Raman Ramblings: Sarakti Jaaye Rukh se Naqaab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awww that was so brilliant!
loved how u brought out the situation and what he was thinking about her embarrassment or shyness!

Thanks Vidya 😊 even I was a bit confused if she was really embarrassed or shy, so I wrote it... but I guess we are clear now after tonight's epi 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
aah lucky,..so so perfect..esp last two paragraphs..

THank You Nikki 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lucky I'm so glad that you've been able to pen something down, have been missing your words!.

First off can I just say that I'm so glad that you touched upon Adi being present when Raman went to the party- I'm glad he acknowledged with hindsight that it would have been preferable if Adi wasnt there- all down to being a good parent.

Now getting back to the main man himself, I always feel when I'm reading your ramblings that I'm getting more of an insight into the Raman portrayed on screen- your Raman is really an extension of that and you bring to life exactly where the creatives leave off on screen.

And yes can't believe I of all people am saying this but yes this was on the shorter side for you😳😆 hope we get to see a lot more 'rambling'😛

Fab work as always such a pleasure to read hun🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Beautifully penned..
Loved it totally

Thank You 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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edited previous post
but forgot to mention- loved loved loved the two lines from gazal

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I love the ramblings but I've noticed I'm always more absorbed when you write on Raman😳..and here the thing that I liked most surprisingly was the start, where he's thinking he shouldn't have done what he did in front of Adi. I think that's what Raman would have thought, but probably while trying to lay more focus on his anger about the license issue, they overlooked the fact that Adi being there would normally make him think twice. So was glad to read it this way.

Needless to say, loved the rest, from his reaction to her being pleased to his thoughts when he saw her stitching the hook on, everything beautifully described and all so Raman. <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Very good lucky

Wish writers have some thought process behind the sequence like you

Anyway we can always imagine

Thank You Leo... 😊

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