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res 😳
Lucky how perfect can you get each time I read a piece I think this one is the best and you manage to bring in another one that supersedes it, the whole way you have penned down the thoughts about what happened with Raman last week in the show - how he managed to admit it finally that his marriage with Ishita is now beyond the Sirf Ruhi ke Liye tag and he actually sees her as his life partner, as his better half is so amazing.
Not to mention how you described the hook scene I swear i was kinda in a fix when and how to write it until I wrote the OS I posted today... it has to be written in a way that of course reveals desire, attraction but also should sound crass which is what you have managed here my friend.
The end especially has me bowled over since your Raman clearly wont take as much of a time as the one on the show as he knows what he wants and is a man on a mission, I do hope you write something which shows us how your Raman manages to charm the socks off of his wifey 😆
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