IshRa SS : Mujhe Haq Hai....Kyunki it's Destiny! (Part 3, PG 11) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
This was a really good OS! I liked how it had both the sensuous side and a deeper real side to IshRa's story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was absolutely phenomenal! Very bold LOL
Written very well. You've decided to continue this? great!
I was wondering where you'd gone off to. Haven't you written on IshRa before this? I can't recall :P
Anyway, I kinda wanted such a scene but obviously it cannot be shown on tv. A man can very easily be caught naked in the shower but not a woman? However, ye baat toh hai ki we are super careful always :D
But hum gutter minded logon key liye toh humari imagination hi kaafi hai.
I loved how you transformed Raman(whom I almost cursed for being such a sleaze ball) into a pretty considerate and sentimental husband.
Btw, I'm kinda inclined toward the idea of my guy closing his eyes and turning around faster than lightning( at least at such a stage during the relationship) but Raman Kumar toh exceptional hai yaar. So no worries.
Thanks for what you wrote. Reading two mature OSs on IshRa today has sent my gutter mind to heaven!
Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pscmp

khub sundor likhecho...amar bhison bhalo lageche...forum a bangali bondhu der lekha dekhla khub bhalo lage...😊


Dhonnobad bondhu🤗. Haa...its feels something proud😛.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ABBY92

This was a really good OS! I liked how it had both the sensuous side and a deeper real side to IshRa's story.


Thank you so much dear😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

That was absolutely phenomenal! Very bold LOL
Written very well. You've decided to continue this? great!
I was wondering where you'd gone off to. Haven't you written on IshRa before this? I can't recall :P
Anyway, I kinda wanted such a scene but obviously it cannot be shown on tv. A man can very easily be caught naked in the shower but not a woman? However, ye baat toh hai ki we are super careful always :D
But hum gutter minded logon key liye toh humari imagination hi kaafi hai.
I loved how you transformed Raman(whom I almost cursed for being such a sleaze ball) into a pretty considerate and sentimental husband.
Btw, I'm kinda inclined toward the idea of my guy closing his eyes and turning around faster than lightning( at least at such a stage during the relationship) but Raman Kumar toh exceptional hai yaar. So no worries.
Thanks for what you wrote. Reading two mature OSs on IshRa today has sent my gutter mind to heaven!


Thank you sooo much yaar🤗. Yup, will continue. Writing the 2nd part😳.
Nope, I haven't written any story ever on IF. This is my first time and that too on IshRa. I am feeling proud thinking that.
Hmm...this scene can't be shown in TV exactly like this. But, in a decent way, if CVs want can show such and make it bold😉.
Yup...RKB is different. He never wants to lose na😆!
Wow...that's great that I could rise the gutter feelings on you at least a lil bit with my writing😉😛.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Heya sorry for the delayed comment buttruely an awesome write up dear... Pls continue it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

Heya sorry for the delayed comment buttruely an awesome write up dear... Pls continue it...


Thanks dear😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi friends, I am back with the 2nd part of this SS. I started this as OS. But, seeing great responses from you all and on your cute requests, I decided to continue this. So, updated the 2nd part😳.


