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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 6

Scene starts with Raman entering his room .His wife is sleeping peacefully and he is seeing her almost after a month.

Raman wanted to watch a match and then decides to give up the paln as his wife is sleeping.

Raman "Anh yeh Jhansi ki Rani yahee rahegi."

Raman "Itney din chain sey jee rahan tha abh wapas agayee ."

Then he looks around and understood there is no where to sleep so he lies on the place his wife left for him.He could'nt sleep and his eyes were over his beautiful wife.He just keeps on gazing at her.

He missed her so much he enjoys everything with her quarrels,her lectures and her concern for him.But still he is not ready to accept that he misses her so much.

On other hand his wife who was enacting to be sleeping understood that her husband s gazes are in her and silent smile erupts on her face and she let it that way then Raman suddenly gets a call and he leaves to office for some emergency.

When Raman leaves she get irritated as he left without telling her.He just don't want to disturb her sound sleep.Sothey huin shernee ko nahen jagaathey.

She then feels that Raman missed her the same way she missed him.She to wanted him everyminute with her .

Then not feeling asleep she goes outside waiting for him.She then notices Megha coming outside.

Sauthan "Megha tum soyee nahee?"

Megha "Sauthan neend anhen aarahen hain timming different hain naa Sydney sey.Time lagega fir sey adjust karney mey."

"Megha tum boyfriend key liyen wait kar rahen hon?"

She replies "Nayan jagaha hain naa.Main yaha pehley nayee aye thee."

Megha "Come on jhoot kissey bol rahen hon.Main ney dekha tha kall tumhey jab main iss ghar mey aye thee."

Our lady is shocked.

Megha "Don't panic main ney boyfriebd ko kuch nahen bathaya.Tumney hum dono ko dekha tha aur fir tumney boyfriend ko phone kiyya."

She "Tumney Raman ko kyon naheen bathaya."

Megha "Bathatha tho kyaa hotha.Kuch naheen main jaanthee hun uss buddhu ko.Kuch nahe karega.Maximum daant saktha hain lekin tumsey dartha hain naa"

She "Raman mujhsey dartha hain?"

Megha "Nahen tho kyaa tumhey lag rahan hain kee who kissey ko safaayi dega.Kuch naheen but tumhey dey rahan hain."

Megha "Jab hummare shaadi ke baath aye the.Jab boyfriend ney hee pehley kahan kee yeh nahen ho sakthee.Fir hum donon ney sabko samjhaya.But I am happy for him now."

Megha "Fir Miss Queen sey shaadi.Main naheen the uss waqt nahen tho main boyfriend kaa shaadi ussey kabhee nahen karwaathe."

Our lady was listening care fully.

Megha "Main boyfriend ko hummesha friend key taraha dekha.I mean you know difference between a friend and a life partner."

Megha "Main Boyfriend ka friend hun,main ussey suggest kar sakthe hun aur usskey liyen kuch bhee kar sakthee hun.I care for him .But as a partner I nevr knew I could be with him in every problem ,main ."

Megha "I never could take a right decision in his life because of closeness we have I always listen to him .Main maximum ussey koi suggestion dey sakthee hun,ya thodantime mood change kar sakthe hun lekin ussey who karney mey pressure nahen dal sakthee."

"But if I am a partner I have to do it as his life s related to me and so is his happiness and sorrows.Main uss samay jab ussey decision lena hain uss samay mujhey ussey sahen karney mey madad karnaa hain lekin main yeh naheen kar paathe."

"But jab Boyfriend ka shaadi shagun key saath huin.When I met her first time I understood she is not fit for boyfriend."

"Issliyen main ney kabhee ussey sauthan naheen bulaaya.Who deserve he nahen karthe thee.Miss Queen ."

"Tumhey patha hain Main ussey Mis Queen kyon bulaathe thee.Usska ego key wajaha sey.Who kabhee kissey sey theek sey baath naheen karthee the.Ussko lagatha hain who special hain jaisa kee koi queen raasth bhatak key aagayee."

"Issliyen Miss Queen.Actually missing queen."

