Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Loved the story Aini. I hope u update soon. Zara mein bhi to dekhoun how Raman manaofy her!!

Btw Bala is a rock star!!

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice one. Loved raman and bala convo. Continue soon

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FieryLioness

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

oh my god Aani... one more story from u...

gud going han... seems as CV's u too happy wid us😉😆

too gud Aani...

man i loved it... but more for Bala... m so missing this sensible Bala in show...

what a convo between Bala-Raman... so realistic ...

superb yaar...update soon

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

U are on more than just a roll Aani 😳 dont even know what to call it :P 🤣

Not that im complaining ;) i have loads to read now 😛 <3

Unreserving is a prob though 🤣 :P

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redwine1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Another sublime read ...

ur words just flow one into the other ...

Lovely thot ... i am amazed at ur talent ... brilliant ... love the way u build on thots ... keep it coming girl

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gems4sana

@gems4sana

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I love your use of the hindi dialogues - I admit, it takes me a bit longer to read because of the fact that its transliterated hindi, but it adds I guess authenticity and spice to the scenes as I'm imagining them in my head.

I adore your use of Bala - this is exactly the kind of conversation Raman and Bala should have (just like Bala and Ishita have). LOL at Raman being forced to sleep with Mihir and Romi - forced out of bed by two 6-yr olds ;)

I especially liked how you mentioned Bala saying that even with Amma-Appa, Toshiji-Bhalla sahb, and even Vandu-Bala competing - couples married for years and completely habituated and who know each other inside out emotionally and physically (I mean, they all have kids...) ... it was Raman and Ishita who won. That's a pretty important detail and I'm glad you made use of it in Bala's talk w/ Raman.

With this ongoing track (and your story esp) I can clearly see that ehsaas solidifying into something still not yet touchable, but still very tangible - if you get where I'm going.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

this was nice I love Raman n bala' s convo love to read it more update soon n do pm m

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drooler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

loved the convo between raman n bala

waiting eagerly for the next part

continue soon

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Aani, whyyy? Whyyy Hindi? 😭

Ahhh well. I understood a majority of it. 😳

I am anticipating this Europe tripping and you're just raising my excitement, as well as, my expectations! 😆

But you've portrayed Ishu's doubts and Raman's turmoil very well. 👏

Poor Raman picked up the wrong signal from his wife and Ishita is clueless as hell that she's giving mixed signals. 😆 What's there not to like?

I really like the Bala-Raman equation and I know Lucky loves to explore that. You've done well with that! Although the entire conversation was in Hindi. 😳

I can't wait to see how Raman convinces Ishita for this trip. Continue soon! 🤗