Sturm und Drang - An IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

beautiful one-shot..nice..😊

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi dear 😊
(sigh) ... gosh this was so passionate ☺️
brilliantly written👏
loved it😳

Originally posted by: redwine1

Aani

a sublime read ...beautifully conceptualised ... beautifully worded ... beautifully expressed ... ok simply beautiful ... no wonder am a fan ..

Keep it coming love

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Aani , I am grinning like crazy over here. Needless to say you are awesome.

The parrying with words - spot on I say.

The subtle undercurrents - well done.

All in all a complete entertainer.

Love

Nidha

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

read it but saving for comments :D

PS: I know I owe you another one for Beneath the Surface ;)

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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Hey Aani

Welcome back to your muse! In a perverse way, I am glad I wasnt the only one suffering. I have written one para each of 2 stories, but cant find more inspriration. and for practical reasons, i cannot 'guess' the end of the accident mystery, if I want to base my story in the current track. So I just stopped writing.

LOL thanks for letting me know Lucky I wasnt the lone traveler in my boat. so the pleasure is mine as well 😛😆 and I so know what it feels like... I have some drafts and they are useless to me since I cant continue beyond the first few lines 😳

anyway, you are back 😊

So, this is the second time you have touched upon a delicate aspect of Raman's desires. The first one was a more practical problem (which triggerred a discussion between us about how the show should also address it, about how a man could have stayed celibate for so long) and now this one (i think you know which line I am talking about). Those are the real real-life things that won't be shown for obvious reasons, but I am glad you wrote about them.

For the slot the show has, I wish it would even if subtly touch issues which are very real and humane but since it wont and cant - we are there having a field day by ourselves 😆 yep its a subject which is very real and practical to think about - a healthy attractive man in his prime cannot be completely asexual... not when he notices all the things about his wife

Now that I said that 😉 lets come back to the rest of it. WOW, so in your writing you have taken them to a place where BOTH of them are aware of their own desires, and the effect the other person is having on them. Honestly Aani, I cannot wait for this to be show in the serial. It would provide SO MUCH entertainment for us fans.

If they show this on the show... oh man would it be a delight @bold -🤣🤣 I CANT .. really cant in good conscious elaborate on this not when kids could be reading this 😉
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You have beautifully integrated the EV promotions, the dialogues from the episodes and obviously the 'inner' thoughts of both of them. Sid is her friend 😛 you know how much I like that premise 😉

Thank you and 😆 I was inspired by YOU while writing this, having him be her friend AND patient. 😳

I like this Raman. Something has woken up inside him, but he is not sure if he is allowed to act on it. I can see his self-control vanishing, and I can see his fear slowly disappearing. and I can see KP enact this Raman perfectly!


Oh he sure will and I think gradually he is coming on screen as well 😉
Here goes a quote for you 😃

"Sometimes I think the difference between what we want and what we're afraid of is about the width of an eyelash." - Jay McInerney

Such a beautiful quote Lucky thank you 😃

Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...

beautifully written Aani 👍🏼👏

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

yaa very true. Being one of them I know.😉😆🤣

Originally posted by: Shanig123

You have a blessing from above to write my dear .. This was one of your best . I read it maybe 3 times now and still not tired nor bored . I cant fathom out who will confess out of these 2 because they are very strong personalities or would there be a confession because this is a mature kinda love story so they may show us in a very un expected very unusual way ...I wonder ..lets see

But as for you Aani You are one heck of a Writer ... Keep writing ..

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

OH.MY.GOD Aani! 😲 😲

Hey Vanny 😊 first of all thanks a lot for commenting, its always so good to hear from a silent reader 😃

You wrote this soo well! When I read the second quote, I was like. "Where is Aani going with this? 😲" By the time I reached the cold shower, I was literally blushing. ☺️ And when I read the *ahem ahem* part, I was thanking God for reading this in privacy! 🤣

😆 😆 the quotes were apt what can I say 😆 and as for @italic -LOL I forgot to add the disclaimer for this one in my rush sorta will be careful to add it IF I tread in the same zone again 😉

But seriously, emotions (LMAO) aside, this was fantastic! I loved the way you addressed this natural issue. As much as we go on loving the intense passion between them and the (un)seen frustration, relief is necessary as well. 😛

Yep... I believe its being prudish if we just ignore natural human reactions - and for a show which deals with even innuendos with a certain class and tongue in cheek humor I cant wait to see when and IF they ever tackle this subect

The cherry on top was Ishita having the same dream after their encounter! 😉 And once again, so natural! I loved the way she connected the dots and not just assume he was "hot". 😆

LMAO... should I actually respond to that 😆😆 and well women can have dreams too is all I will say on the subject 😉

I think if I say more, I will royally embarrass myself, so I'll stop. 🤣

Awesome stuff and I'm happy to be reading your work once again! 👏

Thanks Vanny for this delightful comment and I so hope to hear from you when I post something next 😊