Sturm und Drang - An IshRa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: ABBY92

You have a lovely blend of sensuality, romance and depth in your OS. I really liked how you explained Raman's turmoil in the middle of the night and the end to have Ishita actually going through what Raman went through was perfect !!

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

First off Aani, the OS turned out to be totally unexpected. Let me recap my journey through the story. I first read your note where you mentioned the accident track. now in my hurry to start reading, I didn't pay attention to the complete sentence and assumed the track inspired you.

Hey Sneha sorry to take you by surprise but in my defense, this will now serve to remind you - always read the entire AN from now on 🤣

I was ready for Raman's or Ishita's feelings for each other during that period of how much the other means to them. I straight away went to the story and read Raman was sweating and thought he was probably having a nightmare. But his shower confused me. As far as my reading experience goes night showers meant only one thing. which brings me to the sentence of the story and the paragraph that followed.

He takes himself in hand and lets out a groan

😆 well, right now the dream is also in a way a nightmare to him - since it cannot be realized, okay bad jokes apart sexual dreams sometimes can have a very heightened effect on a person, I read this somewhere - dont ask where 😆 - and for a man who has been celibate for so long and is again desiring a woman, after ages - things would of course take their toll on him.

I was giggling like a teenager throughout.😆 There were 2 things that you wrote about. The thing the sentence implies and the type of dream he had.😉😆. To think that Raman Kumar Bhalla would be reduced to such a state was so amusing.

Well the mighty RKB is a mere mortal too 😉

I loved the kitchen platform scene. It was so exciting to read. I can imagine how awesome it would be if such a scene actually happens in the show. I also loved how Ishita completed the scene in her dream. Aag toh donon taraf lagi hain!😉

Oh I would love for a scene where these two are dealing with their obvious attraction, but neither is ready to given in, rather they are giving their best in this fight - with themselves and each other too, trying to get the other to confess first.

Analysing the way Raman reacts to Ishita it is very obvious that he is falling, if not already, for her hard. The feelings he has for her are beyond description because they are many and have multiple angles. I just can't get enough of reading about them.

Sorry if I bored you with this but your stories always take me on a roller coaster ride and I can't rest till I have let it all out.😳

Never bored reading your thoughts Sneha, its always a pleasure when a reader gives yiu their input and allows you to know all that they thought and felt about your work 😃

Originally posted by: rutu83

fantastic os
confession: i tend to skim over self thoughts usually. but here i loved it!
raman's thoughts were on mark especially the difference between the two marriages- one starting out passionate and ending with pain while other starting out with dislike and moving towards love
really really well written 👏

btw, do you pm?

Originally posted by: Elita

Wow...amazing. Raman's turmoil was highlighted just brilliantly. Loved it 👍🏼

Originally posted by: SilverGold

Reserved.

Originally posted by: Bul3

brilliant is the word!!wow..totally bowled over by your writing..went into a different land altogether!!..amazing OS dear👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Ram-an-tic.Moi

Wow!

I wouldn't even dare to give my two cents on the content of the OS because i'm sure my words would ever be able to do justice to this beautiful piece by you! Aani, this is one of the finest writings i have ever read!

Super-duper-awesome! :)

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Wow this is wonderfully and superbly written.

Both have started dreaming about each other. The fire of jealousy, concern, care and last but not the least love and desire is blazing in the both sides with great intensity.

👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Orangen

GOSH Aani you did come out of your writers block and HOW!!

Fab! Seriously speaking loved the way you handled the hot stuff with so much heart and flesh!

Write more darling! You have got us craving here.

⭐️ Wirklich sehr gut!