Raman Ramblings: Sarakti Jaaye Rukh se Naqaab - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow a great piece on Raman n ya their relationship is progressing Ahista Ahista btw I love that Ghazal 🤗 there relationship is like Haule haule hojayega pyar chaliya 😆
Some things in life are meant to b savored slowly it's like a drug which will slowly run through ur veins mixing with the blood n u get d final Kick but the way it's running thru ur body that sensation is more pleasurable than the kick itself. 😆 Raman at this juncture is confused n sure of what he wants to have with this relationship 😆 he wants more out f it but he's afraid to show it too 😆
He wants to shower all d happiness on Ishita but he doesn't want to show it to her 😛 he loves playing cat n mouse game wid her loves teasing her irritating her that way he's making sure that she will think only about him all d time 😆 (an ode to Krishna for his janmashtami today Krishna too wud do same wid Radha tease n play pranks so that she longed more for him 😳)
Raman did all d stupidest pranks but when he saw a drop of tear falling from his beloveds eyes he had to delete that video he knew that some things in life r worth giving up for 😳 as far as that Blouse n see track is concerned both r feeling the physical intimacy although they were like 3 feet apart. Ishita has full trust in him that he won't tread his limit. Raman thinking about it n maturely handling bathrobe gifting was Gud too 👏 he knew she felt embarrassed about it. 😆
Overall I love ur ramblings n take on their progress dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnr123

Wow a great piece on Raman n ya their relationship is progressing Ahista Ahista btw I love that Ghazal 🤗 there relationship is like Haule haule hojayega pyar chaliya 😆
Some things in life are meant to b savored slowly it's like a drug which will slowly run through ur veins mixing with the blood n u get d final Kick but the way it's running thru ur body that sensation is more pleasurable than the kick itself. 😆 Raman at this juncture is confused n sure of what he wants to have with this relationship 😆 he wants more out f it but he's afraid to show it too 😆
He wants to shower all d happiness on Ishita but he doesn't want to show it to her 😛 he loves playing cat n mouse game wid her loves teasing her irritating her that way he's making sure that she will think only about him all d time 😆 (an ode to Krishna for his janmashtami today Krishna too wud do same wid Radha tease n play pranks so that she longed more for him 😳)
Raman did all d stupidest pranks but when he saw a drop of tear falling from his beloveds eyes he had to delete that video he knew that some things in life r worth giving up for 😳 as far as that Blouse n see track is concerned both r feeling the physical intimacy although they were like 3 feet apart. Ishita has full trust in him that he won't tread his limit. Raman thinking about it n maturely handling bathrobe gifting was Gud too 👏 he knew she felt embarrassed about it. 😆
Overall I love ur ramblings n take on their progress dear.


Thanks 😊 I love this ghazal so much!

Yes, their cat and mouse game (and I like the Krishna-Radha analogy too!) is so pleasurable for us viewers to watch too.

Yes, Poor Raman, when he saw her crying, he was like "maa sab aapki galti hai. aapne mujhe pehle kyon nahin bola" and ran behind her with the water... that was so precious 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res 😳

Lucky how perfect can you get each time I read a piece I think this one is the best and you manage to bring in another one that supersedes it, the whole way you have penned down the thoughts about what happened with Raman last week in the show - how he managed to admit it finally that his marriage with Ishita is now beyond the Sirf Ruhi ke Liye tag and he actually sees her as his life partner, as his better half is so amazing.

Not to mention how you described the hook scene I swear i was kinda in a fix when and how to write it until I wrote the OS I posted today... it has to be written in a way that of course reveals desire, attraction but also should sound crass which is what you have managed here my friend.

The end especially has me bowled over since your Raman clearly wont take as much of a time as the one on the show as he knows what he wants and is a man on a mission, I do hope you write something which shows us how your Raman manages to charm the socks off of his wifey 😆


Thanks Aani

@bold... thats what I was supposed to do over the weekend. but i wrote the Ishita piece then got distracted writing the analysis waala post... i completely forgot about this Raman 😆

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