Raman Ramblings: Sarakti Jaaye Rukh se Naqaab - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

fab write up lucky 👏 I loved his thought process in ending and his thoughts for her . and yes lines from ghazal. I din know you are fond of ghazal . keep writing more.



Hey Zene... Thanks 😊 I love lyrical music of any form... ghazals just happen to be one of my weak spots 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Jyoe

loved these Raman ramblings lucky!😊

I always wanted to hear this kind of a monologue from Raman about Ishita! We do get that sometimes but it always has that nok jok fun element added to it (which is nice) but kinda takes away the heartfelt impact it would make otherwise! I want to see Raman talking to himself about his growing feelings for Ishita and same way Ishita talking to herself about her growing feelings for Raman... the way Ishita had earlier done during the paper tissue message passing on waala episode!

Beautifully written! If only CVs came here to this forum and read some of the stuff you guys wrote...😊



Hey Jyo... such kind words 😳 thank you very much...

and yes we end up getting cute scenes, yes, but some times I feel like shaking these two up and make them talk to each other!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yo lucky, i am also fond of ghazals but never found good source online for ghazals 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

yo lucky, i am also fond of ghazals but never found good source online for ghazals 😔



I'll PM something to you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RESwa

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Finally Raman thinks and retrospects on his feelings ... so what if its in your OS and not in the show.

Very well written Lucky 👏... missed reading your works in the past few days 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PreruS

OMG!! lucky, that writing of ur's left me spellbound.. u so amazingly expressed Raman's feelings.. It was simply perfect!!



Thanks Preru 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RisingAsh

Wow..nw thtz smthing really beautiful.. I loved it Lucky ❤️



Thank you Ash 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Swati 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: happenstance

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Lucky I'm so glad that you've been able to pen something down, have been missing your words!.

First off can I just say that I'm so glad that you touched upon Adi being present when Raman went to the party- I'm glad he acknowledged with hindsight that it would have been preferable if Adi wasnt there- all down to being a good parent.

Now getting back to the main man himself, I always feel when I'm reading your ramblings that I'm getting more of an insight into the Raman portrayed on screen- your Raman is really an extension of that and you bring to life exactly where the creatives leave off on screen.

And yes can't believe I of all people am saying this but yes this was on the shorter side for you😳😆 hope we get to see a lot more 'rambling'😛

Fab work as always such a pleasure to read hun🤗



Hey Uz 😊

I saw Adi scared by Raman's anger and hiding behind Shagun and I really felt for him no child deserves to be in the midst of drama like this.

and you are complaining about the size of this piece 😡 now you see how it feels? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

I love the ramblings but I've noticed I'm always more absorbed when you write on Raman😳..and here the thing that I liked most surprisingly was the start, where he's thinking he shouldn't have done what he did in front of Adi. I think that's what Raman would have thought, but probably while trying to lay more focus on his anger about the license issue, they overlooked the fact that Adi being there would normally make him think twice. So was glad to read it this way.

Needless to say, loved the rest, from his reaction to her being pleased to his thoughts when he saw her stitching the hook on, everything beautifully described and all so Raman. <3



Hey Thank you so much 😊 Yes, I wanted to touch upon Adi's presence because seeing him hide behind Shagun made me feel a bit uncomfortable

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