Raman Ramblings: Sarakti Jaaye Rukh se Naqaab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wowww...dis is soo AWESOME...

beutifully penned...

luvd it👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Veeann
Awesome. Brilliantly written. Your descriptions of Raman's emotions are so apt. Bravo👏

Thank You 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: serendipity.
aaah! This was super awesome Lucky! :D
UFF! ❤️

Sorry i have been irregular at commenting. Have been super busy 😳

Long time no see Reeno... 😊

Thank you for the comments !

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nichuss
gud one lucky...
u wrote the embarass moment n confusion clearly...

he was really surprised and was shocked ended in trance...

and it made so beautiful the moment

Thank You Nichuss 😊 Yes... I was trying to capture that trance. I am glad you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Autumn.
Totally Awesome!!

Thank You 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: FieryLioness
amazing Lucky... wow , u perfectly wrote Raman's thoughts on his last few epis actions...
the best was last part...i was thinking the same since yesterday epi..and here u too wrote it...its abt Ishita...her comfort being in same room and do her work in his presence ...in whole scene this thought caught me the most... she was aware of his presence but she was not uncomfortable...well i think it so...
u wrote it as Raman's thoughts so perfectly ...loved it...

btw can u plz tell me which gazal is this? if u have link
or just tell me singer name

Hey Meet...

Thanks for liking this 😊 Yes, thats the point I want to make too. She was comfortable enough to be doing that when he was in the room. If she thought of him as a 'stranger' she would surely have gone to Ruhi's room or even changed what she was wearing!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So good to see u back Lucky di with ramblings which is ur fort 😊
You've explored Raman's mind n have given words to his silent words n delineated his mental state accurately.
Last paragraph has totally wooed me 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Sia--
its Awesome lucky ...

Thanks Sia 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rutu83
loved it!
that last para was fantastic- i'm looking forward to that in the show. raman is action oriented. once he figures out this dekha confusion, he'll go after ishu.
you have a knack for pinning down raman's thoughts- i love your raman ramblings 👏 would it be too greedy to ask for one weekly at least 😃😳

Thanks Rutu 😊

no it wont be too greedy, but I am very temperamental 😆 I will try though, whenever inspiration hits me!

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