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divya17.8

@divya17.8

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Again an amazing OS from you..👏

loved it..

Hope they show something like this in serial too..

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow this is wonderful.

very well written and amazing because you skipped the whole drama of revelation. It is justa mature and sensible conversation between two adults and their journey which has officially begin to the destiny of trust and honesty.

I higly doubt that the adi matter will solve like this. Even if the matter will get solve calmly how will raman mend the broken trust, thats the biggest question.

I am hating shagun, he is very good at manipulating anyone and even using her own son for her selfish mitive which i am sure will cost her greatly in the future.

Enjoy a lot reading this one shot.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Outstanding...

So glad u wrote this..

Just awesome

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

reserved, i was itching to read something by you on this track.

BRB

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

WOW...beautifully written...exactly what I want to see in the show...

Hope it would happen...thanks for writing!

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Shani

@Shanig123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aani if only I have excess to the writers of the show I will tell them to read your OS . I am so tired of the current track I only take part in LU and don't watch it . I think you know what an emotional person I am .hats off to you my friend you are a great writer I wish you nothing but the very best life has to offer .

I would be really dissapinted if Ishita let's him off the hook this time . Raman and Shagun are both really bad parents in my view . If you don't tell your kids and teach them from wrong to right society will and how does society teach kids ? Drugs ,alcohol stealing etc Once you allow a child to taste what is in the outside world that is it . Child is gone forever . Saying that I only hope they show how Ishita will teach both these ignorant people the value of good parenting . lying in any relationship is not tolerated and should not be accepted . You have a better way of expressing Aani Brilliant .

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arshi33

@arshi33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow!!! Very well written...👏👏

Hope something like this actually happens in the show...😊😊

Bt great work... It was wonderful...👏👍🏼

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Aani Im so glad you wrote!

The Raman you have depicted here, is the Raman i 'see' when I'm watching the show. That is the perception I have of him too. I could waffle on here for ages, but what I loved is that you conveyed his utter surprise and bewilderment that Ishita could ever think that he has cheated on her. I want them to have this conversation onscreen too, because sometimes no matter what our actions may be it's always good to actually verbalise our thoughts and feelings.

ps. lovely quote!😳

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Omg! Well written. Reallyy beautiful update. Loved it totally.

Lets c wts in store for us in the serial. Hope things sort out betwn ishra! Cant see thm in pain.

Keep continuing. Eager to read more. Plsss PM me.. thnkuuu

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

brilliant one-shot...👍🏼

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