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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awww Raman scolded her
poor ishu now update soon
wnt to knw what will happen next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awww as much as i hate seeing ishita hurt...i cn understand y raman is doing this...gr8 story...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YAAR Sabko yeh dikhrahan hain kee Ishita dukhee hain fir Raman ka kyaa,
Pehley Ishita ney danta ussey .
Aur sab kuch usska marzee chahiyen madem ko aur Raman ko kuch naheen .
Raman lunch ghar mey kartha tha .yeh jaankar bhee madem chahthe hain kee Raman jaakar ussey miley but who khud ghar jaa sakthey hain naa.
Then their were same end word for both Raman and Madem.
Then how coem all sympathy goes for Ishita.
"Yaha mard pey hathya chaar ho rahan hain."

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Quick plz
And ya plz add some romance os ishra too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

Scene starts with our special one hurt by what Raman told.

"Ussey lagataha hain kee mujhey jawaab deney kee jaroori nahen hain.Main kuch naheen hun."

"Its not just done."

"Hummarey shaadi Ruhi key liyen huin thee .But it dose'nt mean that he will just ignore me ."

"Main usska jawaab deke hee rahoongi.Raman nahen chahthey naa main yaha aaaon main yaha sey jaongi he nahen."

She then call Mrs Bhalla and tells about condition of this house and its maintainance .Then Mrs Bhalla who was concerned about her son gives all rights to her daughter in law and tells her to stay there only with Raman.

Success for our special one.Mrs Bhalla tells she will send all their items their .

Then Raman comes outside of bath room and sees his beloved wife smiling and understood she cooked something.

Raman "Kyaa huan tum pagalon key taraha kyo hasss rahen hon?"

With broad smile of achievement on her face "Mummyji ney phone kiyaa aur mainey iss ghar ka halaath key baarey mey bathadiya.Unohoney kahan kee mujhey yaheen rukhnaa chahiyen aapkey saath."

"Main aapkey saath rehney waaley hun abhsey yaha mera control hoga .Aaapko mujhey sab kuch bataana hoga."

Raman understood that ball is in Ishita's court now.

"Abh tak aapney iss ghar ka kyaa hal kiya dikhrahan hain.Abh sey aap kuch naheen karengey kyo kee yeh mera ghar hain aur yahan mera rules chalengey.Aapko koi problem ho tho main mummyji ko bathadoongi aur Ruhi bhee yahen hain."

"Aapko kuch kehnaa hain?"

Raman throws his towel over her and leaves in anger.Our special one smiles over her victory.

Then she goes outside and have break fast with Ruhi .Raman leaves to his office as some work erupts suddenly.

Our lady was happy alas as she got control in her hands and she immediately took control of it and started making changes for house .She started cleaning the house ordered kitchen items and then told Ruhi that they would be staying here along with Raman .

Ruhi initially gets sad as she would be missing others but then realizing Raman would be there more time and school in walkable distance makes her happy.

Megha also helps in making changes and as we know Megha is full of energy and witt she speaks mostly about Raman and her childhood Jallofying Mrs Raman.

Then Ruhi asks them lunch outside and Raman wont be able to come so the trio goes out side for lunch.

Ruhi is happy outside with Megha as she gets her everything but our lady restricts on whether it is good for Ruhi or not.

Then to the trios surprise and bad luck a very very very special lady enters the shopping mall.Guess Who?

All sees her Ruhi scared hides behind her mother and Our lady behaves as if it is normal but fun was with Megha as she got super excited seeing her.

Shagun sees Megha and comes there.

Shagun "Megha tum khabh aye .Tumney mujhey phone nahen kiyya?"

Megha "Han .Kall aye ."

Shagun then looks at Ruhi and her mother .

"Ruhi how are you ?"

Ruhi gives answer on sign of her mother whome she was holding tightly.

"I am fine.Aap kaisey hon?"

"Main theek hun ."trying to come near her but Megha stands in between.

"Megha kyaa kar rahen ho thum?"

Megha "Kyaa hain naa.Miss Queen Ruhi mera boy friend aur mera Sauthan key beti hain.Ussko accha nahen lagega kee tum usskey saath rahon."

Shagun "Megha tum uss behenjee key liyen mujhsey lad rahen hon?Raman key shaadi pehley mujhsey huin thee aur Ruhi mere beti hain."

Megha "Iss tarah kee tumhaara divorce bhee ho Chuka hain aur Ruhi ko tumney chooda thaa?"

Shagun "Tum bhee jaanthe hon kee Raman aur usska shaadi main Raman ko chodney key wajaha sey huin.Aur Raman aaj thak mujhey naheen bhooley."

Megha "Achey taraha jaantha hun. Jaisa kee tumhaara shaadi jeeju sey huin thab mainey shaadi key liyen mana kiya thaa jeeju sey."

Our lady was shocked listening this.

Megha "Mainey suna hain kee tumhaara engagement ho chukka hain.I just hope tum khush rahon aur merey boyfriend ko pareshaan naa karo."

Shagun "Tum mujhsey aisey baath nahe kar sakthee."

Megha "Kyon Miss Queen .I know you are prepared for worse insults but mujhey faaltho key liyen time nahen hain.So just get lost."

Megha insults Shagun in all possible ways that Raman ever could have and shuts her mouth and sends.

Then they were having ice creams .

Our Lady then with little interest asks .

"Tumney Raman sey shaadi karney manaa kiyaa tha."

Megha who was serious this time answers clearly "Kyaa hain naa sauthan."

"Main aur boyfriend bachpan sey friends they,boyfriend hummesha mera help karth tha har cheez mey aur jyaada nahen we are best friends.Fir Mumma ppapa aur buan ney jeeju key job milthey hee hummara shaadi ka proposal rakha."

"But we never thought other in such relation together.Boyfriend mera best friend hain but I could not imagine him as a life partner and same for Boyfriend."

"Means we are never a couple .Hum kabhee dosrey ko gender sey nahen dekha then so we can't imagine our selves in such relation.Hum donon ney mana kiyaa aur sabko samjhaya kee we are just friend but not lovers.Then Shagun sey shaadi.Main single dream boy key liyen waiting."

Our lady gets happy listening this as Raman and Megha are never meant to be together.They know their limits very well over other.They were just best friends.

Then our lady starts liking Megha for her maturity hidden in her chirpiness.

Then it is night Raman comes home and is surprised to see changes in house as it is under new rule now.He directly goes to their room and following old rules .

Our lady was happy now as Raman is with her.She also made sure there is no couch in their room so she was supposed to sleep in same bed with Raman.

This part ends with Raman getting ready to sleep and Ruhi sleeping with Megha and our lady already slept leaving space for Raman.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Gulabo12345

Quick plz

And ya plz add some romance os ishra too

I dint understand your comment.
YOu mean I am supposed to add romance in this ss .
or
Write a romantic os.
Confusion.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
why no comments?
Is it not a good update?or is it boring?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Sometimes i reallly feeel pity for shagun...
.hw much insultss she getss...hhh
thn too without any shame come backs...lolsss


raman so angry with ishu...
Want to knw whtr raman likes
ishu to b with him or not
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Sometimes i reallly feeel pity for shagun...
.hw much insultss she getss...hhh
thn too without any shame come backs...lolsss


raman so angry with ishu...
Want to knw whtr raman likes
ishu to b with him or not

Then did you like Megha in her new avatar.Serious and mature over relations.Protective side over her sauthan and Miss R.
I am planning confession in next part.
Would it be good?
I added index in page one with direct link.
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nice Ss
Plz continue😊

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