Sturm und Drang - An IshRa OS - Page 10

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I wish YOU were writing the screenplay, and scripting the show

It reads like poetry

I will NEVER be able to forget this line from your previous OS

"Agony and Ecstasy, agony because he couldn't touch her, ecstasy because she was ALL HIS"

YOU my friend are a GENIUS

I cannot imagine how your OS will read when they actually consummate

I am more interested in THAT than the show i WATCH

SO CAPTIVATING is your penmanship

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

This one was so different from you other works Aani.. But it was superb..

thanks Anu 😊

You sketched out the physical aspect of his raging emotions for his wife, the turmoil he feels within of not being able to have her and the tad bit darker side of his feelings so well..

A storm of desire is brewing inside him but he can do nothing about it.. He knows he wants his wife.. He isn't just attracted physically but she has him by heart too. In every which way..But he has no other option but to keep it all inside him self..

Honestly I dont even know how this came to me all I knew was that there is this spark that is undeniable when they are together and when he asked her that day is she in love with him - he wanted the answer to be a yes more than anything cos that is what he wanted to tell her as well... and where there is love - there is longing and desire - to surrender and to be surrendered too 😳

I loved the part where he actually admits to himself of how it has all changed between them.. How he used to hate her initially and how he has come to the point where he understands her.. And realizes how she has changed him and his life.. Particularly the bit where a part of him where he thinks and wishes of how things would have been and how happy he would have been had she been the only woman in his life and the mother of is kids.!

He has done it openly compare the two women in his life when he insulted Shagun and praised Ishita before the Galliyan dance so how can he not do it in his mind? How can that comparison not lead to an inevitable thought - what if? 😳

I couldn't help but laugh imagining Raman's plight at Ishu's mere touch.. He is so in love with her.. Poor soul.. The shower didn't help him much afterall.. Back to square one 😆 Their banters are hilarious like always 🤣

😆 of course easier said than done and life is what happens when you are busy making plans

Loved the naughty and teasing Bhalla.. He is dying to hear that yes from her isn't he.?? 😳 Ishu totally turned the game onto him and gave him a taste of his own medicine.😆 Totally loved their conversation.. ❤️

Oh I so wish it happens on the show someday slowly she is catching up too alright like teasing him by calling him a teekha mirch or a bahu... would love to see their banter in a romantic setting neither willing to accept defeat...neither winning too 😉

The best part was of how you started with Raman's dream and ended with Ishu dreaming about him. 😉

Oh she isnt as naive as she is painted out to be after all 😆

Totally loved the OS Aani.! Another OS into my list of your masterpieces..😃 Thanks...

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: columbia

This is how a mature OS must be written take a bow 👏

I read lots of stories on IF in general and this forum very less writers are able to write such subtle ness. Esp mature sexual stories. Hats off to you! Brilliantly done! ⭐️