A Scorned Woman - IshRa OS - Page 3

Aani you and I think somewhat alike . I have a similar scenario in my head . I have no idea how this will be redeemed or unfold . But it has to be Ishitas victory not Ramans this time . would be very disappointed if they show him as some hero . He is fragile and not in a very acceptable behaviour I am the odd one who has no sympathy for him . anyways what I would l like to see is Ishita the woman to gain victory . PS.

Loved posting. You bought the JKR out of Ishita. Strong emotions, tactical planning and super maneuvers.

Hah! See Raman, my boy, that's what happens when you try to hide things from your beloved. Trust is both sided, if you don't trust her enough to tell her something, then you might as well forget that she will ever trust you. As has been said, hope for the best and be prepared for the worst. If you think that Adi or Shagun will be safe and that Ishita will also forgive you, then know that the total opposite also has 50% chances of happening.

Hey Aani

wow ... Can I suggest something? You should actually join the Creatives of YHM team. Your ideas are brilliant and totally logical.

As I have told multiple times already on this forum, I got hooked to YHM by coincidence but fell in love with it instantly. But, this accident track combined with a double dosage of Shagun proved to be damper for me ... however, thanks to writers like you, I feel that their is hope ...

I loved the way you have shown Ishita to be someone who is able to turn tables and handle any adverse situation. True, she is no superwoman; but she is also not some abla naari who just knows how to sacrifice everything at the drop of a hat (Sadly, this is what every other Indian serial depicts to us).

We are thinking on a similar track when it comes to Adi. I guess as a parent, it is important to draw a line for the child. Everyone loves their children but at the same time it is the responsibility of the parent to discipline the same child. In Adi's case we already know that Shagun is a classic case of bad parenting and what is ironic is that even though Raman knows about it, and has expressed his concern about the same at various occasions (the convo between him and Bala where he was worried for Adi and his future), he still ignored everything and protects his son just to be in his good books.

I absolutely adored your example of Toshiji. I guess everyone in this forum will agree with me that all of us at some point have had disagreements with our parents and sometimes real fights ... all of us have been stopped, scolded or shown "my way or highway" attitude. But that does not make us hate our parents in long run. May be immediately we may give a harsh response or in worse cases like Adi, hate them but eventually, we all understand the importance for the act sooner or later.

Raman really needs to look at the mirror and figure out that what he is doing is not protecting his son; rather it is making him more callous towards everything ... reminds me of something like "Jaanta hai na mera baap kaun hai." attitude vaale log.

Then the final part about gaining Ishita's trust. Raman's character is no fool. Even before his wedding, in his drunk state, he had bragged about Ishita to Shagun and he had told her that Ishita is way better for Ruhi than her. Raman had automatically entrusted Ishita the moment he agreed to marry Ishita for Ruhi. He had given the entire life of his daughter in the hands of another woman. Therefore, whether he admitted or not, he has always trusted Ishita. Further, by now Ishita has proved her sincerity a number of times, be it something materialistic like the land deal or the most sensitive topic of his life ... Adi ... Hell this woman is ready to accept Shagun and Adi as a part of her life because they are related to Ruhi. She has proved her enough. And all she asked in return was some trust.

Therefore, all Raman should have done was ... to trust her, spill the beans and show his inner turmoil. I am sure Ishita would have handled the situation in a totally different manner.

This reminds me of Vandu and Bala. She was also scared about her pregnancy. Getting pregnant while you are a single earner is a huge problem in a metro city and it can have severe implications. But, although she was initially skeptical and lied even to her real sister ... she could not hide it from Bala for long ... this is what is called trust ... she expressed all her fears, her tension and in return she got 100% support from her husband ... I guess Raman needs to learn this big time ... as although his subconscious trusts Ishita; but his actual self is scared to admit it ...

Hehe ... your OS was like a food for thought for me, therefore I just kept on rambling ... I have read your other works too and find you as one of the best writers on this forum ...

Keep up the great job ... Please send me a PM for your next work ... I will always look forward to your beautiful posts ...

Cheers

Bhanu.

P.S.: I am also writing an SS (this is my first ever work). You are welcome to go through it ... let me know you honest thoughts on it ... I will love to hear what a superstar writer thinks of my maiden venture. The link is pasted below.

An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye

aaah how many times i read this story to have enough of your ishita and toshi ji

Raman as your mother, I could have blindly supported you for doing these things, but I stood against you, even slapped you. Does it make you think I love you any less? Tell me."


Raman, that's the mark of a good parent though! Stupid boy why don't you realize, you know you are a good parent when your child hates you sometimes. A child at some point hates their parent, or at least they get angry with you. Were not you angry with me, upset with me all those days when I tried to find you a wife again? Does it mean you stopped loving me or I should have taken your words to heart and left you to your devices? "

these are best parts for me following
couple mental status description >> her silence and distance hurt him more than he can put into words.
and "Will you never forgive me?" He asks her quietly.

"Goodnight Raman."

this man is still kaccha aam as a husband and as parent as well. he needs to understand his son's behavior as well.

i loved your muse ishita bhalla who is so much capable to solve issues in no time that was messed up from ages by her husband

his punishment will be life long 😆 yeeyyy .

sorry for late comment. feeling so much distraction these days reason present track. just reading i feel to do

Awesome...👍🏼

Beautiful OS! Loved it completely. You've described it quite aptly and this might just happen :D :D

One of the excellent stories i have read recently...

Thank you for the PM. Nice work...our strong Ishu is back!