"Fir uss samay mujhsey baath karthee the kyon kee main sycdney sey ayeen hun aur trends jaanthe hun.Uss samay mujhey boyfriend key liyen acting karnaa pada."

"But you are not like Who queen.Tum boyfriend ko acche taraha jaanthe hon aur usska khyaal rakhthee hon.Issliyen tum mera sauthan bane tough competition naa."

Our lady smiles at this.She understood that a friend is different from partner.

"Tumhey patha hain mujhey kitnaa maza aa rahan tha tumhey tang karkey .Isslliyen main jaan boochkar boyfriend key pass rahen ussey tumhaarey saamney ."

"Tumhey kitna gussa aa rahan thaa?"

Our lady "Nothing like that."

Megha "Mujhsey jhoot.Yeh nahen ho saktha.Ok I know what is truth .That you love my boyfriend so much.."

Our lady has small blush over her face ."Fir kyaa huan thaa."

"Fir queen ka dhokha aur Ruhi ."

"Boyfriend badal gayya tha.Main kuch nahen kar payee."

"You know I was in guilt that shaayad main boyfriend sey shadi kiya hotha tho yeh naheen hotha.Ruhi Akeley thee Ruhi ussey queen ki yaad dila rahen the aur boyfriend ney ussey avoid karna suru kiyya."

"Buan ney fir sey hummaey shaadi key baarey mey baath kiyya.This time main uss pariwar key liyen karnaa chahthe thee but boyfriend ney manaa kiyya."

"Main ney sort out karney kee koshish kee but kuch nahen huan.I tried my best to stabilize issue.Main jab thak thee main ney Miss R ko boyfriend key saath rakha.MissR khush thee .But when I went back it changed again."

"But I never thought boyfriend fir sey normal ho jaayega.Miss R sey usska relation accha hain aur fir sey sab kuch suru kiyya."

"All credit goes to you.Tumney mere boyfriend ko waapas laaya.I always love you for this.Boyfriend ko tum jaisey partner mile."

"Main tumsey milney aana chahthee thee aur aagayee.Abh main yaheen rehungi kuch mahiney."

Megha feels sleepy and leaves.

Then her sauthan is thinking something.

"Kyaa pathi aur patni friends naheen ho sakthey ya friends pathi patni naheen ho sakthey."

"Kyaa Raman key life mey mera itnaa value hain tho who khud kyo naheen bathatha."

"Main Raman ka dosth nahen ho sakthee but I have a bigger value .Main Raman ke Biwi hun.But why din't I realize this ."

"Raman hummesha mera husband thaa ussney mujhey saara haq diyya tha aur mainey sirf dosthi ka naam rakha."

Then remembering his kiss.and blushing.

"Mainey ussey dantha tha.""Raman kitna hurt huan hoga."

"Isslieyn mujhsey baath nahen kar rahan thaa."

"But yeh kaisa solution huan.Mujhsey door Akeley."

"Mujehy kuch karnaa hoga."

Then she remembers MEgha telling that she loves Raman.

"Main Raman sey pyaar." She gets a smile as the person who judged was not a small person but her Sauthan.

Yup Shagun never deserved the word Sauthan as Megha did.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
lovely update😊
plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Then did you like Megha in her new avatar.Serious and mature over relations.Protective side over her sauthan and Miss R.
I am planning confession in next part.
Would it be good?
I added index in page one with direct link.


megha seems nice character liking her...she purposefully making ishra come closer...
thank u for the index...

its a big help for me..since im irregular reader :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
amazing updates
waiting for ishra confession
cont.soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Read all parts till now
Fabulous story once again dear
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
so ishu realisation happened...
waiting to see how ishu goin to make raman realise the love..

i mean acpt him...tat he fallen in love again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 7

Scene starts with our lady waiting for Raman and he don't showup whole night .Instead of getting angry she is happy tha she got time to plan her next step to convince Raman.

Then next morning Ruhi wants to go to her grand parents house so both Megha and her sauthan go there taking Ruhi.

Our lady have different plans.She need a chance to meet her husband alone.So she want to drop her sauthan and daughter there and come back.

Then in Bhalla house Mihika sees Megha for first time.

