IshRa SS : Mujhe Haq Hai....Kyunki it's Destiny! (Part 3, PG 11) - Page 3

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Amazing piece of writting the story was soo good and the hindi dialogues that english dialogues did not really matter much
Ishita wore a saree will washing her hair weird maybe she knew raman was coming hehe
U write novels like professional ones soo amazing
Loved the shower scene
Just too good

Thanks a ton dear😳.
@bold : He he...the saree part..actually I dint want to go further in wildness and besharmi at my 1st attempt. Hence, this 'Sati sadbhi pan'😆!!
@ Red : OMG! The best compliment till now. I never thought that someone would think like this and that too in my first attempt. Thanks again dear.

Originally posted by: komsy7856

Wow tanni very cute n hot os 😆 plz continue, would love to read from u dear 👏 😊

Thanks dear😃. He he...tried to make it hot. And, now it's up to you reader friends😆.

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Taani, that OS was so awesome!⭐️

Hot , cute and sweet at the same time. Very good work!😉👏

Your english translation was good too.😃

Actually, I didn't understand exactly what she was doing. Was she taking a bath or just washing her face. She had foam on her face, but she still was in her saree.😲

Then I thought to chuck those thoughts and just enjoy the OS. 🤣

Raman : Pata hain tumhe (keeping his back to her)...maine aise romance meri ex wife se bhi nahi kiye? Par tumse hogaya.

He tries to give a fake smile.

I could completely imagine that moment and Raman's expressions. 😭

But yes, whatever happened with IshRa, happened becuase it's their DESTINY.

Thanks a lot dear. Loved the feedback with pointing faults.
About @bold : I told it in my previous comment that I dint want to make it a very bold one at my first time. And, as Ishita is kinda simple girl, I thought of it's better keeping her in saree with some hot tadka😆.

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

as a first

story of urs

it was awesome

good try yrrr

Thanks a lot dear😊.

its awesome...
yeaa u r r8 . its sooo difficult ...ami ja vabsi ta onno akta vasai prokas kora... tar jonnoe ami amar lekha gula pst korte parsi na...:(

but i mst say u r rely a superb writer...

OMGG!!! wt a storyy!! hayeee. bathroom story.. loved itt.. awesumm!!!!

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

awesome :)

Thanks😊.

Originally posted by: tinni55

its awesome...
yeaa u r r8 . its sooo difficult ...ami ja vabsi ta onno akta vasai prokas kora... tar jonnoe ami amar lekha gula pst korte parsi na...:(

but i mst say u r rely a superb writer...

Wow...tumio Bangali. Great. Yup...it's bit difficult though.😳
Thanks a lot dear😃.

Originally posted by: avni_19

OMGG!!! wt a storyy!! hayeee. bathroom story.. loved itt.. awesumm!!!!

keepp continuinggg...

Thanks dear😃.
What to do...Who knows when we can see such scene in the show😉.

Originally posted by: aniiee

Cute and hot😆

Thanks😊.