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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
:) before ur PM this time
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This track is taking a toll on you, You sound a bit defeated. Cheer Up please, we cannot have our star author in this state of mind!!!😃Hey Lucky lol star author are you trying to butter me cos that is you my friend and as for taking the toll LOL I think this is the first track that has made me write 3 OS' all with different themes - HKA, D&D and this one, which is a first for me - but mostly its the dragging of the track that is annoying to me 😳
Having said that, your mood hasnt affected the quality of your writing... wonderful story again. and obviously 'hatke'👏
thank you 😳 had to feel guilty here after all... also may be because I have added dialogues for Toshi for the first time in my OS
NOW, coming to your OS, it may actually be the way the serial is headed Aani. And I am not complaining, because it would make Ishita stronger and it will also give way to some really good redemption, healing tracks. I am mad at you (and your Ishita) for making my Raman go through this, but really, my anger is misdirected 😆 I am mad at you because I cannot afford be mad at him, not for long anyway 😉 But he is wrong and for that he should pay.
LOL makes me feel like I am the Ishita to your Raman 🤣 you having misdirected anger issues with me 😭 haye hamare beech koi ApShagun no ho Lucky 😡😆
Best lines of the story for me:
"This day, this moment, which he dreamed of for years now, is turning into a reality" >> this could have been a sequel to your Hazaaron Khwaishein Aisi!
I know but HKA still had that mild element of romance you know here its guilt and angst also, I wanted Ishita pissed off here big time 😉😆
The woman who is his wife has given him the greatest joy possible in the world for him today and as much as he feels happy and overjoyed, he finds himself burdened with guilt and mortification. >> I dont know why, but when I read this, I imagine Raman saying to Ishita "You've made me a father again". That line would be so deep and meaningful especially in the context of the hospital conversation where he was remembering Adi's birth! Oh, I should try and use it in some OS 😛OOO I like the idea and now that you have said about your OS here, I cant wait to read that one 😛
Raman as your mother, I could have blindly supported you for doing these things, but I stood against you, even slapped you. Does it make you think I love you any less? Tell me. >> Je Baat Aani... wonderfully said !!! ⭐️It just seemed valid to me you know, in the current scenario, a mom telling her son a parent need not be blinded by love - that sometimes a parent punishes their child for their own good out of love too which Raman needs to learn he is such a wimp when it comes to his son - I tell ya he is the modern Dhristhrasthra
Now either you will quietly go with your bua to your new room or I'll make your dad lodge a complaint against these two. Have your pick Adi >> Seeti maarne ka man kar raha hai... Adi ke saath carrot and stick approach mein Stick hi chalega... carrots wont do!😡
🤣 🤣 this just gave me a mental image of that happening LMAO Adi wont know what hit him when Ishu deals with him, LOL uske Baap ko takkar deti hai, phir beta kya hai 😉
"Your punishment... your punishment would be watching your son get reformed. Watching your children grow together."
"How is that a punishment to me at all?"
"It is and will be because you won't have any say in their upbringing, I would raise them as I see fit. Like I said Raman, I am here for my family but now, now I don't trust you because you didn't trust me enough to share the truth with me in the first place . Therefore, you will not interfere in whatever I do when it comes to Adi or Ruhi." >>> Aaani... this is the part that justified the title for me! seriously, even I am afraid of her now!
😆 I believe the calmest people can be the most dangerous one and Raman has landed himself in a soup here for him to seek her trust and forgiveness he would have to quietly do as Ishita tells him too so yeah he would have to deal with hurricane Ishita 😎
Have we used the first quote already? It seems so familiar. The first is for him, and the second for her 😊
"A man always finds it hard to realize that he may have finally lost a woman's love, however badly he may have treated her." - Arthur Conan Doyle, The Musgrave Ritual
"Anybody can become angry - that is easy, but to be angry with the right person and to the right degree and at the right time and for the right purpose, and in the right way - that is not within everybody's power and is not easy." - AristotleHmm cant rem if the first quote is used before but know these two very well and they are apt here as always Lucky 😃
Arjun
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