IshRa SS : Mujhe Haq Hai....Kyunki it's Destiny! (Part 3, PG 11)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first ever attempt of writing any story on IshRa or any other couple. I haven't tried ever before. Though I compose novels in Bengali, as a Bangla speaking person, I find it difficult to wordify some things in English. Still, I am trying this for the first time only because of IshRa and for you friends.

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Mujhe Haq Hai...Kyunki it's Destiny!


Part 1 : The Destined Mistake

Raman : Ishita, Ishita. Uff Kaha Gayi yeh Jhansi Ki Rani?(Where is this Joan of Arc?).

Raman enters his bedroom in search of Ishita and in extreme irritation. He searches for something here and there. He is all wet due to sweating. His car's AC wasn't working properly. He has to fix it immediately.

He monologues.

Raman : Where is my towel? Kabhi bhi mujhe aapni cheese thik se nahi milta hain. Mujhe cheese aaspaas rakhna pasand hain. Aur, meri biwi hain..isse toh safai aur cheese aapni aapni jayge me rakhne ki bimari hain. Pagal aurat.

(I can't find my things properly ever. I want my things to be just around me. But, my wife...she has a mania of cleanliness and orderliness. Mad woman).

Raman makes faces.

Raman : Main ek businessman hoon. Arre yaar, mujhe itni waqt kaha hain ke main har cheese dhoond dhoond ke use karoo? Dimag karhai ki tarha garam horaha hain. Aur, lecture wali gayab hain.

(I am a businessman. Do I have much time to waste in searching my things and use it then? My brain is just boiling like a pan on stove. And, the lecture girl is missing).

Raman : Ishita Ishita...o meri Jhansi Ki Rani. Aabhi kya tum behre bhi ho gayi ho?

(Ishita..Ishita...o my Joan of Arc. Are you even deaf now?)

He gives up searching for Ishita. He again keeps searching for his towel in his cupboard and in the whole room. He needs to freshes up immediately. Most possibly he wants to take a bath. But without towels, how can he go to bathroom? Suddenly he thinks.

Raman : Offf. Towel to bathroom me ho sakte hain. Shayad jaldi jaldi me bhulgaya maine laane me. Lemme check there.

(Towel is in bathroom perhaps. Perhaps, I forgot to bring that due to hurriedness.)

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Next the incidents shift to Ishita, who is in bathroom. She is also taking shower as she had to leave very early in the morning for her clinic. She couldn't take proper shower that time. That's why now she thought of doing it. She is wearing only saree without blouse.

Ishita monologues...

Ishita : Arre...yeh Raman ki awaaz hain na??? Kya mic jaisa awaz hain. Main iss bathroom me rehkar bhi sun sakti hoon. Saach mein Ravan Kumar hain. Aagar main chillake kuch boli bhina, usse aapni baato se phursot mile tab hi sunega na!!

(Arre...isn't this Raman's voice? What a voice...just like mic. I can hear him even being in the bathroom. Truly he is Raval Kumar. Even if I try to answer by shouting he can't hear me as he is blabbering himself.)

She keeps applying soap.

Ishita : Iss aadmi ko aapni kam se hi sirf matlab hain. Kya pata aabhi yeh mujhe hi dhoondh raha hain kissi jaroorat se. Main pagal thi ke iss pagal kam wala se shadi kar baithe. Kitna chillati hain ye kharrus? Aabhi bhi chalraha hain. Jaise ke mere naam lenepe unka dil me ghanti baj jate hain. Kudkud Kumar kahika.

(This man only bothers about his work. Who knows..may be he is calling me now for his need. I was mad that I married this workaholic man. How much this man shouts? It's still going on. Like that he gets excited taking my name.)

Ishita is irritated and opens the shampoo bottle.

Ishita : Agar main koi kaam karne ko kahi to, kitni sawal or taunt to inki shaan hain. Iss Bully Kumar se maine kahithi ke bathroom ki door ka lock kharab hain. Thik karaiyen na...Kehte hain ke tum karalo. Arre, inki familiar koi repairman hoga issliye maine puchatha. Agar main khud se karne jati ya main koi repairman lati to bhi mujhe hi sunna parta. Shukar hain..iss bathroom sirf woh or main use karti hoon, warna darr darr ke rehna padta.

(If I tell him to do any tasks, he asks so many questions and also taunts like it's his pride. I told this Bully Kumar that the bathroom door lock is damaged. Repair it. He tells me to make it repair. Arre, I thought they may have any familiar repairman from before, that's why I asked. If I would have done by myself or called any repairman, he wouldn't forget to taunt me again. Thanks God that only me and he use this bathroom. Otherwise, I would have always have to be scared.)

She applies shampoo...suddenly she is nervous and thinks what if Raman comes to use the bathroom now.

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Just then, the door lock cracks. She hears the sound. Her face is covered with shampoo foam. She can't open her eyes. Still tries to find the mug. She stops suddenly cos she hears a footstep approaching. Her heart is beating like a drum.

