Sturm und Drang - An IshRa OS - Page 9

Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Lovely OS yaar... Very nice...

Originally posted by: shalu79

😆 😆 I am not one but know this to be a fact LOL

Originally posted by: ishraforeva

I mean how did u manage to write sch an amazing OS...

SPEECHLESS yaar👏

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Hey Aani ... was extremely caught up with work yesterday so couldn't reply even though I wanted to asap.


Hey Parul no probs, I got late in replying too with the time constraints 😳 and thank you for the comment 😊

Anyways first things first ... love the title !!! I knew what it meant and it just raised my expectations further that this would be an excellent read ... and was right too 😃

so cool so you know German, I dont know the language like I already mentioned but maybe someday would love to learn it and thanks for saying the content lived up to the title 😳

The progress in Ishita-Raman's relationship in your OS is fantastic ...loved the layers of sexual tension, frustration, mischief and some more deeper emotions. Ishita realizing what Raman was going through at the end was just too good 😉

The sirf ruhi ke liye tag has disappeared from the marriage, at least subconsciously it has and somewhere that has led to feelings being evolved on both the sides which obviously leads to attraction... but consciously they cannot bring themselves to accept these feelings, even to themselves... so when you fight against yourselves, your mind is bound to fight back somehow... and I believe dreams are a way to do so, they allow our innermost feelings to surface sometimes 😳 and well Ishita is a smart woman and a wife she had to find out someday, somehow 😉😆

You know one of the things that I like best about your OS's ... you connect the little incidents that had happened since you last wrote and use them to show the progress in their relationship. Love that 👏

Thanks I like maintaining a flow, a connectivity since somehow it also fits with the mold of the character in my head... each episode adds a layer to it.. but it doesn't take anything away 😳 and like you said... maintaining a continuity helps balance things and also show progress which seems natural and real.

Hope to see you write again girl ⭐️

hope to be back soon too 😊

Originally posted by: Live-life

Hello there A!

Yes remember me? Once upon a time I used to comment on your works...I know I know...it's been a while since I have commented but blame life for that! okay...aaj badi mushkil se mauka mila hai to iss naachhez ko maaf karde na...kaan pakad ke sorry 😳

Hey Nabi of course I remember you and hey no blames and all main samajhti hoon yaar no need for explanations and all time is always an issue 😳

Now coming to the update...what can I say...you never fail to surprise me with your writing skills. I mean I know I have said this before but I am going to say it again you inspire me with every word you write Aani. Seriously jitni tareef karo utni kam hai.

thank you ☺️

The way you express your charaters is just beyond amazing. It's like someone kisi bejaan chees mein rooh phook raha ho. I mean...I guess that's the best I can describe it. Especially Raman's character was my favorite in this OS. All his thoughts, feeling, emotions, evrything just came out so clearly to as a reader. All that pain he has been through, the betrayal, the suffering...it was as if I could feel what he felt you know. I know sounds crazy but that is what makes you such a great writer. You truly are an inspiration A! And all the time I do keep repeating this is still less.

You seriously are gonna give me a bloated head with all this appreciation you know, but it really is a pleasure to learn my readers can connect to the RKB in my head, the one I translate on paper.. I feel thats the biggest victory for a writer getting his/her characters to connect with the reader 😳

Now this Ravan Kumar is indeed turning into a pakka amm don;t you think? I mean sure...he still taunts and has that sarcastic comments but one thing is he cares...for Ishita. And he himself told himself that he couldn't get her even if he wanted her. Hmmm,,,,,might wanna recheck that Ravan Kumar. 😉 He is in denial kind of...but it's better late than never.

😆 He is a pakka aam, he just isnt ready to admit it yet, and for a good reason, also as much as I like that he is ripe, I still think there is a little bit more time to go for him to sweeten completely... because he is still battling his demons, healing himself... and unless and until he has made peace with himself no one and nothing can help him. The part of him that holds him back... its gotta go completely to make him ripen and sweeten completely, cos that's his Achilles heel in a way. His own mind is half his obstacle.

And Ishita...kuch kam nahi hai. She cares for him as well, which makes it all the more exciting. Whenever she is asked if she is falling in love again! She denies it as well. Well I don't blame her neither Raman. Both have gone through heart break and betrayal. Time to lage ga na. But she does get affected by his intimacy. Every time he ask is she is falling in love with him she get's affected. And I feel like RAMAN WANTS HER to say yes for some reason. 😉 Hmmm...ye love story hatke hai to pyaar ka izhaar bhi hatke hoga na...desperately waiting for that day to come. Loved that little intimate moment in the kitchen.

Ishita not confessing first despite her growing feelings has a very valid reason... she has been through a very bitter heartbreak after a decade long relationship - longer than even Raman and Shagun' marriage plus the numerous rejections she faced whenever a proposal for marriage came her way not to forget Raman despite showing jealousy, protectiveness and attraction for her has NEVER dropped the subtlest hint as to how he feels for her... she is more petrified than he is... he wears his heart on the sleeve, she is the still water in this relationship, things may rattle her but she wont show it that easy so cracking her would be some job for RKB, but for that he has to first come out of his shell. So yep quite an intriguing scenario is here.

And finally the detective Ishita checks the shower to confirm her suspicion. Hmmm...Lol.

😆 Like I already mentioned to Shalu... all wives are inquisitive by nature and when hubby hides something that curiosity quotient isn't multiplied its squared 😆

This was a great OS...A! I loved it to every word...don't worry this is the last ime I am saying it...for now. 😆 You are an inspiration to me. Love you for that and love for writing such a great piece. So to sum it all Up!

LOVE YOU LOADS!

<3<3<3<3<3👏

Keep writing A!

Thanks N love ya too, I cant get over this lovely comment.

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

Heyya Aani (-Sorry for being blasphemously late!😛-),

Afsana god I am so so sorry I forgot to reply to you and just saw this and had the biggest mortifying moment today so I am the one who needs to say sorry here
Well firstly, kudos to that imagination of yours to those skills at the tip of your fingers and in the grey matter in your skull for pulling this off with such subtle maturity!👏🤗

thank you 😳 🤗

Now, coming back to your post. Mademoiselle, can humans ever control their hormones when the reason igniting him/her is right there in front of his/her eyes? Nope! It rather impetuses the speed!😆
Well you wrote something which the CVs can never show it on screen for reasons i don't have to specify!😆

is this supposed to be a rhetoric question? 🤔😆 yes it is and therefore you know my reply 😉😆

The best part being the fact that when they are lying to each other and when they aren't. That is surely a fact of paramount importance.😳
Everything, from the fights, sexual tension, awkward glances, stupefying moments and obviously the flirting at the end - loved it!

Thank you ☺️ what can I say I love charged moments between the couple I adore.. not everything need be explicit and IshRa can sure as hell manage to convey more in a glance than most couples can manage even with their cliche scenes 😉

I don't think ill ever stop liking and admiring such amazing OSes defining the IshRa relation.
Last but not the least : Your quotes!!!!!! Salute for being so appropriate and also reverence for keeping such a stock because the OSes and their themes tend to differ in someway or the other!👏

thanks Afsana readers like you keep me going each time I begin a new piece and as always I am a quote freak 😆

Do keep these lovely pieces coming Aani, in regular intervals and thank you for the PM!🤗

thanks hon and see ya on the next one 😃🤗

Originally posted by: Autumn.

Please become writer for this show. 😃

Originally posted by: K.K.Monster

Its just beyond words.