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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

poor ishu...btwn y u was referring her as spcl person...raman doesnt feel for ishu...hmmm

then about Rman not feeling for her.follow this one you will know he dont have feelings or a trap to bring her seperate alone.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good to see you again in a new dream track. pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

Scene starts in Raman's new house with Megha juct entering the house and Raman hugs her.

Raman "Itney dere kyo lagee?"

Megha "Kuch naheen sabsey milkar aa rahen hun."

Raman "Kissey ko shahk naeen huan?"

Megha "Tumhaari biwi thoda ajeeb sey behave kar rahen thee.Shaayad ussey kuch shak huan hon."

Raman "Kuch problem naheen.Who kuch naheen poochegee."

Megha "Tum itney yakeen sey kaisey keh sakthe hon?"

Raman "Who sirf Ruhi ki maa hain?Hummara shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain.Ussey kuch farak bhee nahee padaga kee main ghar mey hun ya nahee.Sirf mujhey ghar mey sabsey milthey rehnaa hoga.Ruhi sey time spend karnaa hoga.Ek mahiney mey ek baar bhee mujhey dekhney naheen aye.Fir bhee ussey koi problem naheen.Jaanthe hain kee main lunch key liyen ghar jaaonga fir bhee ek din bhee ghar mey nahee thee."

Megha "Oh Jeeju kaisey biwi miley hain tumhey.Mera handsome boyfriend sey ussey kuch farak naheen padtha."

Megha "Koi baath nahee.Main hun naa tumhaara khyaal rakhney." Holding his hand proximately and trying to kiss him.

Raman "Bahaar naheen andhar chalo." They go inside and Megha hugs Raman and he kisses her.Then she make some advance over Raman.

Then suddenly our lady gets up in horror .Just realizing its her dream.She gets worried whether Raman is seriously thinking that she don't have any feelings for him.Then he would be making any secret relation with other woman in her absence.

Then with her fears around her neck she dares to call to Raman.

Raman pick the call.

Mademjee "Raman tum free hon abh ?"

Raman "Han kuch time free hun.Match dekh rahan hun.Koi kaam hain?Ruhi theek hain?"

Our lady "Han theek hain.Bass aisey hee phone kiyaa.Bahuth din huen naa humey miley.?"

Raman "Shaayad mujhey naheen patha .Bye match interesting hain.Baath mey phone karoonga."

Raman cuts the call.She throws the phone angrily on bed.

"Mujhsey jyaada match important hain usesy?"

"Ussey yaad bhee nahen hain kee hum picley baar kabh miley they.Ek mahiney sey jyaada hogayan fir bhee ek baar phone nahen kiyya.Aur jab main karthee hun tho phone katdiyan."

"Kyaa kiyaa mainey.Mujhey kyo alag kardiyan ussney?"

"Jaantha hun kee hummara shaadi Ruhi key liyen huan thaa.Isska mathlab yeh naheen kee mujhey koi haq naheen bantha ke main ussey kuch na poochu ya kuch bhee karney doo."

"Raman uss ghar mey kaisey rehrahen hain.Who tho ghar kehney kee layak hee nahen hain."

"Ek cheez bhee apney jagaha pey nahen hain.Aur daru key bottle har jagaha.Koi ussey rokh nahen rahan isska mathlab yeh naheen kee kuch bhee karey apney marzee mey.Neatness tho door ka baath"

Then she remembers their last meeting where Raman accidentally kisses her and she scolded Raman for it and reminded him about their contract marriage.

"Shaayad usska badlaa ley rahan hain."

Then there are many questions in her mind and she tries to sleep but she cant as she don't have answers for any.

So she spends a sleepless night to how to get back on Raman.

There in house Raman misses his love very much he just is hiding his feelings and compressing them.

Then early in morning Ruhi gets up.

Our kady who had a sleepless night notices this .

"Ruhi kya huan tum itney jaldhee kyo uth gayee.Aaj tho Sunday hain naa."

Ruhi "Han aaj papa free hongey naa?"

Our special one "Mujhey naheen patha.Kyaa tumhey papa sey milnaa hain?"

Ruhi "Han main uss ghar mey bahuth masti karoongi.Waha mujhey video game hain,cycle hain,papa aur Miss M bhee wahen hain."

