A Scorned Woman - IshRa OS

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Fabulous OS Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hello there! (-Sorry for being awfully late!🤢-)

What a way to end this entire track! The end is predictable and i knew. It was realistic, practical and mature.

That is not what i admired. I loved, absolutely loved the way you have scripted the entire passage!👏
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I don't think i can ever stop appreciating your stories and loving your writing style! Amazing Aani.🤗

Yes you do sound depressed, obsessed, tired and agitated with this track and its on-goings! It does happen when you're too much involved and into a particular series or a serial.
But they way you have vent out our your emotions in the form of this story i'm pretty much sure that you're 10times better now!🤗

The OS! Raman sure as hell deserves the kind of treatment that he is getting now and he might even end up be rewarded with the same on the show too if he doesn't end up acting Mr.Smarty pants and turn the tables the right way.

I have said it before also - The worst treatment that the person who has wronged can get is silence!😊 Its THE worst. The other just avoids, yet does everything you say to a certain limit which includes responding to his queries - which ends up being intolerable for the accused!

He expects violence, anger, distress but, he gets sweet ironical silence which stupefy him and make him hysterical and mad. Truly. Wonderful buddy!🤗

Ishita is heartbroken and wretched. Yet she assimilated herself and knows how to act normal and be the sensible one in times of distress. - That's true depiction of character.

You know what i like the best no matter how grumpy the current track might be?
- The fact that when one loses the balance, the other takes up the extra burden and neutralizes the beam! That defines a relation.
Hope the CVs have the sense to show that in some way. Praying that it gets over soon.🤢

P.S : Thanks a ton for the PM. I don't mind my inbox being spammed when the contents are so overwhelming! Mind you buddy. Ill be waiting for another new msg.🤗

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: smilydear
Very thoughtful ... Completely within the characters Ishita and Raman are . This is going to happen in the show too. I completely agree with you that as Father his blind love is very harmful for Adi and I mentioned this again and again in my posts.
I loved it . I loved the composed and strong Ishita Who knows how to deal with the hunters , as actually she is the hunter and all are the prey which no one knows. She is a tigress won't do anything until you'll try to buzz her, But if you buzz her she knows how to give you back. I loved how she deals with ADI calling him ADITYA and control him in a way he can be controlled at that moment. Loved how she gave back even Shagun n Ashok too .

In all I love you Post as always ...👏⭐️

Thanks Smily

@bold - that she is, her calm persona masks the fierceness she has within which fools people

@red- I have seen this happen the moment parents are angry your petnames are tossed out the window and your name pops in and you know you are in trouble and well ShaShok need a good smacking in my opinion for making Adi the brat he is 😉

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
superb Aani...
i so wish to see Ishita being strong like this only...
she played really smart... hope we will see something like this in show too...
Raman got himself a mess where he cannot see any escape...
i so hope this time she will be his hero and help him out of this mess...
make him realize his mistake so that next time Shagun will not create bigger mess on the name of Adi and we don't have a helpless father again...

Hey Meet

I hope Ishita doesnt become a saint in this track by forgiving and withdrawing the case in fact I want her to teach Raman a lesson about trusting her and Shagun about not messing with her 😉

its about time she became a little fierce else people will walk all over her

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: vihan1
Do plez continue it

Vihan this is an OS hence ends here 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Shanig123
Aani you and I think somewhat alike . I have a similar scenario in my head . I have no idea how this will be redeemed or unfold . But it has to be Ishitas victory not Ramans this time . would be very disappointed if they show him as some hero . He is fragile and not in a very acceptable behaviour I am the odd one who has no sympathy for him . anyways what I would l like to see is Ishita the woman to gain victory .

Hey Shani

Well no idea how the track ends or unfolds too but one thing is for sure I want Ishita to be the one who trumps everyone this time cos its the need of the hour she has proven she is capable of even outsmarting Raman when she played him during MiMi engagement so why not here? And like your said his state of mind is not allowing him to be much capable of things

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: lourel24
👏 👏 👏 superb

thanks Lourel

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Though I fully agree that Ishita's fury is completely justified, I really hope she doesn't punish Raman in the show as badly as she has in this OS. I totally agree with the whole part of Raman should have made Adi realize his mistake instead of covering for him as that is what a good parent would do and Raman should have not loved his children so blindly. You've explained Ishita' fury so well and Raman's plight as well which is why while I totally stand by Ishita, I also can't help but feel bad for Raman.

Hey Abby thank you for the comment

Hmm I have no idea in mind what she would do in the show as for here... well we know she would not stay mad at him forever but the thing is he needs to understand the duties of a father are as important as his love for kids... Raman has had problems in both the areas and since he isnt going to understand this simple logic on his own a stern approach is needed for that to happen and hence this punishment. And besides, with Ruhi Ishita is the perfect mom and for Adi she would need to play the bad cop to tame him, his interference would make matters worse unless that constipated brat of Raman' is tamed 😉