The footsteps stop. It was of none other than Raman. He has come here to take shower and also to find the towel. His mouth opens making a 'A' shape. He is stunned, shocked, surprised, excited, nervous seeing wet, sexy Ishita in a transparent saree without blouse. He can't take his eyes off nor can he open his mouth. He is feeling like his heart has stopped working. He can't hear anything, he can't see anything, he can't feel anything. Only thing he can realize is now he is in a danger zone of his heart. He can only see a beautiful, divine, sexy woman is infront of him...and that too none other than his Jhansi Ki Rani. He can only hear her deep breath.

Ishita is still nervous. She manages to say ''Who is it''?

To it Raman murmurs ''What the...", he can't complete it. Before that Ishita shouts, but her voice can't reach out of the bathroom. Raman is back to his senses but partially.

Ishita manages to get the mug and throw water on her eyes. Seeing Raman, she is in a fix. She tries to get the towel in a hurry to cover herself. But, she can't get it. It falls on the bucket full of water. She gets even more nervous. She tries to get the towel of Raman in other corner of the hanger. But, before she does that Raman comes forward to her. She slips suddenly in an attempt to back off. Raman catches her by her bare waist. By that hot, sudden, shocking touch she gets a cold shiver on her spine. She gets straight abruptly.

And, Raman pushes her to the wall. She can't move now. Or she doesn't want to. She can't take her eyes from Raman's intense, deep look. And, Raman is again out of the materialistic world. It's only him and her. There is no wind blowing, but he is feeling like wind is washing his body with freshness, washing his mind with love. He is lost in her beauty..oops wet beauty. He gazes over her body from top to toe intensely. He comes more closer. This time his almost bare chest touches her chest covered with that wet transparent saree.

Ishita is all wet. But, she is boiling out of sexual tension. Water is dripping from her hair on all over her body. She forgets to take breath. She can't take it anymore. She closes her eyes and tears come down off her eyes.

Raman, after a long time can feel the situation. He takes his hand off from her waist. He wipes her tears. Ishita opens her eyes.

Raman : Ishita, darr kyun rahi hoon? Kya hua hain? Main tumhara pati hoon..legally. Aur mujhe...haq hain.

(Ishita, why are you scared? What happened? I am legally your husband. And, I have all rights over you.)

Suddenly he realizes what he told. He corrects it.

Raman : Par main iss haq nahi jataunga. Shayad, kabhi nahi.

(But, I won't enforce this right. Perhaps never.)

A big drop of tears come down by her eyes. He leaves her. He goes far from her. They share an intense eyelock again...both are speechless. Raman's eyes are teary. Raman back offs slowly and turns back from the bathroom. Before leaving Raman is back to his full senses and think of making pranks on Ishita.

Raman : Ishita...umm..tum bahoot hot lagrahi ho. Mujhe lagta hain tumhe aaksae aise kapre padna chahiye. Tab koi tumhe behenji nahi keh payeha.

He smirks.

(Ishita, you are looking very hot. I think you should wear such types of dresses even outside. Then, no one will call you 'Behenji'.)

Ishita is stunned.

Suddenly Raman's face seems sad.

Raman : Pata hain tumhe (keeping his back to her)...maine aise romance meri ex wife se bhi nahi kiye? Par tumse hogaya.

He tries to give a fake smile.

(Do you know I never had such romance with my ex wife even. But, I have with you.)

He turns backward to her. They again share an eye lock. This time...it's a sad one, both wanting to know each others' answer and feelings.

Raman : Do you know why?

He pauses.

Raman : Ishita, do you believe in Destiny? This is destiny.

Raman leaves the bathroom. Ishita is standing like frozen. She keeps looking at Raman going. Raman doesn't turn again.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index :

Part 1 : The Destined Mistake
Part 2 : I am Sorry
Part 3 : Teasing and all
Part 4 : It's all about Destiny
Part 5 :
Part 6 :
Part 7 :

Edited by DivAniTanni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow! That was awesome! 👏 And hot! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the first story Tanni...

Res for now. Will update in a few hours.

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Hey Tanni

very good for a first attempt!!! and great job in adding the english and hindi versions both. I read both of them, only because the humour is different in both versions

Are you planning to continue? you should... i'd like to see where it is headed. and the ending was so sudden... from a hot story, it turned into a deep one...so you should continue now😃
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tanni tanni itne din kahan thi..you write soo awesomely pata hain 😳 😳

Haha i love the way raman and ishita was talking about each other while searching for the towel and taking a bath respectively..it was soo cute and funny 😆 😆

And then the bathroom scene

I love what raman said about the destiny thing 😃 😃

Tanni you know what...you should definitely continue this...sachii sachii about their POV and also a conversation...think about it..you rock ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Thank you soo much and continue writing 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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TANNI, well written.I really enjoyed reading it.pls write again and again.
Beautifully u explained their conversation.👏
Poor RAMAN😭😭😭, i dont know for how long he will control.😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arrey Wah Tanni dear!! Hot and cute OS 😆 Very good for first time!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH mY God first thing i have no idea u r good writer too ur os is awesome n indeed hot loved it if u wanna add further u can ur start is quiet appealing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing piece of writting the story was soo good and the hindi dialogues that english dialogues did not really matter much
Ishita wore a saree will washing her hair weird maybe she knew raman was coming hehe
U write novels like professional ones soo amazing
Loved the shower scene
Just too good
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Wow tanni very cute n hot os 😆 plz continue, would love to read from u dear 👏 😊

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