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SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Nothing happened to me.It is small injury for index fingure.
Typing using remaining.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#0000ff">Yaar I love updating stroies for you.I am dooing this even when my fingure is injured.But I need a responce yaar.You know that to procced with the story feed back is essential.But for this I am not getting any.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#0000ff">It is little discouraging fact.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#0000ff">So please give you active opinion .</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#0000ff"> Thanking you</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#0000ff"> SAKIV!VIKAS Chandra</font>


what happened to ur finger.
I have been reading all ur dream tracks and keenly following them. Not sure in how many I have commented but have liked them all. Not even sure on how many of the forthcoming ones I will be able to comment but will read them all for sure. Keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
first of all get well soon...let the injury be recovered fastly


the confession was so nice...intresting...
dramatic thaa...still nice too see ishu in JKR mode...

im sure like we viewers...RKB too likes to see ishu in JKR always...

now whts this attack etc...raman went to stay alone to protect his family... :o

now what
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
I don't exactly know what happened.But it is paining.Their was a cut previously.I think it is repeated.
I just need opinions buddy.What happened fro previous post.
No one gave opinion on it it seriously pissed me.'I know its readers wish whether to give reply or not but it is completely opposite for my other posts .
So what am I supposed to understood.Whether it is good or not.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
The story is just awesome...👏👏
Waiting for next part...
Please continue...😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Wishing your speedy recovery...get well soon. I like the twist at the end of the last update...would love to see IshR's concern and care regarding each others safety.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Beautiful updTe
Loved their confession
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
get well soon last part is good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked it alot..nice one..megha is so childish and attractive
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 8


Scene starts with our special lady hugging Raman scared over his safety.

Raman "Yaar mujhey kuch naheen hoga.Hum safe hain iss ghar mey."

Mrs Raman "Raman aap jaanthey they naa kee aapka jaan khatarey mey hain?"

Raman closing all windows and curtains rechecking the magazines.

Raman "Hana main jaantha thaa.Yeh sudden naheen they bahuth dinon pehley sey attacks plan they."

"Aapney mujhsey kyon naheen bathaaya?Aapka jaan khatarey mey thaaaur mujhey kuch naheen patha."

"Ishu tum ro math .Main ney kissey ko naheen bathaaya.Mihir ko bhee nahen patha thaa."

"Main tumhey bathadetha thi tum chup bhait thee kyaa.Mere biwi ko main jaantha hun who apnaa jaan de degi lwkin mujhey kuch naheen honey degi.""Main bhee aisey hee hun.Main kabhee merey pariwar ko kuch naheen honey doonga."

"Raman who log aapkey peechey kyon padey hain.Aapney kabhee kissey ka kuch nahen bigada naa.Tho ussko aapsey kyaa dushmani."

Raman "Bahuth puraana baath hain.Tum uss Milk powder project key baarey mey jaanthe ho naa."

"Han "

"Who project mujhey CEO of year award milthey hee milaa thaa.Fir tumney media key saamney meri buraayi kee aur Ashok key pass gaya.Fir mujhsey waapas mila thaa."

Little sad as Raman lost it because of her mistake and anger.

"Ussey iska kyaa lena dena hain."

"Hain.Usska formula simmi ney hummarey kamarey sey churaakar Param ko diya.Ashok ney uss formula badaldiyaa tha kam quality sey."

"Fir jab main presidentship sey resign kiyya tha uss samay ussney project le leey apney naam.Ussney low quality milk powder supply karnaa suru kiyaa.Aur fir mainey presidentship pey waapas ayaa tha mujhey naheen patha tha kee formula change tha aur mainey waisey hee honey dee."

"Uss nakalee milkpowder key wajaha sey kahee bachey beemar pad gaye.Aur kuch logon ka jaan bhe gayen hain."

JKR was shocked listening this.As Raman resigned to get back her license and all mistake she was indirectly responsible.

"Uss bachon key mauth sey koi organization disturb ho gayaa aur hum sabko jimmedaar maanthe hain.Kyon kee koi project pass hona hon tho board ka permission chahiyen aur main board ka president hun.Unnhey lag rahan hain kee main bhee usss scam mey involved hun aur merey jaan khatarey mey hain."

She hugs him immediately.

"Raman sab kuch merey wajaha sey hon rahan hain.Aapney merey liyen resign kiyaa thaa .Aur sab kuch uss wajaha sey hon rahan hain."

"Main ney mere biwi key khushi key liyen kee hain .Ussmey tumhaara kyaa galathee.Galathee tho Ashok aur usskey chamcho kee hain.Unko sajaa milna hain."

"Aur main ussko saja milaakar hee rahoonga.Issliyen tho megha aye hain.Ussey contacts hain uss child welfare organization sey so who mera kaam kar rahen hain.Aur main yaha poora pressure daal rahan hun Ashok aur usskey chamcho ko pakadwaaney mey."

"So you don't take tension.Hum ney kuch naheen kiyaa aur hummey kuch nahen hoga."

He holds his wife close to him as she has fear of loosing him .

Then police come there and they keep security for house and Raman speaks to DGP and informs him about reason to help them to find culprit.

Then Raman and his wife were in their room .Which is covered in front by a big wall so no sniper can shoot from that side.Then Raman was prepared for incoming.

"Ishu tum kissey bhee haal mey koi door yaa window key saamney ya pass math jaana.Hum iss room ,kitcen aur hall mey safe hain aur tum merey pass he rehnaa."

"Raman tumhey kuch huan hotha tho .Hummara last meeting ladaai thaa."she just don't want to leave her husband.

Raman kissin g her in her forehead "Ishu mujhey kuch naheen hoga.Mujhey kuch naheennhoga.I am just worried about you.Issliyen main sabsey naheen miltha tha.Ghar jaatha tha but wahan jyaada der nahen rehtha tha.Tumhey milney aagaya tho who log tumhey kuch karsaktey hain jab mujhey kuch nahen kar paayengey tho.Ruhi ko who log kuch naheen karengey kyo kee who bacche hain.""Sirf tumhaara jaan khatarey mey thaa mujhsey mila hotha tho."

JKR "Tumhey kuch ho aya hotha tho main yahan kyaa karthee .I love you Raman.I want you to be with me alive.Raman tumhey kuch hogayan hotha tho main aaj zindaa naheen hothee."

Raman "Tumhey zindaa rahna hoga Ruhi key liyen .Mujhey kuch bhee hojaaye tumhey Ruhi key liyen jeena hoga."

Raman was able to calm her after few minutes.

\Then it was around night Raman goes little romantic not worried about the risk he is in.But he is interrupted by a call.

Megha "Boyfriend Ruhi darr rahen hain .Useey tum baath karon."

Raman gives call to his wife and she was able to calm Ruhi .Then Megha tells Raman she is going to meet the organization next day and Ashok survived the attempt.

Then at night Raman was sleeping peacefully but his wife could'nt .She was looking at her husband carefully and she is scared to keep him away from her sight even for a minute.

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