Tangled Webs - An IshRa OS

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This is beautiful and a perfect end to this crappy story. I want this track to end exactly like your OS. It's amazing :)

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ishra4ever

@ishra4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

What writing skills! Marvellous. I felt like I was reading a novel written by a professional writer.

The way you expressed their feelings in words is superb to say the least. Keep writing dear.
Pm me too if possible :)

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome OS! 👏

I love the stories you write.

I would just say that, this is something I would like to see in the show. 👍🏼

"First thing first... I do not love Shagun anymore you thickhead. I will never again in my life love her. Next, I will not ever cheat on you or even divorce you no matter how much you drive me up a wall, I might strangle you one day but never divorce you.🤣 You are my wife and that will not change, not in this lifetime. I was hiding things from you and lying to you, I know... I was meeting Shagun because of the accident Ishita. I know it was wrong of me to do that but I... I was."

"I didn't wanna lie to you Ishita but was influenced by Adi' tears; by Shagun stopping me. She said you won't understand since you aren't Adi' mother. I was lying to you, all of you. I was letting you down. All of you trusted me and I deceived all of you... I did it out of my love for Adi. I was not thinking about anyone but him... but when I learned that he is the culprit today I knew, I had to tell you the truth. I do not know what to do Ishita. I just cannot understand what to do. I cannot let my son become a criminal and I cannot punish him. I cannot hand him over to the cops, he is a kid after all and I cannot let him go scot-free too else it will set a bad example to him in the future. Today he did an accident and had no remorse, no guilt; tomorrow he may do worse."

I've been imagining Raman speaking these words, when he's explaining to Ishita about all this.

@red, That suddenly took me out of the serious mode into shock, confusion and then laughter. 😆

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey Aani!

I am loving this Raman who screwed up everything because it will be a treat to watch him earn Ishita's trust. With Ishita and Raman, they repeat incidents. Previously when he was trying to pacify Ishita, it was for Ruhi's sake. I am talking about the Ishita apologising to Adi episode. Now, he will actually try to win her for his sake.

Ishita bit him and it bled?😆 I am still hungover from your previous OS. So, this made me immediately think of love bites.😆☺️

Now coming to the serious part. Your Raman was bang on. He would have coerced and bullied Ishita into telling her troubles but not speak a word of his own. Like I said in your post "Burning The Last Bridge", this is about Raman's trust and final doubts regarding Ishita. This incident will break probably the biggest wall that Raman has built around his heart.

I have always wanted to see Raman's feelings for Ishita. Pure raw emotion because the other times when he did show them they were masked by other factors like Ruhi. I wanted it to be just about him and her. I have a feeling this track will fulfill my wish. I also wanted Ishita to give him the cold treatment which your Ishita did and I loved it. This was exactly the way I imagined and want Ishita to behave when the truth comes out. Even some of our dialogues match.😃

Her idea to take Neil and speak to Adi is brilliant.

I am quite eager to see how Raman will earn her forgiveness. The show's Raman as well as your Raman. *hint hint*😆

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I'm in the same boat as you with the current track and I'm sure many others are as well. I love what you've written as that would be what I want to happen in the show as well. I do not know about the Adi part but the core concept of Raman telling the truth to Ishita and Ishita understanding Raman's difficulties and yet being disappointed at the way he handled this situation is what I hope will be shown soon in the show.