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Part 2 : I am Sorry


Ishita sees Raman leaving the bathroom. She is still standing like a statue. She can't move even a lil bit. Her eye lashes aren't even moving. She is like in a state of mystery, confusion, denial, disbelief, dream. She can't realize what actually happened just now. She can't decide what to do now. She is just too much vulnerable now to be in a normal state.
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Raman, on the other side, just rushed to get out of the bathroom. He comes back to his room. He is stumbling, he is sweating, he taking quick breath, he is feeling nervous, he is having goose bumps. He just is feeling some uncontrollable things. He is tried hard to be again the Raman Kumar Bhalla. But, things are not in his control. He enters the bedroom and for self control he punches on the door. He gets hurt.
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After ages, Ishita is back to reality again. Inspite of being wet, she is also sweating. Her hair is still almost covered with shampoo foam. She gets back to senses and completes her bath. But, her body doesn't want to move. She is forcing herself to do so. After few minutes she completed her bath.
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Raman is sitting on his bed with the wound on his hand. He isn't feeling the pain of the injury. He is still lost in the thoughts about whatever happened some minutes ago. Ishita gets out of the bathroom. And, very slowly she heads to her room. She is hesitating to enter the room. She can't even imagine to go back to Raman and look at him. She doesn't know what this feeling is. It's not anger, it's not agony, it's not irritation, it's not hatred...it's what!!! No answer to herself even. She masters courage and enters the room. Raman is shocked to see her. He tries to move his face aside. He wants to hide his feelings and his awkwardness. He is looking at the window. Ishita's head was down. She slowly raises his head and look at Raman. She is blushing like tomato. This time she isn't covered in tomato outfit, she is herself looking like a tomato. Raman is still looking at other side. While looking at him, Ishita sees his hand. It's bleeding, though not that deep injury. She forgets everything...her confusion, awkwardness, hesitation...everything, seeing Raman's injury.

She rushes infront of him. She touches his hand. Raman kinda jumps on his bed feeling the soft touch. His heart is beating faster this time. He looks at her and forgets to even say something. He has shivers from his spine. He is feeling the same as Ishita felt inside the bathroom. He abruptly takes his hand away from her hand. Ishita is shocked at his behavior. But, she is Jhansi Ki Rani... stubborn like a hard rock. She gets up and gets the first aid box. She again takes his hand in her hand and this time she holds it so tightly that Raman is feeling pain in his injury. But, he doesn't have the courage and strength to get rid of Ishita's hold. His mind is not allowing him to do so. Ishita bandages on his hand and puts his hand down abrupty. Raman is really surprised to see her this avatar. She keeps the box in its place and starts drying her hair with towel. Raman is still staring at her like a fool. He can't understand what happened that she became angry.
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Meanwhile, when Ishita was using the towel to get rid of excess water from her hair, some drops of water dripped to Raman's face. He closed his eyes. He smelled the droplets. He felt to himself that these droplets are not some normal ones, it has special charm like Ishita has. His previous feeling arouse again. But, this time it's only an impressive feelings from his side for her. He again stares at Ishita, but with a romantic look. Ishita is standing by her backside to Raman. She dint notice what happened behind her. Her this normal act made her Ravan Kumar the romantic Bhalla, she dint realize that. And, for her utter surprise, she dint even realize what is gonna happen next.

Raman gets up from the bed and gradually moves towards Ishita. Seems like another beautiful mistake is gonna happen. He holds her hand. Ishita is again feeling nervous.

She thinks to herself

Ishita : Aaj inne hua kya hain? Ravan Kumar se Romantic Kumar kaise ban gaye? Ayyo Muruga...no please. Mujhse yeh emotional attyachar aur sehen nahi honge.

(What happened to him today? How did he become Romantic Kumar from Ravan Kumar? O God...no please, Don't torture me emotionally again.)

She is lost in deep thoughts.

Suddenly Raman turns her back to him face to face. And, then what? Another eyelock!! The impressed Raman Bhalla and nervous Ishita Bhalla. They dint realize how long this strange eyelock lasted. But, this time Raman controlled himself much more quicker than in the bathroom. Ishita drops her sight down. Raman is in sarcasm mood again.

Raman : Ishita, arre tum itni darr kyun jati ho? Mujhe toh laga, tum jhansi ki rani ho. Main toh tumhe hamesha talwar aur ghore pe imagine karta hoon. Lekin aaj to tum mujhe ful or khargosh ki saath nazar aarahi ho. Lagta hain, mere aakho me problem hain.

(Ishita, arre, why are you being so scared? I thought you are the Joan of Arc. I keep imagining you with sword and on horses. But, I can see you today with flowers and with some rabbits. Seems like, I have eye problems.)

Ishita is back again in her Jhansi ki Rani mood to teach him. She dint realize that her Ravan Kumar wanted her to be normal and back to the same fighting mood again.