Mihiki "Ruhi chuhi kaja gayee thee tum .Tumney chitti sey miley bina chalee gayee?"

Megha don't know that her sauthan's parents live next door.

Ruhi "Main papa key ghar gayee thee.Main waheen rahungi papa key saath."

Mihika "Tum chitti ko bhool gayee."

Then our lady interrupts.

"Mihika Raman na ghar ka haal kharab kardiyan.Koi naheen hain na wahan ussey control karney tho sab kuch apney marzee sey kar rahen hain.Issliyen mummyji ney kahan kee humey bhee wahen rehna chahiyen."

Megha "Take a break .I am here "

Then our lady realizes and starts introducing.

Our lady "Megha yeh Mihika hain meri behen.Aur Mihir ki fianc ."

Megha never need invitation forwarding her hand "I am Megha .Raman kee girlfriend hun."

Mihika was shocked and looking at her sister who was laughing seing Mihika's shocked face.

Megha "Believe nahen kar rahen hon.Chahey tho sauthan sey poochlo ."

Then our lady "Han yeh Raman ki girlfriend hain.I mean girl aur friend."

Then our lady explains clearing the confusion.

Mihika mixes well with Megha .She got her nickname along Slim Slide'-SS as she is so lean.

Then our lady spends little time their and then goes back to her house.

Then in Raman's house our lady just entered and Raman was already there.

She then closes all doors and Raman understood something heavy is coming.

Our lady just want her husband back to her now and behave with her as usual.

Raman was about to leave the room but is stopped by his wife.

"Raman aap mujhey kyon avoid kar rahen hain?"

Raman "Main avoid nahen kar rahan hun.Bass tum jyaada soch rahen hon."

"Raman aap mujhsey jhoot nahen bol sakthey."

"Main jhoot nahen bol rahan hun."

"Raman tho aap mujhey avoid nahen kar rahe hain tho correct bathayiye.Iss mahiney aapney mujhey kitney baar phone kiyya?"

Raman acting as if he is counting a big list in air.

Raman"ek baar.Main busy thaa kissey ko phone naheen kiyaa.Ghar mey bhee" Hiding his face.

Our lady "Who bhee missed call tha mainey phone kiyya tha aapney naheen uthaaya aur baath mey kiyya."

Raman "Who bhe tumhaara bakwaas sunney mey."

Mrs Raman "Raman mera bakwaas.Mainey aapko har din minimum four times call karthey thee aur aap phone kaatthey hain.Mera baath sauney bhina."

Raman "Main office mey thaa."

"Tho baath mey kyaa huan.Ghar aakar phone kar sakthey hain naa?"

"Raman mera clinic ghar key pass mey hee hain aur raasthey me hain.Aap ek baar bhee mujhsey milney nahen aaye?"

"Tum bhee jaanthe thee naa main lunch key liyen ghar aatha hun ,Tho tum ghar naheen aa sakthi kyaa?"

Our lady "Raman yeh baath kaun milney nahee aya nahen hain.Aap mujhey avoid kar rahen they."

"Aap mujhsey badala ley rahen they naa.Uss baath kaa."

Raman "Mujhey yaad nahen tum kya baath kar rahen hon."

She proceeds towards him .

"Raman aapko yaad nahen .Mujhey yaad hain .Raman merey life ka pehla kiss ."

Raman "Yeh galathee sey huin I don't care about it.I know and I remember hummara shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen huin thee."

"Raman aapkey baathey sab kuch kehrahen hain.Huin thee lekin huin hain naheen hain."

"Aap uss baath sey aagey badh chkey hain."

Raman "Tumhaara galath faimey hain.We both know what is truth.Tum iss baath ka itna issue kyon banaa rahen hon?Kyaa chahiye tumhey?"

"Just one thing Raman.You attention on me."

"Mujhey sirf aapkey dhyaan chahiyen.Just I want my husband's attention ."

Little broken.

"Raman uss din mujhey yaad hain .But you don't get is I want your attention .Yeh mera pehla kiss thaa mera memory thaa.Aur aapney kaisey kiyan ."

