Disenchanted - IshRa OS - Page 12

Originally posted by: loveyhmnew

Wow what a writer you are.
I agree with each and every dialogue of yours.There are people in the forum who might not agree but I really want this track to be there in YHM with same dialogues n explanation. We somewhere want that Raman should fall for her...he should be weak infront of him...which eventually will be shown by CV...but I personally think Ishu deserves much more better,understanding n caring loving partner instead of Raman who keeps on misunderstanding her,disrespect her,plays with her genuine feelings.
Abe Raman itne karne k baad Shaitan bhi pyar se baat karna Sikh jaye but u...totally not even worth thinking

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written one-shot..👍🏼

Originally posted by: rutu83

loved it! much needed convo between ishra👏
sorry can't write more- home is teeming with relatives

Originally posted by: yhmfever

Omg that was awesome !!
I really lvoed it !!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

oh em gee Aani!

Thank you! You were the only one to correctly point out Raman's blackmailing as a ridiculous act!He certainly was under the influence but was in his senses to remember the video he took. It was quite cheap of him to use it to cover up the lies all men told their wives/partners.

Perfectly spelled out the reality which the CVs conveniently forgot to follow..

Lovely OS :)

PS: ME still waiting for your comment 😳😆

Originally posted by: felciya

Excellent.

Originally posted by: florine_20

Speechless. Flawless and trully exquisite. It was beautifully written. I dont know how do I describe it but each and every. Emotion was portrayed very well. The charm of the os didnt deter for ever a single line.the words ishita used the definition of love and difference of it. Then the truth of their relationship was written down nicely. I somewhere felt raman would analyze his feeling towards her to know weather what she was proclaiming was really the truth of their relationship or were they past it.

Would like if u write a continuation os after this with ramans pov and maybe somewhere they realize that's its more than sirf Ruhi ke liye and that so called friendship of theirs. Pls continue this one

Originally posted by: Raatri

so sweet...yeh hain...mohabaatein...IshRa style...😊

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Good one Aani!

Keep them coming.😃

Originally posted by: lourel24

Gosh!u r brilliant beyond words.Everytime I read ur work I go on without blinking my eyelids.I just go on n on n feel shit!why it had to end.The way u describe human emotions is just superb.I didn't liked the way Raman blackmailed ishu.Firstly he has committed mistake n instead of feeling guilty he has the audacity to blackmail her n boast as if he was some leader.really shamefull but few has the quality to put their emotions exactly the way they feel n trust me u r blessed with it.emotion logic =ur work.hats off yaar.few favorites line of mine""A joke loses its charm and humor if you hear it enough times Raman."very true."I m not in the place to do that".