IshRa SS : Mujhe Haq Hai....Kyunki it's Destiny! (Part 3, PG 11)

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Taani, that OS was so awesome!⭐️

Hot , cute and sweet at the same time. Very good work!😉👏

Your english translation was good too.😃

Actually, I didn't understand exactly what she was doing. Was she taking a bath or just washing her face. She had foam on her face, but she still was in her saree.😲

Then I thought to chuck those thoughts and just enjoy the OS. 🤣

Raman : Pata hain tumhe (keeping his back to her)...maine aise romance meri ex wife se bhi nahi kiye? Par tumse hogaya.

He tries to give a fake smile.

I could completely imagine that moment and Raman's expressions. 😭

But yes, whatever happened with IshRa, happened becuase it's their DESTINY.

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
Amazing piece of writting the story was soo good and the hindi dialogues that english dialogues did not really matter much
Ishita wore a saree will washing her hair weird maybe she knew raman was coming hehe
U write novels like professional ones soo amazing
Loved the shower scene
Just too good

Exactly my thoughts.😆

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

as a first

story of urs

it was awesome

good try yrrr

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Oh wow! That was awesome! 👏 And hot! 😳

Thanks dear😃.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Congrats on the first story Tanni...

Res for now. Will update in a few hours.

***EDITED
Hey Tanni

very good for a first attempt!!! and great job in adding the english and hindi versions both. I read both of them, only because the humour is different in both versions

Are you planning to continue? you should... i'd like to see where it is headed. and the ending was so sudden... from a hot story, it turned into a deep one...so you should continue now😃

Thank you so much Lucky. Getting these compliment from a good writer like is something else yaar.
Umm...I dint plan to continue. But, seeing the responses, I am thinking of converting this OS in SS😆.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Tanni tanni itne din kahan thi..you write soo awesomely pata hain 😳 😳

Haha i love the way raman and ishita was talking about each other while searching for the towel and taking a bath respectively..it was soo cute and funny 😆 😆

And then the bathroom scene

I love what raman said about the destiny thing 😃 😃

Tanni you know what...you should definitely continue this...sachii sachii about their POV and also a conversation...think about it..you rock ⭐️

Thank you soo much and continue writing 🤗 🤗

Awww...Bharati yaar🤗. Thank you soo much. I dint know that I can write like this. I never thought that I will write a story and that too will be kinda this hot😳.
Yup...yaar. I'll most probably continue this.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tushara11
TANNI, well written.I really enjoyed reading it.pls write again and again.
Beautifully u explained their conversation.👏
Poor RAMAN😭😭😭, i dont know for how long he will control.😊😊

Thanks a lot Tushra😃. Haan...Raman's self controlling patience should be broken in few days in the show😛.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome OS...👍🏼

Thanks dear😊.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ran2012
Arrey Wah Tanni dear!! Hot and cute OS 😆 Very good for first time!!!

Thank you so much Jani Di😳😃.

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dark.lig8
OH mY God first thing i have no idea u r good writer too ur os is awesome n indeed hot loved it if u wanna add further u can ur start is quiet appealing

Aww...thanks a ton buddy🤗.

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