get out of it... This phase may be the most challenging phase in his life. Only, the challenges are going to be sweet, so he cannot even complain about them! "

"The opposite of Loneliness is not Togetherness , It's Intimacy" - Richard Bach
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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edited my post in pg 1...aani...somethin spl i hv written..waitin for ur reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
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you are a gifted writer!!amazing OS👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely aani... How i wish cv's tried to show something of this sort...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RESERVEDDD!

This is beautiful Aaani! This scene, and seriously, if id have written a scene... it wouldve been super close to what yours was 😳 what was running in my mind, more or less, was the same. Your style is just amazing. Intriguing. I loved loved loveddd the Shower scene ❤️ I love ANY cliche scene that IshRa have 😳 😆 so yeah, i loved it, Raman is just ☺️ Im so glad Raman DID stop her and held her, but im ALSO glad that he didnt do anything further... (if i rationally think of it :P and from IshRa and Ishita's POV ;)) OTHERWISE... OH HOW I WOULD HAVE WISHED that theyd have let their passions get the best of them and just let go ;) 😆 but but that doesnt mean it was any less romantic or passionate. I LOVED it... this sure is a new beginning for Ishita and Raman!

Looking forward to more OSes :)
Edited by serendipity. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful OS Aani..
Wonderfully blended with the story of the Beauty and the Beast with perfect answers from a mother to a child. Answers which will make her child a better woman as she grows old.

And the way you described the emotional upsurge between Ishita and Raman was just incredibly beautiful. Am at a loss of adjectives.
If ever, you write a book do PM me. You will find me standing in preorder/purchase lines for it. That's how much I love your writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"she is the answer to the prayers he made"...you nailed it Aani.
Should I say it again and again that I loved it like all your OS😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww beautifully written as always...loved it!
Read this quote some time back and had used for my story caption too...felt it apt here after reading ur OS
it was along these lines...
The greatest distance is when I am right in front of you but cannot tell u how much I love u...❤️



Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aani.. Firstly thanks for writing an OS on our request last night 🤗

You write so beautifully.. You should join as YHM CV yaar...

I need to confess something.. I don't like to read be it books or stories. But after coming to this forum only i started reading all the OS, SS here. Infact have become addicted to it.. Thanks to wonderful writers like you..

How SBS is good with their songs edit more than episode editors, the same way our forum OS writers are way better than our CVs 😆 Wish they could read these amazing stories here and get inspired..

I simply loved the way you narrated it.. This is what i expected from the scene but thanks to the editors and some in between crap romi-sarika ji romance killed the shower scene.. only saving grace was the eye lock.. But still it could have been way better.. In certain shows leads are not comfy doing such scenes, but here we have both leads who are comfy doing such scenes but editors/director don't get the best out of them.. Sigh..

The small scene in the room was the best for me yest.. The blush , the looks and the dialogues.. DiVan just killed it... I was so happy reading your OS and was just imagining IshRa and it definitely made me smile... Too good Aani... Keep writing more..🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it..each and every moment of that scene is portrayed well..really it was an amazing work..

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