Ishita : Haan haan...jiski jaisi soch, who to aise hi dekhe ge na! Iss hisab se aapki aabhi ki soch sahi hain. Kyun ki main hu hi inti pyari, jaise aap aabhi sochrahe ho.

(Yeah, yeah...you will see as your thought is na! Considering this, your thoughts about me is right at this moment. Cos, I am this lovely always the way you are thinking.

Raman : Pyari ki nikal padi Ferrari (in a very low voice)...Yeh lo...madam toh ful gayi. Mujhe laga main aapko taunt marrahi ho...

(Lovely is taking out Ferrari. See...made is boasting. I thought I was teasing you.)

Ishita : Pad gaya na aapni chal aappe hi bhari.

(You fell in your own trap.)

Raman : Haan..main samajh gaya ke tumhe samajhe ne ke liye mujhe psychology ki history samajhna padega.

(Yeah, I understood that for understanding you, I need to understand the history of human psychology.)

Ishita : Chalo...Der ayye durust aaye. Mujhe bhi pata chalgaya ke aapki dimag me sirf paise ugalne wala fertilizer nahi, insaano ko samajhne wala gobar bhi hain.

(Good...better late than never. I too now know that your brain doesn't revolve around only business and money, it can also understand human minds also.)

Raman makes faces. Ishita smiles and is about to leave the room.

Raman again holds her hand and grabs her slowly towards him.

Raman : Ishita, mujhe kuch kehna hain.

(Ishita, I want to say something.)

Ishita is confused, yet very keen to know what he says.

Raman : I...I am sorry Ishita.

Ishita looks bit upset, but also wonders why he is saying sorry.

Ishita : Sorry...kyun?

(Why sorry?)

Raman : Umm...jo bhi hua...mera matlab, I mean, bathroom...I mean bathroom me jo bhi hua...uski liye I am sorry.

(Umm...whatever happened, I mean, in bathroom, for that.)

Ishita seems to understand the situation. She doesn't tell anything. She looks down on the floor.

Raman : Mujhe pata hi nahi chala yeh kaise ho gaya, kyun hua. It's just...I donno happened. Yeh hona nahi chahiye tha, I know. Par, kuch cheese humari control se bahar hota hain. Hum kuch nahi karsakte hain. Wo kehte hain na heat of the moment...bageira. Yeh uss tarha ki kuch tha. Umm...I think you can understand it na! Main phir se sorry hoon, agar tumhe aabhi lagta hain ke yeh mujhse bahoot bara galti hogaya.

(I dint realize how this happened, why this happened. This shouldn't have happened, I know. But, some things are out of our control. We can't do anything. This is what says na heat of moment type things. If you think that I have done a grave mistake, I am sorry again.)

Raman looks bit guilty. Ishita keeps staring at him.

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Sorry, this part is a bit short😳. Sorry for any typos and wording. Hope you like this.

Edited by DivAniTanni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
oye hoye Taani u updated it
but very bad PM kyun nahi kiya ...huh
ab u have to compensate wid long update next time😛

very nice update...
u beautifully wrote both's feelings and inner turmoil , that dhakkans don't able to understand...
and then later he trying to make things normal by trying to get JKR back... and his sorry... he is really sweet... waiting to see Ishita's reaction ...
superb update Taani...loved it
Edited by FieryLioness - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: FieryLioness

oye hoye Taani u updated it

but very bad PM kyun nahi kiya ...huh
ab u have to compensate wid long update next time😛

very nice update...
u beautifully wrote both's feelings and inner turmoil , that dhakkans don't able to understand...
and then later he trying to make things normal by trying to get JKR back... and his sorry... he is really sweet... waiting to see Ishita's reaction ...
superb update Taani...loved it


I actually don't want to disturb you all with PMs😳.
Aw...so sweet of you Meet. I always love you appreciations😳. Thank you sweets😛.
Next time, it will be a long update, pakka.

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