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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Beautiful OS Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

thanks lipi 😊

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prati

@Luvforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Dat was one gr8 work... I simply loved it d way u portrayed isjita here quite more verbal abt her feelings & opinions den in TV & I liked it ki she made Raman face d truth & understand dat its unfair on ishita... He takes her as his wife & back out d oder moment he has to made up his mind wat she is to him... I really wish ki serial mein actually aisa ho bt I know its not possible... Bt dat was amazing piece of ur work...

Can I get links of ur oder works too plzzz as I m new in dis forum...

Prati

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

pls update...m missing ur writing

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: arshi33
Wow!!!
It was so beautifully written...👏👏
Loved every emotion you portrayed... Lovely...👏👏

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: simples28
Brilliantly written..the entire dialogue was so logical and perfectly written..outstanding piece of writing..loved it a lot dear..thanks for this wonderful OS😊😊

thanks Simple 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: pomegranate
CV's want raman to be funny, first it was him making ishita go back to sleeping on the couch, then it was the blackmail. Maybe these things are funny to some, but it was insensitive in my eyes. I don't think CV's realize that raman comes across as a jackass while attempting to be funny.

I liked the concept of of this story, even I want a scene where ishita clarifies some things about their relationship. Because it seems like raman wants to take this relationship further but ishita is still stuck on ruhi ki liye. if ishita draws the lines, then it will provoke raman to pursue a real relationship with her. I love this OS because it highlights what this show desperately needs-PROGRESS. Raman and ishita are stuck in a tedious loop of nok-jhok and I love it as much as the next person, but it gets old really fast, especially when it is so juvenile.

overall, very well written. you always give us what CV's refuse to.

Hey Zara thank you

@bold - yep, I agree on that... they should realize not everything is funny.

@red - Raman def is far ahead in the feelings department but he isnt aware of that, but yep Ishita is still stuck in the zone where its a deal for them, yes she has accepted the relationship and family now, but there is still a lot that remains when it comes to IshRa; plus with the jokes he always cracks, the fake confessions she wont even move soon, for that to happen Raman has to pursue her like there is no tomorrow as you said

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
That conversation. I read every word with rapt attention. My God, Aani, that was so beautifully written! And you even went back to the scene where Raman was vulnerable after the injection and how Ishita had been so nice to him. There's the difference in both of them, Raman sometimes takes it too far and you have portrayed her feelings so well! Her every word was like a slap on his face and finally Raman had no response to her.
Loved this. This is my favourite piece of writing by you, although I love IshRa's romantic scenes, I simply loved this the most from all your writings because it was written so well. Her dialogues - literally made me feel for her. And that's something that only a talented writer like you can do! ❤️

thanks Arooj

@bold - he really isnt as attuned to her hence that happens which I personally dont like sometimes, recently he called her careless that I could see as a genuine mistake because he was only attempting to pull her leg without knowing what has happened, but it always cant be funny

Thanks once again for your kind words Arooj ☺️