Disenchanted - IshRa OS - Page 10

Originally posted by: columbia

Such a wonderful OS. I love how a scene wil make so many creative juices flow. Lovely just lovely. Felt every emotion in this OS

I hope that CVs really do a good job of making Raman feel awful for what he does. But if they dash my hopes I shall come and read all the wonderful stories that have been penned here

Originally posted by: PagliLadki

Beautiful.

CVs please read and show us something like this. Please😛

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

aani aani u r such an outstanding writer or i can say u r a great story teller this os is mind blowing i agree with u i am not happy with Raman at all firstly he confessed his love to ishita than he said to do u think mujay pagal kutte ne kata hai its a height of everything than again he is blackmailing her its enough i literally want ishita has to show his right place in her life all the time he takes her as granted


loved ur concept u r a mind reader u read our mind mostly people do not like raman's behavior u have written beyond beautiful their conversation is realistic but i am dam sure this will not happen in show becoz its a history of YHm they did not drag Raman & ishita issues whenever he hurt her they just wind up in one episode just holding ear n holding hands is not enough now

but i loved this forum there are so many outstanding writers who fulfills our wishes like that in their stories and u r one of them

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

Res

Originally posted by: amrithas

Simply Brilliant. But You need to come up with a next part for this one. It cant be left like that not when I know Raman is that one person who loves her unconditionally. Come on he's got to prove it to her besides making her realize n accept that so does she love him unconditionally. My hopes are from you, God knows when or if ever the same will happen on the show.

Originally posted by: mischief

Bang on girl ...I so wish that those writers of the show create such scenes in serial...I'm so very damn disappointed with Raman's attitude in this week...

Originally posted by: exploringmyself

u r a awesome writer yaar.. i love reading ur os.. this was a mindblowing 1 :)👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: Nikita99

Awesome OS and very fitting title!! I actually want Raman to hear it all from Ishita in YHM. I just can't digest this blackmailing thing.

Loved how Ishita (You) explained about love and the rights it give in a relationship.

It was very touching and emotional!

Originally posted by: rusha4003

FABULOUS !!!!!! 👏 👍🏼..

You should have been the writer for YHM ...

Just what all of us here want Raman to hear ... he should be given a jolt ... he's taking ishu for granted ...being a big JERK !

Take a bow , dear ... 👏

Originally posted by: Rozy77

fabulous dear👏
this was quite deep
i love how u always portray ishita as a strong and sensible woman⭐️
loved the conversation between them👍🏼
although i did feel a bit bad for raman at the end, he sure does need a reality check...
thanks for the weekend treat🤗