Disenchanted - IshRa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: Autumn.

How you do it every time Aani.. Outstanding.

Hey A thank you 😊

Our relationship is charade line tear something within me. It must have done same to Ishu to say it & Raman to hear it.

words can heal and wound in my opinion, they have immense power - hearing those words and saying them at this juncture is painful to both of them as was evident in the case track, during the scene where Ishu says Raman still loves Shagun

After the ILU confession, they bringing in Ruhi ke liye ..I had not like it.. Not at the stage their relationship was. That time Ishu only had said it first & Raman agreeing & telling her she better remember it. So bringing that up again in the show really cannot say how Raman would react. Will it pinch him? If it is going to hurt him & make him realized then am all for it.

at the time it was her defence like deflecting the truth with humor was his but of course it will come up again someday. The thing is now there is a sort of pattern here, they use those words only in the worst of times to keep each other at bay and its mostly Ishu who says em now, cos that she knows is a weapon which will sting now

Love how you connected Raman under anesthesia incident to this Ishu one. Raman sure needs to know how Ishu found out his secret about DNA & Ruhi issue. That was brilliant piece of writing.

thank you, I find that the writers should have made Raman wonder once at least how she learned of this problem and it never was shown on the show so I touched it here 😳

Lines on unconditional love.. Heart touching & so true!!

Love it!!

Thanks A 😊

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

wow left me speechless!

i think that if i was in ishita position, i would just have ignored raman right away with this line : "you want to step in, do so, but that's so not MY problem. good luck, you're alone in that" and i would have gone to sleep.

Hey Rajji thank you, Ishu wont leave him alone, as wont he ever no matter how mad she might be at him as was evident in that scene of his when he came home drunk and created a scene, so naturally here he isn't even doing that

But i'm so glad that ishita went through with the conversation because everything she said was so on point.

you need a vent at some point after all😳

I don't really "LOVE" raman as much as i love ishita (there something in her that just pull the right strings of my heart) because raman shouts too much for my taste. He is really a nice guy but the shouting thing puts me off so so much. Since i don't LOVE him that much, i don't really care about what he does and when he is rude to ishita.

i don't really care because i think that he is just mad in his head,

He is a complex character and honestly I love em equally - they kinda balance each other out, his madness as you put it is the perfect armor for her naivete and her and her poise and grace give him a sense of balance and peace 😳

But i can understand that some people find him way too rude and things doesn't sit right with them. That's why you wrote this os right? And i'm glad you did because it was hella beeautiful !! Loved reading it.

he can be kinda rude at times I know that but he is being tamed now, and the thing is his rudeness is what makes Raman real to me, he isnt the ideal son who is holier than thou, cos I scoff and roll my eyes at these imaginary characters 😳

I loved how ishita explained everything calmly and how you remembered the track with Ruhi's DNA and brought it to light in this OS .

I always wanted them to have the convo about the DNA thing this seemed like a good time to bring it up

also the part about the innocent love of children was really smart!

Ishu really was over the idea of love of a man after Subu hence she wanted to adopt in my opinion and the reason came easily once I thought that

raman was a bit thick, he didn't understand that there was no "us", no "love" in their relationship because he insisted that she was his wife again and again... he doesn't want to face things!

That is because in his head, his heart he is there, but that is the difference is she doesnt know it and they arent together yet no matter how much understanding there is some things need to be said and heard to be accepted and lived

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome one shot.

it was so sensible and very well written.

My favorite lines in this one shot are

"Love...you lay a claim over a person you love, allow a person who loves you the right to hurt you or make you happy or ask you things or... basically unless and until love is involved -no relationship gains prominence and one which lacks it has no real importance."

Love is the line which are separating them.

I love it

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: prosevelvet

I had just made a post on how Ishita doesn't have rights on him and vice versa...and you've made an OS on it! 😛

What I really really loved about this one is that you explored Ishita's wounds. In the show, they've pretty much glossed over it and make it seem she's moved on with Ruhi, but they never explore her insecurities in falling in love with another adult. Not only that, but you've highlighted in Raman that a simple ILU to her isn't even good enough, because she's so scarred from her first love that she wouldn't even believe it. Brilliant work!

Originally posted by: remya1990

Your ability to understand individual people and their thoughts is beyond any explanations. Few people have this ability. You very well have. And this is very well seen and felt in your writings. You are a good writer, a critic and an understandable person.

i don't know what to say after reading your works. But i really wish to read more. And i do expect you to be an established author of very good books.

your writing is a pleasure to read.

gives a soothing effect and moreover it gives the readers open solutions of the puzzles created in the situation that you take over to write. And thus your writings doesn't hold just to pleasure but it gives a warm feeling which was so wanted. Worries,may be it personal, it really vanishes. Simply, your writing is cure to wounds.

These are not just words but i really mean what i said in this.

Thank you for your wonderful writing😊

Originally posted by: drooler

beautifully written

one of your best works

loved it totally

Originally posted by: redwine1

Lovely Lovely Lovely ... the dialog exchange is very well put .. succinct ... to the point & gives the punch ... Very well written ...

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Beautifully written..👏I so want Ishita to say these things to Raman on the show 😊

Its time Raman and Ishita had an open conversation about their relationship on the show as well.. They have these cutesy moments but they never seem to acknowledge them. And lately, the fake love confession, then "Couch pe so jao, Bed do din ke liye rent pe diya tha" bit and now the blackmail. It might all be in jest, but its a bit insensitive on Raman's part and he needs to hear it from Ishita. I hope the CVs dont just brush it off as another one of their nok-jhok scenes.