Ruhi "Aap jaanthee hain jab main chotee thee na.Papa mujhsey theek sey baath nahen kartehy jab Miss M mera best friend thee.Papa usspar gussa nahen hothey.Aur who mujhey sab kuch diladethee thee papa sey.Miss M bahuth acche hain.Who thoi hummesha papa ko huggy kissey karthee hain." Little awkward for Ruhi complete embrassement for our special lady.

What the thing is Megha knew Raman from childhood they are mostly like best friends and she respects him more and being born in Sydney she don't consider hugging and kissing as much big issues.Even Bhalla's love Megha just because when ever she was there Raman used to smile because of her pranks even when Shagun left him but those are temporary and his permanent happiness is brought by our special one but she don't know that.

Ruhi "Miss M naa papa ko boyfriend kehthee hain hummesha mujhey Rinki buwa ney bathaya kee

Who thab choothe the na tabh sey aiseey hain."

Our lady was more worried to see another person who knew Raman more and never faced Raman's anger.But Raman's love is hidden in his anger.

"Ruhi tum so jaon abh."

Ruhi "Naheen mujhey papa key pass jaana hain abhee."

Our special one "Tumhaarey papa busy hongey .Abh kaisey jaa sakthey hain?"

Ruhi "Papa mujhpey gussa nahen hongey.Hongey tabh bhee main handle karloongi.Aap mujhey wahan lekey jayiyen naa."

"Aapko ek secret bathoo jab papa gussa karthey hain naa.Fir baad mey mujhey gift dethey hain.So no problem."

Our lady "Tho theek hain tum ready ho jaon.Hum papa key pass jayengey." Little excited over this as she don't have any appointments that day and Ruhi would be there whole time so less probability of Raman's anger.

Ruhi "Naheen main papa key ghar mey ready houngee.Aap bhee wahen ayieye."

Our lady "Ruhi aisaa anahen hain papa busy hongey naa tho?"

Ruhi "Main hoo naa.Fir bhee aap darthey hain .Miss M tho papa sey poochegee bhe nahen."

Our lady "Theek hain hum jaayengey.Fir tumhey kyaa kaya chahiyen yeh tho bathon waha khaaney mey kuch naeen hoga."

Ruhi "Hum papa key saath bahaar jayengey .Papa nahee hain tho Miss M key saath."

Then Ruhi selects few dresses for herself and then for her mother.

Then Ruhi informs everyone that she is going to Papa for Sunday excited and no one have complaints.

Ruhi and her mother left home at around 5 :30 Am.




Yaar kabh sey isskey liyen koi naam nahen hain.Kuch tho naam suggest karo .Ya apoorey samay unnnamed hee rahega.

Then give a opinion over it.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think you should name it as "The Special One". 😆
I love Megha because this is the exact person I see in my dreams.
I always imagine about YHM 24x7, and I always imagine me being a character in any show or story I come across.
And Megha is exactly how I imagine myself as.
These are the scenes I see in my dreams too.
So happy with this one. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhaakshu

I think you should name it as "The Special One". 😆

I love Megha because this is the exact person I see in my dreams.
I always imagine about YHM 24x7, and I always imagine me being a character in any show or story I come across.
And Megha is exactly how I imagine myself as.
These are the scenes I see in my dreams too.
So happy with this one. 🤗

Welcome to dream world buddy.Here Sakiv's dreams would be represented.
I am happy that some one dreamt same.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

nothing like that I took a challenge to do this one differently without using her name any where that's why will be using some random words there.



intresting...

i like ur works...almost read all ur ffs n os... :)

vikas just keep an index on page one...atleast with page number😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

then about Rman not feeling for her.follow this one you will know he dont have feelings or a trap to bring her seperate alone.



ohhh chori chori types...nice try😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
so finally ishu goin to meet raman...

or raman meeting ishu aftr 1 month...

i guess raman already seen..her...:P

ruhi talking seems so like she was memorizing n telling

as if someone taught her to say so...

waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

so finally ishu goin to meet raman...


or raman meeting ishu aftr 1 month...

i guess raman already seen..her...:P

ruhi talking seems so like she was memorizing n telling

as if someone taught her to say so...

waiting for next part

Raman would be seing first time.She saw Raman previous day hugging Megha.She was hidding in house.
Then about Ruhi's dialogues ,I think it is my mistake .I could'nt create properly
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Raman would be seing first time.She saw Raman previous day hugging Megha.She was hidding in house.
Then about Ruhi's dialogues ,I think it is my mistake .I could'nt create properly


ohh ok...so its first meeting for raman...

its ok vikas...it sounded like she was telling wt she taught...

nice try

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