"Raman main ladkee hun.Mujhey har baath kehnaa nahee aatha .Main jho bolthee hun mujhsye who naheen chahiyen.Aapko samajhna hain .Aap mujhsey gussa hookar aa gaye."

"Rmana aap jaanthey hain mainey aapko kitna miss kiyan.Mainey kitney baar aapko sorry bolney kee koshish kee."

"Raman I just can't stay away from you.I need you in every moment of my life."

"Aap mujhsey baath hee nahen kar rahey they.Kaisey Raman?Hummarey shaadi key itnon donon baad bhee aap mujhey alag samajhrahen hain."

Raman understood the reality now.That she scolded him in face but what she meant was different.

"Main aapko kaisey samjhaon kee .I can do anything to get your attention."

She hugs him directly.

Raman then forwards his hands for consoling her.

"I am sorry.I really missed you.Mujhey nahen patha kee main itney din tumsey baath karey bina kaisey rahan.But main din mey dass baar tumhey phone karthe hun lekin himmath na hokey kaat detha hun."

"You are the best thing ever happened in my life.I don't want to loose you. I cant bear ke tum mujhsey nafrath karo.So mujhey tumsey ddor rehna pada kee main koi galathee naa karo."

She is slowly understandin that their feelings are mutual.

"Main aapsey nafrath kyon karoongi.I just.."she stops.

Raman "Bol don naa."

She sees his face directly before her and taking confidence and hugs him tightly.

"I love you.I just love you.Main aapkey bina ek pal bhee naheen rah sakthee.You are most important thing of my life."

"Mainey I love you bolney key liyen kaha thaa.Lecture nahee."

She hits him on his chest.Raman holds her and confesses his words.

"I love you too.I just love my wife mera Mathangi aur Jhansi ki Rani."

She gets little annoyed over name Mathangi but the words from her husband made it beautiful.

Raman then slowly forwarding toward her removieg her hair covering her face.Kisses her over he lips but this time it is reciprocated by her too.

Then it breaks with Ring of phone.

Mihika and Megha are on line "Akka jeeju kahan hain usska phone kyon naheen lag rahan hain."

Our lady "Kyaa huan tum itney tension mey kyon hon." Signing Raman over their tension.He tells her to keep in speaker.

Megha "Sauthan tum TV on karo koi bhee news channel."

Raman does that and their was news over gunman attack on Ashok Khanna he is just alive.Then after few minutes they realize many business men are targeted to kill.Even Raman's name was there.

Our lady was hell scared over her husband's life is in risk.

Megha "Boyfriend police ney yaha protection diyan hain.Hum sab theek hain aur mainey police ko who address bhe de dee."

"Tum donon bahaar math aana.Kissey hee haal mey.Police wahan pahunch jaayengey."

"Ruhi hummarey saath safe hain.Tum donon apnaa khyaal raahna.Koi problem ya doubt lagey tho police ko bathadena."

Raman cuts the call and his wife hugs him crying.

"Oh mere Jhansi ki Rani darr gayee."

Sunon mujhey kuch naheen hoga.Main tumhey itney asaani sey nahen chodney walan hun.Humey Ruhi ke shaadi bhe karwaani hain na."

Then he goes toward the cupboard and takes ot a pistol from it .

"Raman aap jaanthey they naa kee aapkey life risk mey hain."

"Tum merey saath rahon.Kitika yaa door key pass math jaana.Hall mey safe hain aur yeh room bhee theek hain.Kahe nahee jaana."

Telling her instructions.

"Han main jaantha tha mera life risk mey hain.Issliyen main yahan Akeley ayaa thaa.Kee tum logon ko kuch naa hon."

Our lady hugs Raman .

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Yaar I love updating stroies for you.I am dooing this even when my fingure is injured.But I need a responce yaar.You know that to procced with the story feed back is essential.But for this I am not getting any.
It is little discouraging fact.
So please give you active opinion .


Thanking you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its very nyc track.. keep wrtng it more..
nd sorry 4 ur fingure..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Get well soon Vikas


The story is flowing flawlessly and we get carried away. Sweet story 👏

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